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Chapter 16
Bette looked around the house as soon as she got up. It took her a while to realize Tina wasn’t there. She must have gotten up early and left to go to work.
On her way to the kitchen, she grabbed the cordless phone, dialling Tina’s cell as she turned on the coffee maker.
“Good morning,” Tina answered, aware from the number who was calling.
“You snuck out!” Bette said. “I didn’t even have a conversation with you.”
“I had to go home to get a change of clothes,” Tina laughed. “I had nothing and I had to go to work.”
“I can’t remember the last time I slept that well,” Bette said.
“I slept well, just not long enough,” Tina replied. “I’m at my desk already.”
“Last day though, then some freedom,” Bette said.
“Are you up to anything tonight?” Tina asked.
“I’m spending the evening at home,” Bette replied. “I have a little work to do, but I might just relax with a glass of wine and do some reading before bed.”
“So if I am able to call later, you’ll be around?” Tina asked.
“I will be, yes,” Bette replied. “Is there a time I can expect a call?”
“How’s seven?”
“It’s great for me, I’m usually home by 5:30 on Fridays,” Bette replied.
“I’ll talk to you later then,” Tina said. “I really should get back to work.”
Bette set the phone down and smiled, surprised at the connection that was so apparent between them.
Tina sighed at the list of last minute details she had to work though that day. The earlier she started, the earlier she would finish.
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At exactly seven o’clock, Bette’s home phone rang.
She glanced at the caller id to ensure it was who she expected, and answered.
“Hey you,” Bette said.
“It’s so great to hear your voice,” Tina replied.
“You don’t sound tired at all,” Bette said. “After the week you’ve had I thought you’d be out of energy.”
“I’m just getting my second wind,” Tina said. “I think I’m going to be here all night.”
“Really?” Bette asked. She couldn’t hide the disappointment in her voice.
“If it wasn’t important, I wouldn’t be here,” Tina said. “Are you going to stay home?”
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great story and thanks JKS!
GREAT story swimmie!!
Ahhh. Loved it. Thanks for the story, swimmie. Mayhap, if you get a rainy day or two, we’ll see a get a few “quickies” (as Lament says) from you. ;) Have a great summer yourself, and thanks again.
such a beautiful ending, but I thought that you had a lot of things to write in this story, anyway you can always do a sequel, this story very sweet and warm, very much close to the heart, thank you for sharing it dear, and very excited for what’s coming next.Love
This was a lovely story, JKS ! I truly loved it. In fact, I’m a bit sad this is ending, but I understand… Once again, thank you so much for sharing this jewel with us. You’re a wonderful wonderful storyteller.
Sweet story and one that I hate to see end. I’m such a sucker for sweet stories like this and you do them so well. Really have enjoyed this story and hope you come back to us with a SEQUEL. We understand you need a break. Have fun this summer!!!.
What a fab story! Good luck with your summer and hope to see you back with a B&T interlude whenever the moment may take you!
I have loved this story since the first chapter. I am sorry that you ended it, however, I understand that in life other things have to be more important. Please post another story when you can. You are a wonderful writer.
That was a great ending to a lovely story. Enjoy your summer.
This was a great story, but I can’t believe that’s the end. Sad!
Great chemistry, Great story, sorry to see it end. Have a wonderful summer.
JKS, you are a wonderful writer and story teller. I hope you consider a sequel to this story while you’re outside soaking up the sunshine this summer. And if you feel the urge and miss us…drop in a snippet or two and say hi! Have fun!!!!!
Swimmie, always an excellent read, so sweet, you have a great summer and enjoy the great outdoors. Thank you for your great story. Md
Swimmie – fabulous as always. You capture the chemistry between them so well. Enjoy your summer, and I look forward to more when the opportunity presents itself.
Love this story but you can’t end it there…I hope there is a new series picking up where this left off??
Hate to see it end but loved the story. Thanks!
I thoroughly enjoyed this story about the beginning of Bette and Tina’s relationship. I hope this is the end of this chapter and the beginning of the next phase of Bette and Tina. :)
I hope you’ll be back with more soon. Enjoy the summer!
Thanks for the story. We’re always blown away by your writing. Keep um coming.
That was great and so cute, love them.
What may be an evening (weekend?) treat for Bette is a morning treat for me. But…(the end). Does that mean (the end), or does that mean (the end of this installment). My wee little brain is having trouble grasping the meaning of (the end), and will be missing these fun little snippets of story. But if it’s (the end), good luck with all and enjoy the summer.
We can always count on you to deliver…and once again you did. Lovely story…Thanks!!
very cute!! why the end?? why? they shall go on and on them two!
The end, we don’t get to see where all that flirting and waiting ended up? In any case it was a great story but that seems to be the norm for you! Enjoy your summer! Drop us a few stories when you can!
Great surprise, swim! Just lovely! Thanks so much for taking the time! Enjoy the outdoors! :)
Swimmie..you are absolute perfection when it comes to this writing thing…; ) You enjoy the summer and if you happen to throw us a bone here and there, you know we will take it. Thanks again!
Great way to end this little story. =) Feel free to come back with a quickie now and then.
“Keep your key?” Tina asked.”You’ll be needing it,” – Lovely finale, swimmie – thanks for writing it!
aww how sweet the ending was! thanks swimmie.
thanks for finishing this up, if u get bored which i doubt over the summer feel free to ya know write something… thanks for the great ending :)
This was so endearing. Bette telling T to just keep the key. Sleeping better with Tina there.. just loved it.
Huh? End? You sure? Sigh… but if it’s really the end, thank you for posting such a nice and smooth story. Enjoy your summer too…
:( even though your done with this one, it was wonderful. well be waiting for the next one. take care and thanks
I love anything you write, even “The end.”Have a good summer! Thank you. …SAVE AMY WINEHOUSE! MAKE A CONTRIBUTION – SAVE THE SITE!
Your writing is just at a different level than many others. I hated to see the words “the end”. If the muse strikes please consider writing anything even one-offs on this storyline. Have a great summer. Carpe Diem!
Sweet ending to start a new beginning. Thanks JKS, this story was absolutely enchanting. Hope you may pamper us, with your writing, whenever you can. Sincerely, Lucero & Marsha (From Mexico City)
*sigh* i don’t want it to end *pout* any chance for a sequel? *hopeful smile* thanks you, have a great summer as well and write, write, write…for us
I loved it. now u can have the summer!!!! write again in autumn/winter maybe. love your writing.
WTF? “The End” is that a typo?
Thanks JKS for the beautiful story. Hope the summer will have a lot more of inspiration for another BT Beginning. Looking forward to it. Take care and enjoy your summer.
I hate to see this end. Great job! Have a great summer! If it happens to rain I wouldn’t mind a one-off!
Can’t say that I like the words “The End”. Enjoyed this story very much. Have a wonderful summer, and if you ever get the urge to write a snippet here or there, just do it and we will willingly accept it!