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I’ve Got You Under My Skin Chapter 1
Stranger: “Is there someone I can call for you? Are you sure you don’t need to go to the hospital to be checked out?”
Tina: “No, I am fine. And, I don’t have anyone here . . . (begins to get choked up with tears) or who would even care.”
Stranger: “Oh, I am sure that is not true. You are a beautiful, young woman and I can tell by looking in your eyes that you have a very kind heart. How could no one care?”
Tina: “I’m sorry, I am so embarrassed. I have just had a lot going on in my life lately and I guess I am not handling it as well as I thought I was.”
Stranger: “That’s okay girl. We all have our days. (reaches out and puts hand on Tina’s back)”
Tina: “I am sorry if I worried you or am making you late. Thank you so much for stopping to help me. You have renewed my hope in people in Los Angeles. I don’t want to keep you any longer, so thank you for your concern.”
Stranger: “I don’t feel like I can leave you. By the way, my name is Kit Porter and I own a little cafe at the end of the street called, The Planet. Have you ever been there or heard of it?”
Tina: “Kit Porter? Thee Kit Porter? The singer?”
Kit: “Yes, my name is Kit Porter and I use to be a singer, but these days I mostly just run The Planet.”
Tina: “My parents have all of your records. I grew up listening to you on many a hot summer’s night while swinging on our front porch. You have such an amazing voice.”
Kit: “I can tell from her southern drawl that you ain’t from around here. Am I right?”
Tina: “Yeah, I know I stick out like a sore thumb here in L.A. I am orginally from North Carolina and I just moved two weeks ago from Vancouver, Canada, for a new job. *****! In fact, what time is it? Today is my first day and I don’t want to be late.”
Kit: “Don’t worry, Miss Carolina . . . it’s a little before 6 a.m. Girl, what time do you need to be to work?”
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(48 votes, average: 3.65 out of 5)
This is a good beginning. Kit is a sweet ladies. Alice now how will she treat Tina. will Tina go with Alice first Then fall in love with Bette
Wow this is good story and very interesting, love it. Kit is a good and nice person and glad Tina meet her. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Hey there! This is a good story. I love B&T beginnings. Please continue!
this is a really great start. I love kit, and your kit is great. someone said I aint one of those crazy bitches today, it had me on the floor. kit saying something like that reminded me a my crazy day.
couldnt agree more :D – i like the ‘fresh’ start coz every other story seems to start at the gallery
at least in this story – tina is gay outrite
erm which makes me wonder is bette str8 with a bf – lol – wat a change or an attempt to hve a twist to the story :D
pls continue
tks
Hey – this is a great start to a hopefull wonderfull B&T story. I love your writing – please post soon…
OMG!That was so Great another B&T beginnings WHOA! it’s really Awesome I Love it Please continue post soon.
Great start to a new storyline! I like it! Isn’t Kit just a sweetheart? I just gotta love her. =)
interesting!!!! you’ve got me hooked. pls post soon..
Please keep this story going. You’re off to a great start, that’s really good for your first attempt. Can’t wait for Ms. Elizabeth to make her appearance. Just love that Kit! More, Please!!!
great start. I love that Kit was the one tina first meets. hey what is crazy Alice going to say to Tina? anyway, great beginning.