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I’ve Got You Under My Skin Chapter 1
Kit: (cuts Tina off) “You sound just like my sister. She works so hard and eats so little. I tell her all of the time, ‘Baby sis, breakfast is the most important meal of the day.’ She is so committed to her work that she often forgets to eat or take care of herself. I worry about her sometimes.”
Tina: “Does your sister live in the area?”
Kit: “Yeah, in fact she lives about three streets away.”
Tina: “Do you have any other family in the area?”
Kit: “No, just my baby sis and I. My son is in medical school back east. His father and I have been divorced since he was a baby. My mother passed away several years ago. And, our father . . . Elizabeth and I have the same father, but different mothers . . .he lives in Philadelphia, but I haven’t spoken to him in several years. My sister is the golden child and she can do no wrong in his eyes and vice versa. I love my baby sis, but sometimes I just don’t understand why it is so important to her prove herself to our father. I am just glad that I have her. I don’t know what I would do without her.”
Tina: “I am sorry to hear that. I know how difficult that can be.”
Kit: “Listen, let me get you your muffin and I will grab some coffee and we can talk some more.”
Kit leaves Tina to her thoughts, as she prepares Tina’s muffin. Tina is drawn to several black and white photographs that are on display throughout the cafe. As she is studying the one behind her, Kit walks up with their breakfast.
Kit: “Like that photo?”
Tina: “Yeah, it’s breathtaking.”
Kit: “My sister took the photo. In fact, all of the black and white’s in here are her’s.”
Tina: “Wow. She has quite a gift.”
Kit: “Yeah, she is extremely talented. And, these photos are just her hobbie. She is actually the director at a little art museum here in L.A. She is so brillant and has such an eye for art. Even if she wasn’t my sister, I would still believe she was brillant. . . . but enough about me. So Tina, you mentioned that you don’t have any friends or family out here. What possessed you to move to this big, lonely city.”
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(48 votes, average: 3.65 out of 5)
This is a good beginning. Kit is a sweet ladies. Alice now how will she treat Tina. will Tina go with Alice first Then fall in love with Bette
Wow this is good story and very interesting, love it. Kit is a good and nice person and glad Tina meet her. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Hey there! This is a good story. I love B&T beginnings. Please continue!
this is a really great start. I love kit, and your kit is great. someone said I aint one of those crazy bitches today, it had me on the floor. kit saying something like that reminded me a my crazy day.
couldnt agree more :D – i like the ‘fresh’ start coz every other story seems to start at the gallery
at least in this story – tina is gay outrite
erm which makes me wonder is bette str8 with a bf – lol – wat a change or an attempt to hve a twist to the story :D
pls continue
tks
Hey – this is a great start to a hopefull wonderfull B&T story. I love your writing – please post soon…
OMG!That was so Great another B&T beginnings WHOA! it’s really Awesome I Love it Please continue post soon.
Great start to a new storyline! I like it! Isn’t Kit just a sweetheart? I just gotta love her. =)
interesting!!!! you’ve got me hooked. pls post soon..
Please keep this story going. You’re off to a great start, that’s really good for your first attempt. Can’t wait for Ms. Elizabeth to make her appearance. Just love that Kit! More, Please!!!
great start. I love that Kit was the one tina first meets. hey what is crazy Alice going to say to Tina? anyway, great beginning.