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I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 5
Story written on August 31, 2005 by hey_portard.
this point Dana and Alice are a little too wasted to do anything that requires much thought. Tina walks up with them helping to balance Alice and Dana as they walk up the steps to Dana’s condo. Bette opens the door and Tina helps to guide Alice and Dana inside.
Bette: “Goodnight ladies. Hope you feel okay in the morning.”
Dana: “I’ve got a photo shot for Sports Illustrated in the morning . . . ***** . . . ah, ha, ha . . . that’s funny!”
Immediately Dana and Alice break out into uncontrollable laughter once again. Bette looks over at Tina and rolls her eyes. She forgets that Tina can’t see anything. Bette and Tina walk out the door and can hear more laughter from the girls.
Bette: “I bet they won’t be laughing when they wake up tomorrow morning.”
Tina: “I would imagine not.” (short pause in conversation) Bette, do you mind going down the steps first? I could see well enough coming up, but I am not too sure about going down.”
Bette: “Sure, hold on to my shoulder and we will go down slow.”
Tina: (grabbing Bette’s shoulder, Tina starts to descend behind Bette) “Okay, ready when you are.”
Bette: “Okay, hold on. Stop me if I am going too fast.”
Once Tina reaches the fifth step from the bottom she starts to feel a little bit more
confident of her footing. Just as she removes her hand from Bette’s shoulder, she misses the next step and starts to fall. Bette quickly turns around when she doesn’t feel Tina’s touch and see’s Tina on her way towards her in slow motion. Bette quickly tries to get her footing as Tina falls closer to her arms.
Tina: “Ah, *****!”
Bette: “I gotcha!”
Bette safely grabs Tina and between a moment of awkward silence they both start to laugh.
Bette: (still embracing Tina in her arms) “Tina, we really do need to stop meeting like this.”
Tina: “God, you would have thought that I was the one that had too much to drink. Maybe
Alice and Dana should be the one’s to help me to my place.”
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(47 votes, average: 4.30 out of 5)
oh my i know Tinas was blind but Bette dosent how could she dosent know?..lol..camt wait to see the real meeting..lol..cant wait for more
I’ve just done the Eveyln Wood speed reading course catching up with this story. Love it, its so cute and refreshing. You’ve got the two bozos (Alice/Dana) down, and our two girls, hook up coming. I’m with the others, kinda was waiting for them both to realize they had bumped into each other before. Totally looking forward to your next update.
K
Excellent chapter, can’t wait til Tina really sees Bette. Love it.
Well that’s good, they got to know each other before jumping to a quick judgement, because of their little accident. Lucky for Bette, that’s for sure. It figures Bette didn’t recognize Tina from their morning run-in. Hope this smoothes things over some, before Tina realizes who Bette is. Great post. More, please.
Can’t wait for Tina to really see Bette. What will she do. will she still go with Bette? This is going to be so funny. Thanks
This chapter is funa and Tina is blind so cute and funny, can’t wait for Tina to see Bette. Post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter. Post soon! :)
I really like your story and was excited to see your post tonight (I was just about to log off). I thought their first meeting would happen entirely different and wondered how they would ever get past their disgust for each other to like each other. So, this is an interesting turn although it is hard to believe that Bette did not recognize the farm girl’s voice, but that is infatuation (or love) for you.
Anyway, remember to keep having fun with your writing and we will continue to have fun reading it!
I like that Tina couldn’t see too well and got to know Bette’s heart a little. It’ll probably be a big shock for her when she sees Bette on Wednesday, huh? Hee, hee.
but why dint Bette recognise Tina??? I must hve missed something?
this was too funny. wait until Tina actually puts her contacts in and actually sees Bette….
i think bette was more angry than anything to really see who she was yelling at. to her it could have been anyone, something like blind rage. tina would more remember what she looked like. and remember when bette saw kit after she said that she should not have yelled at the woman and that she was already angry.
anyway i love love love this story.
LMAO @ Kit’s Miss Universe comment.
Tina is blind as a fucking bat…this is too funny. This is the first story that I have read in which she cant see. I just look forward to when she finds out the her Monday morning bitch was Bette.
What I dont get is why Bette didnt recognize Tina?
Post again soon….
yea..more please. still loving it.
i never expected this that tina would not see bette. i know bette would not recognize her because she was so mad she probably could not see straight. cannot wait for tina to see bette. sh*t is goint to hit the fan. lol
I’m loving this story! Please keep goimg. I want to see Tina’s reaction when she realizes who Bette is. LOL. Good job,; it was a fun chapter to read.
I really like your story. The fact that Tina can’t see a thing without her contacts or glasses is sooo funny. I’m glad she got to know Bette alittle without seeing her…maybe once she “sees” her she won’t be too quick to judge her outburst. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
yeah, porTARD why didnt bette recognize her. and tina saw her in the photos at her house. but being blind was slick. cant wait to see if they ever really recognize it was them. if they were in such embarassment (t) and anger (b) maybe they never really lookied. what to see whata you do with this. post soon.
awww….waht a great story…hahah…if tina recognizes bette as the woman from earlier it will be great
Please keep it going..I got to get my ASS in a meeting comment more next time…THANKS
another great chapter, cant wait for the next
u r nothing but a tease, oh well, i just can’t wait for tina 2 c bette’s face and realize she was the one who so rudely insulted her and called her farm girl, please post soon.
Bette is like a fishing pole, rail it in, get them hook, time to eat…gotta love her charm and swagg damn she’s hot