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    Just Hold Me, Please PT5

    Story written on April 24, 2007 by verywilde.
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    Bette takes it a little too far.

    Bette forced a small smile and wrapped her arms around Kit, she felt comforted by her sisters hug. Their moment was broken however when she heard Alice clear her throat loudly, signalling for them to hurry up. Bette rolled her eyes and stepped back, “Alice, you k-o-c-h.”

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    Beep, beep.

    “Oh go away,” Tina groaned, wrapping the pillow around her head.

    Beep, beep.

    She growled loudly and sat up suddenly. The sudden movement made the bed shake; Bette slipped off the side and crashed to the floor. Tina smacked her hand across her mouth to try and stifle the laughter. She spun around to switch off the alarm before crawling across the bed to look over the side. Bette just snorted loudly and carried on sleeping.

    “Bette?” Tina said, curiously reaching down and prodding her in the shoulder. “Honey, wake up.”

    Bette swatted her hand away and rolled over, settling back into a deep sleep. Tina rolled her eyes and climbed of the bed; she carefully stepped over her and walked into the bathroom. It took seconds to fill up a glass with water and return to the bedroom.

    She grinned widely before tipping the glass and emptying the contents over Bette’s head. She jumped awake and smacked her head on the bedside cabinet. Tina gasped loudly and bit down on her bottom lip, instantly regretting pouring water over her.

    “Did you just pour water over me?” Bette asked angrily. She sat up and clutched her head, already feeling a headache surfacing.

    Tina looked around sheepishly; she hid the glass behind her back. “Um, no?” She lied.

    However, Bette didn’t seem to find the situation funny. “I guess you pushed me out of bed then? Didn’t want me near you so you just kicked me out? God, T.”

    Tina narrowed her eyes, “Fuck you Bette,” Tina spat; she threw the glass down onto the bed before quickly rushing into the bathroom, the door slammed behind her. Bette instantly regretted saying it, she groaned at her own stupidity.

    “Tina, please come back out? I’m sorry.” Bette stood up and walked to the door, when she tried to open it she sighed loudly when it didn’t budge. “Tina baby, please unlock the door?”

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    3. Rau – she obviously had a flashback to the attack. I assume that she was able to enjoy it whilst she was in control (ie. above Bette) but then once the position changed this made her panic. Great story and thought provoking stuff! Hopefuly bette’s patience will hold out a little longer. Please post soon.

    5. I don’t think “too fast” was the problem. Bette was doing only what Tina asked her until she changed their positions. It probably triggered some flash backs. What I don’t get is why Bette left Tina alone, in distress like that. You cracked me up when T poured the water on B to wake her up! Great chapter wilde! More please!

    7. WOW!!!! Tina must have had a flash back. When Bette to over and became incontrol. At the end Bette tried to touch Tina but she pulled away. Was is Bette to do now? Thanks PPS

    10. Good thought Sara. I figured that she flashed back but I forgot about the position change. Both are feeling the pain, one because of the terrible acts done to her and one because she can not help the love of her life.

    13. Don’t let Bette do something stupid like living Tina or getting drunk to forget the guilt or whatever… Gos this story reminds me of really bad memories. But it is beautifully wrote and very well seen…

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