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    just makes sense

    Story written on August 23, 2009 by ashtuck.
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    Tina’s thoughts during “The Kiss” of season 5. One-off.

    Tina did something that Tina had always done very well.  She hid.

     

    SheBar had so many places to hide, Tina thought, that nobody, not even the IRS, could find her.  She nursed her drink; she wasn’t sure what it was and she had stopped counting how many it was after the sixth.  She was a little more than tipsy tonight, but she wasn’t wasted.  She wasn’t even drunk, really.  Call it genetics, but Tina alcohol tolerance was quite high—just something she inherited from her father.

     

    She stared into the glass, wondering why she’d even bothered to come out tonight—and with Brenda, nonetheless.  Brenda was nice, smart, funny, and a pretty decent lay, but she wasn’t really Tina’s type.  She didn’t know what it was that was missing from Brenda, but she could come up with it, she thought, if she kept looking into this glass.

     

    She rolled the remaining liquid around the glass, knowing that she’d need to find a way home tonight.  There was no way she’d go home with Brenda.  Brenda was too wild for her.  She couldn’t see herself doing this every night, running around from club to club, dancing until the sun comes up.  She just wanted to go home, maybe snuggle up with someone special.

     

    The things she used to do when she was with Bette.

     

    Maybe that was her motivation to show up tonight.  Bette was going to be there—with Jodi.

     

    Oh, Jodi.  She watched them with a jealousy that she hadn’t felt before.  It was true that, when women showed Bette attention, which happened often, she’d find herself becoming a little jealous, but it was never like this.  Out of all of those times, Tina knew that Bette’s heart belonged to her and only her.  Besides, Tina never seemed to be alone for very long.  After Bette cheated, it didn’t take long for Tina to started dating Helena, then she got back with Bette, then left Bette and started dating Henry, and now she was alone.

     

    She was utterly and totally alone for the first time in 10 years.  And it seemed as if the only person she wanted to spend time with, was claimed.  Someone had finally taken Bette from her and that someone’s name was Jodi.

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    1. This was perfect. I loved the way you took one of the best scenes in the series and fleshed it out w/Tina’s inner thoughts. It just made sense. I encourage you to see if you can do that w/other scenes in which there are powerful emotions but IC doesn’t explore those emotions and/or feelings to their potential. This was well done.

    2. Oh my beautiful Ash… that was so perfect the reflection… the inflection that you show us through the souls and eyes of these woman… these characters just represent how amazing and powerful you are at infusing and illuminating the emotions within each and every scene you show us… this here story inspires me to maybe post a story I wrote about the aftermath of this scene but with a different result… hmmmmm… maybe just maybe I’ll do that… you my beautiful friend are amazing… I hope your school stuff is settling out for you… if you need me just holla and I’m here for you… love and hugs, JC

    3. I have to admit that I’m not a big fan to Tibette but I’ll read whatever you write. Great job. I love how you describe their emotions and thoughts. Way to goooooo ashie.

    6. I agree with annieb69, I luv’ed it, it was a terrific scene that you brought back to life again. I also agree with azmama to explore other great scenes. One that I really love was the one in season 5 when B&T leave Phyllis’ party and they head back to Tina’s place. When Bette tells Tina while making love that she missed her. There can be so much more to that scene. Great one-off. I am a Tibetter. I cannot see B&T with others, sorry. But keep writing. Great post.

    7. I like the phrase “It was the way that they just made sense. I like the phrase “It was the way that they just made sense. I like the phrase, “it was the way they just made sense.” it is so fitting for TiBette.

    10. Yes I agree with the comments so far. Beautifully done and it’s so much richer for having your version. I didn’t want it to end there. I wanted to think about what Tina felt after the kiss ended. I often wondered how they ended that kiss and then went home? Talked a bit? How did Tina begin to process that amazing KISS. Thank you for such great writing as well.

    11. This was one of my favorite scenes. How gentle the kiss was and Bette opening up her soul to Tina. Then Tina’s gentle kiss on Bette’s forehead, that was Priceless.

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