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Keeping the Pieces Together: Chapter 1 – Second Chances Do Exist
“Yes, Bette.I have been thinking a lot about us lately. Ever since, you know, that day in my apartment. IIt was absolutely amazing.I missed being close to you Bette.and I know that so much has happened lately, with your father and everything, But I have really enjoyed the time that we have been spending together. I think its time, Bette, if you want to, for us.for us to try again, I mean really try to put the pieces together.”
Completely moved by what Tina was saying, tears flowed down Bette’s cheeks onto her orange shirt, collecting into a pool of happiness. “Tina, are you sure that you want to do thisbecause.I don’t knowmaybe you are just feeling bad for me.because of Melvin. I don’t want you to make a decision that you will regret later on.”
Tina scooted closer to Bette on the couch”Bette, I’m not saying this because I feel bad for you. I mean, I do feel bad for you and I want to be there for you, but this is more than that. I want you to know, that I forgive you. I forgive you Bette, for what you did. Iit still hurts when I think about itbut I don’t think about it when I see you anymore. I don’t see her when I see you anymore.I just see you, Bette..my Bette.”
Unable to grasp that this wasn’t a dream, Bette blurted, “Youyou forgive me? After what I did to you? After all that I put you through?”
“Yes, Bette, I do.and I want to move past this. I want us to try to work on us and putting us back together..but I don’t think it would work if I stayed at my apartment. That wouldn’t be giving it my all and I want to give everything I have to fixing us.Bette?”
Bette stared at Tina as the tears flowed down her caramel cheeks and joined their kin on her shirt. She couldn’t believe how much she loved this woman, sitting next to her, telling her that she forgives her, that she wants to work on things.How did she get so lucky to have this angel walk into her life 8 years ago and walk back even after the turmoil? Unable to control herself anymore, the final bricks of her inner wall tumbled down as the tears poored out. A hurricane of emotions hit her at once; grief from the pain she caused them, happiness from hearing these words of forgiveness and joy, just pure joy at being given a second chance.
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(35 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
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LOL… HellNo has come a knocking!!! Hope Bette opens up to Tina about her insecurities. Looking forward 2 your next post.
Glad to see you back, hopefully we will get your chapters fairly soon. I enjoyed this story the first time around, looking forward to reading it again.
Love this story!! Hell has come knocking huh…..well Tina now is as good as time as any to tell her to get lost. post soon.
welcome back…
hELENA HAS SOME GUTS, dON;T THINK i WOULD GO LOOKING FOR tINA, AT LEASE NOT AT HER EX HOUSE. bETTE DIDN’T GO LOOKING FOR tINA AT hELENA HOUSE. THANKS
Welcome back! I am loving this story every step of the way! Talk about bad timing! Looks like Bette and Tina is rudely interrupted, lets see what happens next…shall we?
HELL-E-NO, No Helena does not have the unmedigated gall to come bamming on Bette’s door. Oh no sister kate, I don’t who you are looking for, but you do not step up to Bett’s crib like that. Yeah, Tina need to go ahead and break things off with Helena and with a quickness. Good to see you back, please continue.
Yeah… Happy days your back. Thanks this is good. I love Bette’s confusion and Tina’s assertiveness. Nice more please. Thanks
I like this. I can’t wait to see how Bette and Tina react to Helena wne they open the door. I just wonder who’s hand prints will appear on Helena’s body, and I don’t mean in a good way.
Hey Penny Welcome back I hope everything it’s good I’m really happy your back and write more Awesome Story Thanks for writing back Please continue post soon.
Dams the Helena. Ruining TiBette mojo. Bring that bitch and let Bette woop her ass. Please soon. This is good. :p
Welcome back girl! I am still enjoying the story, and certainly do not mind reading each chapter over again. Hope you will be with us for the long haul this time! Looking forward to your next post.
Hope Bette tell Tina about how she’s feeling. Damn, Hels does know how to interrupt. LOL. Glad you’re back…looking forward to your posts. Thanks.
Welcome back PrT, good to see your story up and running again.
I hope the next BANG! BANG! BANG! BANG! we hear are the gun shots toward Helena for intruding on our story, damn her! Don’t let them answer the door, let someone come over and shoot her or a drive-by! Yeah, that’s it! Okay, I know, too violent, but still love the story, hope to hear from you soon.
WTF?!?!? That bitch is crazy. Dont nobody show up to my house unannouced. She needs to pipe the fuck down. Phew… cant wait for the next chapter.
Welcome back Penny I really missed your story and I just know they are going to get better and better LOL Who could be at that door…time will tell keep up the great writing
Geezz that woman is like a plague..she never give up??? i hope Tina rid her right now..great chapter :o)
Welcome back Penny!!! Wow how I’ve missed my weekly fix of your story!?!
Still don’t see why you needed to edit, because you are always on such good form!?!
Well anyway keep up the good work, and I hope to see some new material soon, wanna get my addiction back! ;-)
I also hope that everything is getting better for you, I know that here you are amongst friends.
Un gran abrazo y un monton de besos.
XX L.J.
keep the stories coming…
oh snap! can’t wait to see what happens next
Glad to have you back. You’re one of my favorites. I enjoyed your story last time too, but I have forgotten parts of it so it is nice to read it again. Please don’t make us wait long for new postings. Kiitos!
welcome back…!!! enjoy reading it. do post soon!
*Presents balloons and flowers* Welcome back, Penny! I’m so glad you’re able to write again. I’ve really missed your story.
K
Wonderful chapter. I hope Bette gets over the T and H thing, T had to do it with B and C. Can’t wait for more.
Excellent your back. Looking forward to this.