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Kiss
Bette
Dark orbs staring intently into each othernever breaking the eye contact, Bette lean in ever so slowly then carefully and tenderly brushing her lips on the moist, soft velvety lips of Tinas. Closing her eyes saying a silent prayer and eagerly waiting for the other womans next move, while feeling the amazing sensation of Tinas delicious lips on her own. Every nerve in her is cracking up as her desire for this woman is building up. In the meantime, shes doing her best to hold back from crashing into Tinas lips and assault her in anyway in her forceful shocking kiss. Heartbeat sped up and shes starting to see twinkling stars as the fears of refusal grow with time. Shes stroking Tinas arm up and down now in a way to reassure Tina that its ok and a need to touch her silky smooth pale skin.
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hey Amanda… thanks.. my nerve is really cracking up.. it’s like 2.50am now and I still can’t go to sleep and keep hitting on the refresh button… enough for my crap, thanks a lot Amanda..
I decided to listen to Amanda and leave a comment. Very good start. The detail is cool. Give us more next chapter. Good Job.
Ditto to Phoenix – great start – im still new at posting – it gets better though – you do eventually stop hitting refresh :-)
go for it this story is on its way keep going
Welcome aboard! Keep writing :)
way to go! GREAT start!!!!!!!!
We love having a new author aboard. Welcome to the nut house! Great start to your story. I really like the detail and please keep it coming. Thanks!
Nice beginning Zabo…I will just read you other 2 chapters and will comment from there. Keep up the wrighting.
Hey Zabo great start the story and please continue. Thank you!
WOW! Zabo That was so Beautiful Story we love it so we are waiting soon keep going Please.