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L Wing 63
We do not know yet – there was only one gunman and he
was downed in one.
Any other casualties ?
He looks away briefly before looking back.
Candace was killed — bullet to the heart – that’s where you got all of that .
For the first time I look down — well maybe more likely is that for the first time my brain lets me see my white dress. It is soaked in blood — a lot of blood.
I feel faint – oh Lord have mercy on us all.
Oh sweet fucking Jesus – instant ?
Yes
She died saving me ?
That is her job Madam President — that is all our jobs — we take the bullet for you.
I close my eyes.
Is there a phone in the car ?
This car ?
I need to be assured that Tina is okay — I just got engaged to her Rory — she is the love of my life – please let me talk to her.
We will try Madam President .
Okay — get hold of her — who was the shooter ? Foreign ?
No id on the body but we think he was American.
I fall silent – trying to come to terms with how close I came to following Lincoln and Kennedy and Hillary – well there are few – if any – Presidents that do not have at least one assassination attempt on them – it was foolish of me to think that a gay, African American woman would be immune.
I close my eyes and picture the only sight that can calm me — Tina – Tina in that beautiful dress with her hair all curled and looking like a million dollars, Tina smiling at me with that amazing smile and those eyes staring into mine. Tina holding my hands and moving closer to me. Tina and her soft lips brushing against mine.
I open my eyes.
I need to talk to Tina or Shane — is Shane with her ?
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(40 votes, average: 4.05 out of 5)
OMG!!! more tonight, please!!!
Ooohh… nice chapter Ally.
oh I just love this story!!! I do hope Tina will open up fully to Bette… please please please continue!!!!
omg jesus…u gotta post like every hour ally!!
Oh MY GAWD!…Hey I’m not the one making guesses am I ? I don’t think I am.
OMG. Please there has to be more tonight. I adore this story.
this is a difficult situation for both of them… for all the staff. this story is so good! i love it!
Time to reveal Tina’s secrets. One more chapter please~
Tina HAS to start talking soon. She’s already watched one person she cared about die and another died while she was away. This attempted hit will eat her up inside unless she gets some help.
OH MY FREAKING GOD YOU ROCK!!!!
Okay, I hope you have another one waiting thanks
MORE MORE MORE Please! I love it.
THIS IS SO F*ING GOOD!! You are such a GREAT writer Al!! I actually felt bad for Candace, but so happy it wasn’t Bette, Tina, or Shane. The only thing I can say is that we have been waiting almost 60 chapters to hear about Tina’s drama (which I think is somehow related to Bette’s past)…please don’t make us wait much longer. Did I say this was GREAT yet?!! It’s GREATER than GREAT!!
Sorry if I was the one making guesses! :) I feel the same way about Candance and s3…breaks my heart. Loving this story…. pretty please post soon!!!
I soooo love this story, Tina needs help to get through this trauma, who better but bette,xxxx
there are so many hours left this weekend, ample time for you to churn out a couple more chappies … am ready and willing to send fleet of pizza, beer, ice cream trucks your way, so pleaseeeee, continue … now!!! (thanks)
Ally, you’re one hell of a girl, I love you and also love you’re story. I sold my riotgun to buy you flowers ;). They’re on their way….
OMG, are you trying to give me a heart attack at 25, with these cliffy’s? Must post soon! I feel bad for candance!
Excellent…just read the last few chapters…trying to keep up with your writting….your on some roll….So you really hated Candace..in S1.??.lol…well you must of you killed her!!!!ok i shouldnt find that fuuny!…Anyway this was great…looking forward to more.
This would be a good time to shed a little more light on Tina’s past. At least Tina, Shane and Batte all made it back to 1600 Pennsylvania Ave. in one piece. And where’s Dana? I’m guessing she was back at the house w/ Alice right? Post soon please.
i have a feeling noone feels very sorry for candace… for some hidden reason.. anyway, poor tina and poor bette, but at least we’re getting closer to finding out the secret
A million thank yous for posting again today. You have done a fantastic job of laying the groundwork and bringing this all together.
no way. *dies*. from one cliffhanger straight into another. but you are awesome for posting this today, thanks so much for that. can’t wait for the next one, preferably soon and with more b/t interaction.
OH FUCK!
BETTE SHOULD TRY SLAPPING HER FACE, THAT USUALLY WORKS WITH SHOCK… :-)
OMFG….Ally this story has my hairs standing up, it’s so friggin intense!!!! So is Bette gonna have Shane did into Tina’s back ground in order to know how to help her, or is Tina gonna cry and let it all out, now that she is back in Bette’s arms……either way….HURRY THE HELL UP AND UPDATE, THIS IS WORSE THAT A SLOW BURN!!!!!!!!!!!
It is difficult to be original in one’s accolades, ally, b/c everything has been said. It’s exciting. Sorry that someone had to die in your story but Candace was a “good” choice. She died as a heroine at least.
Hey Ally – I know I’ve been missing in action for a while, but I’m back now and I’ve just finished reading the last post from you……and OMG what a chapter!!!! You’re just great and I know you’re a B&T fan, but I’m still worried about Tina after her lack off response to Bette. But in the long run maybe this is what Tina needed to open up and talk about her past….I hope so. I never thought I would say this, but thank you Candace!!!!
Thank you! THANK YOU..for posting this soon..what a story..cannot wait for more..you are a gift..u know that!
Fu£K – its at times like this that i wish this was a big paperback novel – that i could just read all night until its finished…. this would be unputdownable – if it were
Brilliant chapter! …now who do we have to sleep with or how much do we have to pay to get you to post again ASAP!!!!!!!???
Oh man.. it’s intense but NICE! Tina must thought she’s a jinx, poor thing. You really hate Candace don’t you? Man, bullet to the heart! lol… Well, at least she didn’t suffer much before she died, thanks for doing your job Candace! More please…
my god…i agree with alice, i would have slapped bette for being such a total bitch and not expressing one word of remorse or sympathy for candace who died saving her.the first thing she should be doing is calling candace’s family with her deepest regrets…
OMG! Can we get another chapter tonight??? Come on…this is great!
Please post tonight!!!Pretty Please!!
MORE! :D I’ve been sat on the edge of my seat since earlier today when i read the previous chapter! aaah MORE!
WOW Ally, EXCELLENT job with bring Tina’s past back to the fore front so that they can deal with it before they get married. You ROCK and I am feeling a little safer :o)
Tina had to have seen some heavy shit when she was a reporter. Death is never easy for anyone to watch. Something like this was bound to happen with Bette being the President and now Tina her future wife. I only hope that Tina will not pull away or hide within herself and cut Bette out of her life. This is when she will need Bette the most. I am with you about not watching season 3. Can these writers and creator not get their fucking act together and give the fans what they want (Bette and Tina together). We should send the assassin there instead of trying to kill Bette. Great Post and story. Please post soon, I am dying to know what happens.
this is so good….please post soon , like right now!!!
we want more! we want more! LOL.
wow this story is soo fucking good! 10 stars for you and post soon..really fucking awesome :D
i am on the edge of the chair…just so amazing and thrilling…more more more…hope tina will be ok :)
Ah, the drama, excellent!!
yes you posted – keep it coming, I am so addicted. Great chapter. Gog you are good.
Hurry post again!!!
Wow this is unbeleivable and shock!
Jesus, Ally! The protaganists didn’t get shot, but now one of them’s gone catatonic. And you killed Candace, who in this story never did anything wrong. And then there’s Jobadge recommending theraputic violence. What’s with you Brits?
holy shit! this is intense, ally!
damn, just read 2 last chapters and i’m in shock…i hope tina will be okay, but she has to let bette know what happened in afganistan so this won’t happen again…the only thing thta keeps me hopeful is knowing that you’re B&T fan…missed you in SF
Will Tina need treatment for post traumatic shock syndrome? Ha ha!
please post again soon.. great story..
What an AMAZING chapter!! I love it!