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L Wing chapter 161
“Should I get the President anything ? “
“Not at this moment – I would see that she is not disturbed until she is wants anything”
“Very good “
CNN are close enough to pick up three black clad figures move round to the side of the house. My palms are sweating – fuck Bette why do you want to go through this on your own ? I am your wife – I should be with you. I get up and am half way to the door when there is a crackle of gun fire from the TV. Even the few steps between my door and Bette’s is too far – I have to see this.
The camera angle switches and two figures kick the front door open and storm in – smoke bursts out of the house and windows shatter. For three minutes the only sounds are from the scene -this doesn’t need a commentary. More men – well I assume they are men – burst into the house.
Then there is a silence – until the shout of “ CLEAR “ is heard. That means that there is no danger – the men holding Shane are either in capture or they are dead. Four paramedics are rushed in – please God make Shane be okay. After about another five minutes Jeff appears at my door – he is smiling
“What ? “
“Shane is okay – alive – she has a badly broken leg and a couple of cracked ribs but we don’t think anything serious – she’s malnourished and dehydrated because they were going to leave her there until she died “
Its just as well that I am holding on the side of my desk because I feel my legs start to wobble.
“Do you want to tell the President ? “ I ask
“No – I think that should come from you “
“Where are you taking Shane ? “
“Nearest military hospital and then back to Washington “
“Carmen “
“We will get her to Shane as soon as possible “
“Are any of them alive- what about our men ? “
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Thanks god that Shane is safe and now let her get well soon. OK post soon please, thanks!
WELL, I BELIEVE IS WAS WRONG OF THEM NOT TO TELL aLICE WAS IS GOING ON, MAINLY BECASE SHE ONE SHANE BEST FRIENDS. NO WONDER SHE ALWAYS FEEL LEFT OUT. IT WAS TOTALLY WRONG OF THEM. RESPECT IS EARN BOTH WAYS, IF THEY WANT TOTAL COOPERATION FROM HER , THEY SHOULD INCLUDE, SINCE SHE IS PART OF STAFF. TINA SHOULDN’T BE CHIEF STAFF, I BELIEVE IT WOULD COMPROMISE THE POSITION BECAUSE EVERYBODY WOULD THINK THAT SHE GOT THE POSITION BY BEING THE PRESIDENT’S WIFE.
ahhhhhhhh so nice to have shane back..Tina as the Chief…i see some grief ahead…
Excellent work on this chapter. I concur w/ally that Gumby’s story is the best on the site right now especially w/the dialogue.
Damn, I guess she wasn’t out playing Pokemon after all. Am I a bad person for not caring if Alice gets canned for one reason or another? PPS
thank goodness, shane’s alive…i guess your co-workers would undestand your mug better if it would say: “lesbian fan fiction drama queen” LOL
great shane is fairly alright now bring on the alice drama no doubt!!!! pps
*big sigh of relief*. wonderful update. glad shes gonna be ok. thanks.
Lament’, I’m like you, I don’t give a f*** about Alice (in this story I mean), especially after she said to Tina that all Bette cared about was her and her “bump”… I thought that was VERY out of line!!! Big mouth deserved to be left out… And by the way, Ally, this is your story, and you do whatever you want with it. ;) ;) I’ll always stick with it. And Ally’s rules suit me just fine! Thank you so much for giving me my fix of L Wing TONIGHT, mate, cause I definitely needed it with what just happened to my country… Hey guys, wish us luck!!!
Great chapter AllyE, so happy that Shane is going to be okay.
Ally, great chapter as always! Thanks! Can we cut poor Alice some slack? She’s really taking a beating here and lets not forget how Lucy screwed up with Jodi and the pot thing. Also, lets not forget how she helped to break Alice’s heart by messing with Jodi and what Jodi did to B&T by spilling the beans. As for Tasha…give the her a break too…I mean come on…she’s been doing a great job for Bette…now Tina’s ready to kick her to the curb for her stupid, drug using, cheating sister. I think Lucy needs to stew a little longer to get her job back. As for Alice, I think she’ll really be hurt that no one told her what was going on w/Shane…I mean they are best friends after all. Give her a break. PPS I can’t wait for the next one. :)
I totally agree with you Griffen, cut Alice some slack, she did deserve to be notify of what was happening .
Yey! Shane is ok!
I am so glad Shane is OK!!!!!! Thanks PPS
yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Well shoot Ally..if all it takes is me asking nicely…LOL! First, this chapter was AWESOME. I had to read it twice because my eyes skimmed quickly to first make sure Shane was ok! LOL…then I read it over and took it all in, it was amazing both times. As for the author notes…you have no idea what that means to me so thanks. Also, the mug, that’s hysterical!! Take care friend and have a wonderful day!
im first! im soo glad for the update women,and thxs for bringin shane back.p.p.s. have a great sunday..
Another great instalment. Thanks for posting.
I’m glad Shane is safe. She and Tina could help each other deal with their memories of being in combat down the road.
Super super chapter and resolution to a very tense situtation – you do know how to bring the drama my dear!!
Thanks for the wonderful chapter, it is great to hear that Shane is going to be alright!
AWESOME CHAPTER!!
Glad Shane is safe. I hope Tasha doesn’t tip Alice off.. because that would be Lucy would get her position back. She messed up way, way worse regardless of being Tina’s sister. Plus she is a brat. Can’t wait for to B and T alone time now that this is all over.
I will ask nicely too