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La Mer
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“No way…had……..I thought I recognized the name but I couldn’t believe it….I mean I figured that it was you….wow. I mean…I don’t know what to say…”
“Ok, you want to start with your name?” I was seriously confused.
“Oh shit…um sorry that wasn’t very professional of me was it…my name is Shane. I guess we are linked together you and me huh?”
“Wait your Shane? Shane McCutheon? My physical therapist…?”
“Yeah….. I am also the person who saved your life…I was hanging with one of my ladies watching your run when I saw what happened and I got there before things got worse…”
“You saved me?”
“Yeah…”
So she has the most intense look on her face now. The swagger is like non existent now. She seemed so….I don’t know like she was thinking about the weirdness of this whole thing….
“Hey look you’re lucky, it was just a pup that almost got you…it could have been worse…”
“You saved my life…I don’t think could ever thank you….enough…”
She blushed, a big goofy smirk. One that kinda said awe shucks ma’am. Her eyes are that kind of emerald green. The more I look at her the harder it is for her to not smile at me. I was starting to feel a little strange around her, like I wanted to tell her all my secrets, like I wanted to know all of hers, like I wanted to see if she was tanned all over….I must have been looking at her a little to intensely because she started to glance around the room nervously.
“So yeah um, the helicopter um…yeah it brought to a hospital I didn’t know which one and um…there have been a lot of attacks so it was hard to um…yeah…it was hard to find out if you were alright. So I uh never got to see how you where. And this chart says Carmen de la pica Morales so I didn’t put it together cause you surf by just Carmen Morales…wow the more I talk the dumber I sound huh? I just didn’t get one and one to add up to 2….wow um…”
“Do I make you nervous Shane?”
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Hey I havent read this yet, but I wanted to say I was just listening to NIN’s La Mer on my ride home from work about 10 minutes ago. I dunno, it’s kinda weird now that this is the title of your new story, but I like it! I can’t wait to read it.
very new twist, I love it. Your writing style is so pleasing I knew I was going to like it before I even read it.
Yes! I am loving this new fic of yours! You have a great flair for writing first person narrations. And this story premise is ingenious!!! I love the fact that you blur the “Shane’s the pants and Carmen’s the skirt” line that alot of other fics seem to hold on to! I am hooked onto this fic too, so I am going to be greedy and say, POST BOTH YOUR STORIES SOON!!!~~~
I likey! This is different. You have a nice, breezy style.
I basically love everything that you write…like this. I hope you continue this soon!
Awesome! im hooked already. Please continue :)
Fuckin’ awesome, Baby-girl!!! Please update both of your stories!!!! I’m so hooked and I give you like an infinite number of stars and thumbs up!!!! You go and do your ‘thang’, Babe and like always from me, LYLAS ;-p
Shane’s last name is spelled McCutcheon.
“…everyone is doing the 9 to 5 barely clinging to life….” I fucking hate that line. I hate it because I’m a 9-to-5er, and that line is the goddamn truth. Weird thing is I love it for the exact same reason. As for the rest of the story, I’m diggin’ it too. I thought the beginning was all Shane, but, surprise, it was Carmen; that’s when I knew you were writing another fresh keeper.