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Tears begin to roll from SHANE’S eyes.
EXTERIOR-DAX’S GARAGE-DAY
MAX drives his truck, which is making a loud weird noise, up to the storefront of DAX’S GARAGE.
DAX exit’s the garage with a clipboard and pen.
MAX gets out of his truck.
DAX
What seems to be the problem?
MAX
My truck is making this weird noise. I thought it was the carburetor, but I think it might be the transmission.
DAX
Let me take a look..
MAX
Max.
(extends her hand)
DAX
I’m Dax.
MAX and DAX shake hands.
MAX
Nice to meet you Dax.
DAX pops the top, examines the guts of the car.
MAX
This is your garage?
DAX
Yep.
MAX
Wicked.
DAX looks over at MAX and smiles.
DAX
How long have you had this truck?
MAX
About four years.
DAX
Your transmission is toasted.
MAX
Shit. What do you think happened?
DAX
I’m not sure. I can fix it, but it’s going to be pricey.
MAX
Fuck!
DAX lets the hood down and takes her clipboard and pen back from MAX.
DAX
I’ll make you a deal.
MAX
What?
DAX
You come rock climbing with me this weekend and I’ll do it for free.
MAX is totally stoked. He is trying to hide his excitement.
MAX
Definitely. Yeah. I’ll go.
DAX
Cool.
EXTERIOR-MOVIE STUDIO-DAY
BETTE drives her car onto the lot.
INTERIOR-TINA’S OFFICE
BETTE enters TINA’S office dressed for work.
BETTE
Hey Tina, I got the papers for you.
TINA
Ok.
BETTE
How are you?
TINA
I’m fine.
BETTE
I’m swamped at work. It’s admissions time. They’re breathing down my neck to let Senator so and so’s kid in even though he paints about as well as a parakeet could.
TINA
I’m sorry, Bette…I have a lot of work to do.
BETTE
Oh…Okay.
TINA
Alright.
BETTE
Do you want to drop Angelica off or do you want me to swing by and get her after work?
TINA
Could you pick her up from school?
BETTE
I can’t.
TINA
(a little annoyed) Okay.
BETTE
Is everything okay? You’ve sounded weird since that phone call last night.
TINA
(very slight attitude)
What could be wrong? (pours herself a cup of coffee, sits on the edge of her desk.)
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So…how long before Carmen finds out? And what will be the final outcome here? Lotsa irons in the fire now–what’s gonna happen with Max & Dax? So intriguing, this little story of yours!
The cast gets bigger and bigger. So when does We-Ho get the buzz about B&S.
Alice better keep her mouth shut. If she truly is a good friend then she needs to be quiet. Great interesting story. PPS.
I like the new, different plot twists. Jenny with power? Watch out, Tina’s gonna blow!! Thanks!
Very interesting story this. Looking forward to more.
Why do people want Bette and Tina to get back together so badly?Thank you so much for reading my story. I’m having lots of fun. :)
*standing in front of Cme* You are opening up a can of worms there, mam with that question….hehehe. Indeed, you do have quite a few irons in the fire…lot’s of stuff simmering. I suspect something is going to boil over soon!! Great inner dialog for Al about connecting Bette and Shane on the chart…lol!!