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LABRADORITE: PART 2
SHANE
Just for tonight.
BETTE
Okay.
INTERIOR-THE PLANET NIGHT
JENNY enters the planet with her dog.
KIT
(to JENNY)
Have you lost your ever loving mind? Get that dog out of here!
JENNY
Where do you expect me to keep her?
KIT
Not in here! Take her outside.
JENNY
She doesn’t like to be alone.
KIT
Jenny, take that dog out of here before I…
JENNY
Before you what! Kit, are you going to resort to violence?
KIT
Girrl! You better get that dog out of here.
JENNY
Okay! Okay! Okay!
KIT turns and ALICE is right there.
ALICE
Kit, is everything Ok?
KIT
I was about to knock Jenny out, I swear.
ALICE
Don’t let her get to you? She’s gone cuckoo.
KIT
Do you think I should talk to her?
ALICE
It couldn’t hurt. (notices someone at the door) Oh my God! It’s…It’s..It’s…
KIT
Who? What?
ALICE
It’s Carmen.
CARMEN spots KIT and ALICE and walks over.
KIT
Hola, Mami!
They all hug.
CARMEN
Oh, my God, you guys.
KIT
You look great, girl. Where have you been? We miss you around here.
CARMEN
I miss you guys. (teasing KIT) Uh, huh…word around el barrio is that you’re dating Papi. What happened to Angus? Bad girl.
KIT
Girrl, I gotta catch you up.
ALICE
Come on back. We have a table.
CARMEN
(worried) Is Shane here?
ALICE
No, but Helena, Tasha, and Max are here and Angus’ band is playing tonight.
CARMEN
Tasha! I haven’t seen her in ages. Lead the way.
KIT
Hey, what are you drinking?
CARMEN
Beer’s fine.
KIT
I’ll bring it back to you.
CARMEN and ALICE head back to the table.
INTERIOR-BETTE’S HOUSE-LIVING ROOM-NIGHT
CUE: Alpha’s Firefly
The living room is empty. The camera travels down the hall to just outside BETTE’S bedroom door. Faint, but hot sex sounds escape through the door.
INT-BETTE’S HOUSE-BEDROOM
SHANE is on top riding BETTE, rocking rhythmically against BETTE’S center.
BETTE
(guttural) OOOH! Right there, Shane. Don’t stop.
SHANE
(breathy) It’s good?
BETTE
(out of breath)Yeah.
SHANE brings her lips to BETTE’S, still rocking, licks BETTE’S top lip, they lick tongues, and she sucks on BETTE’S bottom lip.
EXTERIOR-BETTE’S HOUSE
TINA pulls up to the driveway. ANGELICA is sitting in the backseat reading a copy of Simone Beauvoir’s The Coming of Age in its original French.
TINA
Mommy’ll be right back, okay? I have to pick something up from Momma B.
ANGELICA signs:
Ok, Mom. Take your time.
TINA exit’s the car, lets herself into the house with her key. The moment she enters the house, she hears BETTE’S voice.
BETTE’S VOICE
OOOH DON”T STOP. It’s so good.. OOOH SHANE!
TINA’S jaw drops and a small sound escapes her mouth. She quickly covers her mouth with her hands. Her eyes show shock and surprise. She takes off her shoes and creeps to BETTE’S bedroom door to listen.
INT-BETTE’S BEDROOM
BETTE
I’m going to come. You’re going to make me come.
SHANE pinches BETTE’S nipple and BETTE shudders with a an intense hard orgasm. SHANE starts riding BETTE harder, bringing herself to climax.
Spent, they fall back onto the bed. SHANE lights a cigarette, passes it to BETTE, lights another for herself.
BETTE
That’s the best sex I’ve ever hard.
SHANE looks over at BETTE.
SHANE
It was good, wasn’t it?
OUTSIDE BETTE’S ROOM
Shocked and upset, TINA’S jaw is on the floor. She tiptoes out the door and heads to her car, gets in.
ANGELICA signs:
Did you get everything you need, Mommy?
TINA sits frozen with her hands on the wheel, but doesn’t respond.
TINA
What honey?
ANGELICA signs:
Did you get everything you need, Mommy?
TINA gives up trying to understand ANGELICA, starts the car, and drives off.
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(36 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
I like Bette and Shane together…they have always had a closeness..a love..not necessarily of sisterhood. I think it’s entirely possible that Shane is in love with Bette on some level. I don’t see how it could be anymore incestuous than Bette and Alice, or Tina and Helena, or Papi doing Alice and Helena back to back…Shane and Bette care about each other very much, which is more than any of those other pairings could say. I wouldn’t think it would happen this way though, but with more tenderness and feeling. I enjoyed tina getting what she deserved after sneaking around Bette’s house though!!!!
Any story that features a Simone Beauvoir-reading Angelica (and in French no less) must be at least partly tongue-in-cheek. You’re taking us on a wild ride and I’m thoroughly enjoying it.
Wow, you have a lot going on with Bette, Shane and Tina. Then there’s the wonderful Jenny who is just whacked. Loving this story.
Oh my gosh, this seems so wrong !!! Sooooo wrong ! Bette and Shane ??!!! This feels almost incestuous, doesn’t it ?… I always thought Shane viewed Bette as a big sister. In fact, at first, I thought it was all a dream, but there are some pretty realistic details in the descriptions… Wow, I must confess I’m a bit shocked right now. LOL !!
Gosh, I’m with Clarice. Bette with Shane feels.. Wrong. As cs said, incestuous. It really does feel like they’re sisters. I’ve never seen them in that way. But kudos for your courage. I’m a supporter of the strange couplings so I will read on, see where you take this. ADx
“kudos for your courage” hahaha~Same here too. Shabet is weird to me but I will keep going to read it :D
ugh that was so wrong!!! why oh y do u guys like to mix Bette & Shane together!!!! Thats like incest (they are family after all) UGH, YUCK YUCK YUCK!!! U got balls girlfriend!!!
Dang, girl! So, you’ve managed to hook up Bette and Shane (so, so wrong!!) and brought back Carmen? Looks like a lotta drama is to come! Weel, you’ve got me hooked!
Shane and Bette…so wrong…and so right at the same time. Its like they’re sisters, but at the same time they have the same soul to me. Both have painful pasts with family and women, so I can see them using sex to get rid of that pain….I’m torn…but PPS
Way to go girl. Shane and Bette! Bold pairing but I like it!
You must be really bored or courageous. S & B together are like putting together unlikely and unusual food ingredients to make a dish. Whateva floats your boat.
Bette . . . and Shane? . . . It feels well, not right thatz for sure . . . I alwayz thought of those two as family like sisters or even mother and daughter . . . Havin them togetha in da mix makes me feel alil’ . . . eww incest . . . but yeah otha than dat . . . Great job and due continue chicka!!! Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank da one and only chicka!!
Well, reading that certainly melted the hair off my eyeballs! Thanks?