Fan Fiction
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LABRADORITE
ALICE
A deal’s a deal.
KIT
Yes, you get to pretend like you’re the music supervisor tonight so that you can attend to Pink’s every need.
SHANE
That’s pretty skanky Alice, even for you.
ALICE
Look who’s talking.
SHANE
I’m just saying.
TINA arrives.
ALICE
Look who’s here.
TINA
Hi guys.
SHANE
Hey, Tina.
ALICE
Lookin’ good, Mama T.
SHANE
Excuse me, ladies. Duty calls.
SHANE gets up and heads for the bathroom.
TINA
She left fast. Thanks, I just came from the set. It’s been a long day…JENNY. She’s out of her mind. I wish I could quit, but I don’t want to give her the satisfaction.
ALICE
So, did you talk to Bette?
TINA
I tried to, but she isn’t ready to talk about it.
ALICE
That’s understandable. It just happened a week ago.
TINA
I know, it’s just, I want to talk about it, you know?
ALICE
It’s sort of a sticky situation, with Jodi and everything, not to mention..
TINA
I know, she’s got to be really scared.
ALICE
She is. She really is and she feels really bad about it. She doesn’t want to hurt anyone again.
TINA
(leans in and whispers) I secretly hope that Bette chooses me.
KIT’S waving ALICE over.
ALICE
I’ve got to go. Pink’s here.
TINA
Have fun.
INTERIOR-JENNY’S HOUSE-NIGHT
JENNY is at the kitchen table having a glass of champagne and petting her dog. SHANE enters from outside.
SHANE
Hey.
JENNY
How was your day?
SHANE
Crappy.
JENNY
Do you want to talk about it?
SHANE
Not really.
JENNY
If you want to, I‘m here for you?
SHANE gets a beer out the refrigerator, gets the bottle opener from the kitchen drawer, pops the top, and takes a seat at the table.
SHANE
Champagne, are you celebrating something?
JENNY
No, I just feel like luxuriating.
SHANE
(low laughter) Luxuriating? Jenny, what’s going
on?
SHANE stands up, leans over the table, and puts her face up to JENNY’S, looks directly into her eyes, their noses almost touching.
JENNY
What are you doing?
SHANE
I’m trying to see if you’re still in there.
JENNY
What!? I’m still me. I’m the same person.
SHANE
Really? I mean, are you, like, I don’t know, treating people okay at work? Ever since “LEZ GIRLS”, you’ve..
JENNY
What?! What are they saying about me? Did Tina talk to you?
SHANE
No, nothing like that.
JENNY
She did, didn’t she? That bitch, she’s spreading rumors about me, isn’t she?
SHANE
This is exactly what I’m talking about. You should try being nicer to people. It’s free.
SHANE gets up with her beer, kisses JENNY on the cheek, and heads to her room.
INTERIOR-SHANE’S ROOM-NIGHT
SHANE’S cellphone rings. She looks to see who’s calling. “BETTE’S cellphone” flashes with every ring.
SHANE
Hey, what’s up?
BETTE
I’m returning your call.
SHANE
Yeah, I just wanted to see how you were doing.
BETTE
I’m okay.
SHANE
Do you want me to come over?
BETTE
I don’t know. Maybe I should figure this out alone.
SHANE
It’s fine.
BETTE
Okay.
SHANE
Alright, I’ll be right over.
EXTERIOR-JENNY’S HOUSE-NIGHT
SHANE, with her house keys in hand, makes her way over to BETTE’S house, knocks on the door. BETTE comes to the door.
INTERIOR-BETTE’S HOUSE-NIGHT
BETTE
Thanks for coming over. Do you want something to drink?
BETTE heads for the refrigerator for two beers.
SHANE
Sure. (beat) I saw Tina at The Planet.
BETTE
Yeah?
SHANE
She seemed cool.
BETTE
That’s good.
SHANE
Did you talk to her?
BETTE
Sort of.
SHANE
Yeah?
BETTE
I told her that I needed time to think things through.
BETTE and SHANE head outside to the pool, they both roll their pants legs up and sit with their legs dangling in the pool. They sit in silence for a moment.
BETTE
I don’t regret what happened.
SHANE
I don’t either…
TO BE CONTINUED…
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(37 votes, average: 3.43 out of 5)
What an intriguing setup: I’m hooked! Your dialogue is wonderfully believable and Jenny is a hoot, although as an animal lover I’m a bit worried about the well-being of her dog.
Well, the least one can say is you got us all pretty intrigued. I really wonder what may have happened between Bette and… Who was it actually ? How frustrating !! Anyways, this is indeed a very interesting and promising start. I just think it’s a shame the chapter is so short. You’d better not make us wait forever for another update, Cm4it. Thank you very much for sharing this story with us. I have a feeling I’m going to love this.
CME, what a great start. Well this sure has me hooked already. B&S together this is going to be great!!!! Thanks PPVS
I knew it! Bette and Shane. Am I right? Good beginning…..PPS
Alright Cme!! Great start. I’m intrigued, but will not even attempt to guess the what….although my mind kept screaming: What is it?!! lol You have a nice setup for almost anything. Thanks for getting us going on and for sharing….PPS