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    Lady Slayer

    Story written on June 2, 2007 by Jobadge.
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    Chapter 2 – Formidable… (B&T Beginning)

     

    Bette continued and came to a halt when she realised Tina was no longer behind her, as she turned she noticed her new companion gazing upon two prints, side by side. 

     

    As Bette slowly approached Tina she could see that she was studying them very closely, her eyes had that far away look about them.

     

    Bette smiled as she took a moment to allow her eyes to gently roam over the vision before her.  ‘This woman is breathtaking in every aspect that I come across.,’ thought Bette, ‘not only is she more than easy on the eye, she’s been a wonderful lunch companion, and now she has been so completely taken in by the visual scenery of artwork before her…’

     

    "Do you like this piece Tina?" Bette asked quietly.

     

    "It’s amazing, just look at the way the depth of field has captured the levels of intensity of the keys and the texture of the skin on the hand above the keys also…  It’s a wonderful piece… It’s almost as if you can hear the music that the hand is about to play."  She ended quietly as she turned to Bette, feeling almost embarrassed at her own outburst of enthusiasm.

     

    Tina looked back at the photograph which had been taken looking along the row of keys on a grand piano with a hand placed floating above ready to play the most beautiful piece of music.

     

    "What’s this piece called Bette?"

     

    "Piano Keys Please", replied Bette.

     

    "It’s almost like the hand is an extension of the piano keys", stated Tina. "The two seem somehow…, a… natural fit."

     

    Bette continued to rest her gaze on Tina’s illuminated face. Tina was obviously moved by the piece and Bette enjoyed nothing better than seeing a created work transform its viewer.  Bette smiled as her mind became with how impressed she was by Tina’s knowledge of the mechanics of photography.

     

    As they made their way back to Bette’s office, Tina noticed how the time slipped past them, the extensive and in-depth tour of the gallery had taken the best part of the afternoon.

     

    Bette’s peripheral vision took in how Tina glanced toward her watch, it made her glance at her own, and she suddenly found herself trying to think of a way to prolong their time together.

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    1. Great chapter, mate. Just a bit rushed, but it’s your style, right? ;) LOLOhhh I sooo wanted Bette to find me and persuade me to show anything she wanted! Could be pics or more… LOL Liked this chap very much. Im looking forward to read more.

    2. This looks as though it will be a very interesting story, what with the two of them really keying in on the other and not being sure at all if what they are feeling and seeing really is happening to them. Love how you always know just how to write “our girls. ” Forge ahead, please. thanks for this new one Jobadge.

    3. I like this chapter much more than the first one. Did you change you style in this one? The first one seemed kind of simple compared to your present style of writing. PPS.

    8. As usual a little behind in reading. Just finished both chapter 1 and 2 and have fallen deeply in love with Bette and Tina again. I can understand why Tina took off but I am wondering if Bette is aware of what others are saying about her and to what degree that others may believe those comments. If she does then maybe she will understand that her reputation scared Tina to death which led her to bolt out the door. Please continue with this story.

    11. I’d be nervous too if Bette Porter was turning her lust laser on me! Be strong Tina, use the force! Can’t wait for more and welcome back is in order I guess from your comments!!

    12. Jo… so I caught up on your new, but at the same time old, piece. I love it… no surprises there. I especially love the way you write Tina in this story. I can just feel her reaction to Bette… and seriously who wouldn’t feel apprehensive faced with the formidable Lady Slayer…? I’m actually impressed by her. And as usual your beautiful writing impresses me. I hope you’ll let us read the rest of this story. Thank you, Jo.

    19. Only the insecure are nervous at the word “formidable”. Perhaps a reflection of a society still intimidated by strong women. Interestingly, the word has very positive connotations in French.

    20. Sooo, you posted chapter two. I just read chapter 1. It was great. Its very good to see you back. You know perfectly how to describe a scene and create the tension. I love beginnings and written by you… well, just gives a more interesting perspective. Id say please post soon (on chap 1 comment I was leaving) but you already posted – LOL – then I decided to leave my comment here. Now Im gonna read chap 2, brb.

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