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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Four
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“No.”
“I have. Three this week. It wouldn’t surprise me if he’s sold pictures of you to freaks online.”
To shut Carmen’s ongoing commentary on what was wrong with Mark, Shane pushed her tongue down her throat and kissed her in a way that had Carmen moaning in her mouth. Mark walked onto the back deck and was about to enter the kitchen when he saw the two women locking lips. He put on his game face, and walked in.
“Hey,” Mark casually said.
Shane chuckled and turned to look at Mark while Carmen wiped her lipstick off of Shane’s lips.
“Hey, Mark. What’s up?”
Mark spoke directly to Shane as if Carmen weren’t there. “Hey, I just talked to a friend of mine. He scored some ‘E.’ I’m buying enough for the weekend; we can invite a few people over…”
Shane perked up and began to stand, pushing Carmen off of her. Carmen stood and stared at Mark. “We’re not interested in doing any Ecstasy, Mark?”
This time, Mark did speak to Carmen, but his eyes never left Shane. “We’re not interested? Are you one entity now?”
Shane saw that things could easily get explosive, so she soothed. “Hey…”
“I was really talking to Shane, Carmen. So anyway, Shane I’ve got the cash. No cost to you.”
Shane looked at Carmen, then at Mark.
“I’ll pass, but thanks, man.”
Mark scratched his neck and shook his head. “God, Shane. You’re sounding kinda whipped.”
Carmen had enough. She got in his face. “I’ve got somethin’ you want, don’t I?”
Mark backed away and stared at Carmen and shook his head. The corners of his lips went up, but he never quite reached a smile. “It’s not like that.”
Carmen wasn’t fooled. “The hell it isn’t. You walk around here with a hard-on for Shane all fuckin’ day long.”
“Carmen?” Shane pleaded.
Mark moved closer. “I pay rent here. If I suggest hanging with my roommate and you don’t like it, that’s your problem.”
The idea of letting Mark slide on this was something Carmen wouldn’t allow. “Why is it that you always turn up wherever we are? LA’s a big place, but if we’re at a club, there you are. If we’re in a shop at the beach, who do we see on the boardwalk when we walk out?” Carmen got louder. “When we’re swimming at Tina and Bette’s, you’re diving in, too Do you want me to go on?”
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Amen for Carmen lashing out at Mark. Just gotta love her :). She was right about not trusting him, good thing Shane kicked him out. He deserved it. Poor Shane.
its time for tina to start to wake up… she has to hear whats going on… and in her mind she will pull it all together… and then wake up… bette and angie need her… please continue
I’m finally caught up darlin’ and as always P, you ROCK! I knew this would be good, simply ’cause it’s coming from you. I do love the way you dig deep and uncover the mess – unafraid to take on the task of doing the dirty work, which we all know TPTB can’t seem to do. I much prefer your version then the junk that hit the airwaves, which btw did nothing more then churn up my stomach acid – LOL! Thank you for keeping the characters true.Looking forward to more – especially Carmen and Shane *whistling innocently*
ina is hearing,she will be able to put the all together when she wakes up’ Stupid S/W needs to get layed. Calling Tina a vegetable. and Bette her room mate. Hell I like pillow friend better. thanks
Good! Mark’s crazy ass is out the house. All he’s done is take advantage of Shane. SeeYa Mark.
Great update!Mark is such a f*cking bastard. It´s good that Shane throw him out.I´m looking forward for your next update!!
Exceptional….really your sharmen are hot!!! Oh, and mark…don’t let the door hit your ass on the way out!!!! bu bye!!!This whole tina in a coma is tearing out my heart, she sounds like the one we know and love from long ago…pls be gentle with us!!!