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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Three
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“Well, then. I’ll check with the doctor. If he chooses to permit a group of…women…” Agatha Benson said the word women as if she were talking about a pack of disease-plagued rats.
“Pardon me?”
She lifted her body from her leather chair, straightened her skirt, and said, “I believe we’re finished now. If I have any questions, I’ll contact you, otherwise…”
“The schedule starts in the morning.” Bette stood, pressed Angelica a bit closer to her, then turned and walked out of the room.
* * * * *
Alice didn’t bother knocking. Over the past few weeks, Alice had really grown to depend on Shane and Carmen for relationship questions regarding Dana. She and Dana were still kind of new and Shane and Carmen were just beginning. Problems kept coming up between she and Dana and it helped her to talk it through with them.
“Yo, peeps.”
Alice walked through the living room, past the dining room, and into the kitchen. She opened the fridge, took out a box of Tropicana orange juice and reached for a glass in the dish drainer. She shrugged, deciding not to dirty another glass, opened the spout of the box, and guzzled a good eight ounces. Alice closed the spout, put the box back in the refrigerator and shouted again, “Shane? Carmen?”
Glancing outside, she saw a lamp on in the shed, but no one was on the deck. She walked back through the house, down the hall to Shane’s bedroom and as she opened the door said, “I’m coming in, stop fucking.” She walked in and found them on top of the sheets completely nude and fast asleep. Alice pushed Shane’s legs over and sat down. “You guys, I’ve fucked up again. Man, I can’t get this more wrong if I tried.” She waited for them to answer. “A crisis moment. If you could pay attention.” Shane groaned in her sleep and pulled Carmen against her. Alice looked at Carmen’s ass and saw a handprint. She lifted Shane’s hand and rested it on Carmen’s butt. “It’s a match.” She sat for a while longer, then stood up. “All right, later.” She stepped over the torn T-shirt and thong and walked out. As she closed the door, Alice muttered, “Freakazoids.”
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Just got caught up with your stsory today and it is very interesting. After reading what Amanda and B&TForever said, do you really mean there were spoilers about Tina being in a coma for all of S3, if so, that would explain a lot. Oh God, I hope that is true, maybe S4 will be about getting us back to the real loving couple. What a thrill. thanks for the post.
Please have Tina wake up and the entire 3rd season would have been a dream for all of the characters. Great story but Tina in a coma is scaring the hell out of me. Too close to the real thing for me. Please, Please let her wake up to a loving Bette.
I ran my mouse over the ‘next post by this author’ link, desperately hoping for another chapter. I love the length and denseness of your chapters. I wonder if writing them is as pleasurable as it is to read them. Does Bette ever put Angelica in Tina’s arms? I’m sure they both need the bond of touch. Thanks!
By the by, does anyone else think that Tony Soprano’s coma was an ill-advised choice? I wonder if The Sopranos has jumped the shark with that one. It better pick up or HBO will be going the way of SHO in my household – kaput! Anyone?
OMG! Your story is great, I just started chap. one today been reading the rest straight through. Alice walking in Shane’s room & seeing the handprint on Carmen’s ass was hilarious. Keep up the great work.
Sharmen is sexy. I laughed out loud when Alice saw the handprint on Carmen’s ass. too funny.
I really like your writting, but I would prefer Tina to wake up or atleast give some reaction to Bette. This must be devestating for Bette. I love Tina and Bette, and i hated what happened in season 3, but they are still my favourite. Make it all better, please!
i love this… i have said tina is in a coma… but please don’t let her stay there too long… oh and i love alice… i could just see her walking into a room… ok stop fucking… and then just sit on the bed… too funny…please continue
I understand your attempt to make since of IC’s debakle of S3, but PLEASE let Tina wake up soon. She will have a long journey as it is.
Love the way you write Sharmen, that’s one hella sexy scene! I can really picture Shane and Carmen behaving that way. HOT! Please keep it up:)
Hey great story. That´s the first chapter I´ve read of your sory and I really like it. Especially the Sharmen parts!Please go on sooon!
Your sharmen are frisky bunnies…, oh boohoo, did I say I was sorry to see jenny catch a plane?? sorry, but pls don’t bring a max into this bunch…One happy couple on the road to having more happy couples..right??? WAKE UP TINA!!!Tks Portia, love this season your creating!!!!
Portia…This is really well written. Lots of detail and description, good dialogue and the comments and tone are spot on for each character. Keep going.
i guess you’re going with the rumors that season 3 was all dreamed up by tina who was in coma…i like it…eventhough i would like her to wake up soon
This is wonderfully written. Thank you!
I like this. a radio is great.Music ,Alice voice on the radio a tape of the baby laughing or crying. anything. thanks