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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter Two
Lara walked to the computer table and opened the notebook, pulling out pages of the plan. She heard the shower go on and stared at the bathroom door. She took a step away from the table and honestly considered walking to the door, opening it, walking in on Dana, stripping down, and joining her. She imagined touching her soapy body, caressing that silky skin, and feeling Dana tremble against her. Suddenly, a lyric to one of hip-hop singer, Nelly’s songs came to mind, We never had a problem getting’ it done. Disagreed upon a lot, but da sex wasn’t one. Instead, she turned back to her pages.
A few minutes later, Dana came out. A towel wrapped around her body, tucked in under her armpit. “It’ll just take me a second.”
“Okay. So Dana, you eat a good breakfast, right?” Alice shouted.
“Uh-huh. A coffee. Bran muffin. Piece of fruit,” Dana answered from Alice’s bedroom.
“And lunch?”
“A salad with broiled chicken, dressing on the side. Sometimes salmon instead of chicken,” Dana called out.
“What’s dinner like for you?”
“Blanched veggies, a couple of boiled eggs, maybe a small steak.”
“That sounds really typical of a tennis player’s eating habits if what I read is true.”
“We’re all basically on the same meal plan. It works.”
“But I can offer you more…more taste, more of everything,” Lara said innocently.
Dana’s ears didn’t hear the innocence. What she heard was full of innuendo. She pulled another tank top on and tied the waistband of her shorts while thinking about the chef. Lara had offered her so much at one time. She just didn’t know how to deal with it at the time. Funny, life. When she had her, she couldn’t handle the lesbian pressure. Now that there was no pressure and no hiding, Lara could only be a friend even though her body was reminding her of what else she had been. She slipped on a pair of flip-flops and walked into the living room.
“So? What are you thinking? Double chocolate cake? A couple of donuts every morning? Fried chicken and waffles?”
Lara openly appraised her and Dana swore she saw Lara lick her lips. Oh, god, this is trouble, Dana thought. Still, she couldn’t stay away from trouble. She crossed the room to the computer table and stood beside her, looking down at the pages. “This looks great.”
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Seems like with Bette and Tina its they always need to talk. A person in a coma can still hear, ,radio,TV,and human voices. Bette needs to tak,and talk and talk. Tina always loved Bettes voice. thanks
Ooooh–Bette is a wench for saying that about Tina, but I understand the frustration and doubt she must be feeling about Tina’s recovery. I love your footnotes!
The L Word 3: The Missing 6 Months! Thank you for taking on this task. To quote Nelly (and DeBarge): “I like it,(I know you like it)I like it,I really,really like it.I want it,adore it.” …Glad you’re back! Keep up the good work! Reading your writing is my pleasure!
As much as I love Bette…and I do, she is my favorite character…I think that was an incredibly selfish thing for her to say…that she thinks Tina is in a coma because she is somehow punishing her. Geez Bette! Thanks!
i hope tina will wake up soon and see her baby, so she and bette can start their family again
I have to agree with Seahurst…Bette is so egocentric and selfish. And, she is my favorite character. Her vows included in sickness and in health.
When a loved one is in a coma for a long period of time, your own brain begins to wonder why this is happening. You begin to fight within your ownself as to why the person you love is still in this state. In this case Bette can not understand why Tina is not there (awake) and by now she is struggling with life in general. Why is it that some people can wake up within a matter of hours while others never wake up? Tina is there, she somehow has to pull herself out of the gray fog. Hopefully with the new faculities she will get the needed therapy.
Well, is Bette using daring Tina to wake up by saying that?
she has to keep talking to her… tina can hear … coma patients can hear whats going on around them.. so bette needs to keep telling tina all about angielica and the girls and how much she loves her… bette had to stop the negitively… just positive things to get tina back…keep it going… please continue
No one can say how you will respond to a loved one on a coma. It must be totaly devestating. I personaly don’t think that Bette’s remark is selfish at all. It may be irrational, but think one’s mind goes into overdrive when you fear lossing the one they love. I cried while reading this story. (Sorry, I am a Tina fan) Please let Tina be alright. let her wake up! Lovely Story!!
when my dad passed away he was sick before hand for a long time…the last day he slowly fell into a coma, anyway, my point being is that they tell you even though the person in a coma can’t respond, the hearing is the last thing to go. They can hear you as you talk to them…and so I talked and talked…Bette get off your confused horse and TALK. Again, we have not had a bountiful story like this to sink our teeth into for awhile…THANKYOU