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Lest I Forget (14)
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She didn’t really tell them much, but what she did say, she said in a pretty excited tone, and I could tell she really liked the idea for the story. That made me pretty happy, because up to that point I thought maybe she’d lost interest a little bit. She didn’t write much since we’d gotten married, and while it hadn’t been very long since the wedding, I’d been concerned. Hearing that she still had ideas and was still into writing made me feel really good. It also gave me an idea of something to do with the little enclosed area in the backyard. I didn’t know how it would work, but the idea was stuck in my head and wouldn’t go away. As with most things like that, I figured that meant I shouldn’t ignore it.
I had to file it away for the time being, though. After we got home, she wanted to order out since we hadn’t been able to use the kitchen since the fire. I was tired of sitting at home, though. “Why don’t we go out?”
“What for?”
“Um…because being here all the time is boring?” I replied, confused.
“I kinda like it. But if you want to, sure.”
It was a little weird at first, being out. I know that sounds stupid, but it was. Alice still seemed to be a little weird over what we’d talked about the night of the party. As much as I tried to assure her that things would be all right, she had an idea in her head based on experience, and it was hard for me to shake it no matter how many reassurances I made.
She was leaving in three days, which was why I’d scheduled delivery of our kitchen stuff for four days from then. I wanted her to be able to come home to a new kitchen, and pretty much a new house entirely. I knew she wanted to paint some of the rooms and things with me, but I really just wanted to have it all done while she was gone so she’d come home to what looked like a new house. I still kinda felt bad that I hadn’t bought the place for her, although I was grateful to my parents and I knew if I ever said anything about it to Alice she’d scold me. Still, it hurt my pride a little regardless.
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MT, I missed reading this story. I am thankful for your update because I want to know how A was progressing along and hear more from D talking about the rest of their years together. I am sorry that I was unable to comment for the four posts. Now that I am all caught up, I can give me two cents. Seriously, your storytelling skill is superb and I am so taken by the emotions that went along with each scene. Given both of them had issues, their love for each other carried them through out their years together. I am certain that as hard as the current situation was, together, they would survive this ordeal. As for this update, the shopping scene was hilarious with B & T making out in the public and A & D’s reaction was super cute. I hope in time we will learn more about A’s reason for not talking about her writing and her insecurity of being away on business trip. I think there was more to just about her father and mother’s time apart. Love how Shane was helping out with the shelves even though she was hurt. Judging from Jenny’s reaction, were they an item already? And you ended it with a smile from A. Just perfect!! Lastly, I sincerely hope that you will be able to resolve your financial soon. If you cannot post, we will understand. Most importantly, is your health. Whatever it is, I hope you get better soon. Thank you and please take care of yourself.
I laughed out loud at this — I could just see Alice saying it: “Gabby’s here?!” Hee! Green kitchen? Yay! They heard me! The whole kissing conversation was very Danish. I understand both Alice keeping her writing to herself and Dana being upset about it. Poor Alice seems to have a lot on her mind. Love Dana’s idea on the outdoor office. It sounds way cool. The kid talk made me go all gooey inside. Great update, MT!! Thank you so much!! Thanks also for letting us know what’s going on — I would have gotten worried. I hope you feel better soon, hon!
HOPE HOPE HOPES you get better soon and i know all about the money thing, sucks! You have my sympathy. I’m loving this post almost makes me want to cry knowing that Dana is telling this story to Alice…*tear* For someone whos voice made their living it must really blow for her not being able to speak verbally! I’m loving how supportive Dana is..Really want to know more about the history, wonder why Al wont talk to Dane about the writing thing? Dana is such a sweetheart just trying to take care of her wondeful Al…Great job MT! I love it!
weeeehh!!! The Danish making fun of Tibette had me giggling. That was cute. I loved it, I think it’s pretty neat for the group to help each other out a lot. Dana is very sweet to Alice and stuff, that’s one of the best things in the world. Thanks for the chapter. I hope you feel better soon girl. I’m cancelling cable as well, no tv for me now but hey, we can be broke together. *shrug* hehe Take care MT. x