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    Lest I Forget (8)

    Story written on December 31, 2007 by MutedTempest.
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    Dana does a lot of thinking and missing Alice’s awake-ness, which she does less of later on in the chapter since it’s no longer applicable. Confusing enough for ya? Lol.

    “Is that because you told her I’m not?” I asked.

    He just smiled sheepishly. “Maybe.”

    “Tell her I said thanks, will you? That’s really sweet of her. I’ll give her a call later on,” I told him, holding the blanket for a minute before putting it back in the bag.

    “I brought you some more stuff from the house, too…well, actually Angie did. She went over a little while ago and got stuff for me to bring, said it’d work better than having a guy try to get things you’d need,” he said, handing me one of my overnight bags. I looked into it and was relieved to see some of the stuff she’d packed, namely the razors and shaving cream. I’d been starting to feel like a fuzzball in here.

    There wasn’t a whole lot to say after that. Charlie told me a little bit about how work was going, and gave me updates on the kids. He and Angie had agreed that they were still too young to be visiting when Alice was still in her coma, and I agreed. Their oldest, Jason, was only eleven, and while he probably could have handled it, the other two would have been beside themselves trying to understand. “I’ll bring them by once she wakes up though, Ma. They ask about you two all the time,” he assured me. I nodded; I was sure the two youngest ones did. Jason was old enough to have things going on in his life, but the younger boys just adored coming over since Al spoiled them absolutely rotten and gave them whatever they asked for.

    “It’s okay, son,” I told him, and it was. After that, there didn’t seem to be much else to say, and we sat there in silence for awhile before he stood up and cleared his throat, saying he should probably get to the office and asking me to call him if anything changed. I told him not to be ridiculous and of course I would, and he said Kallie had promised to be in on her lunch break. “I probably won’t be able to get away then, but I’ll definitely be back tonight,” he said right before he kissed my cheek and left.

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    1. Damn! I forgot to comment last chapter. So sorry, MT! Great New Year’s present! Such a sweet chapter. Love that Dana could not sleep well without Alice. True soulmates. So many great touches: Dana pacing when Al wasn’t looking, showering together over the years, the knitted blanket, etc. — wonderful. Poor Dana. It is really hard to keep vigil like that. Stupid Gemma’s girlfriend! I would be willing to give her Jules if Kallie doesn’t work out. Interesting touch about Helena and Tina. I do like that Dylan was apparently there for Helena until the end. You rock, MT. Best wishes for 2008! Thanks so much for the new chapter!!

    2. By the time I finished reading this chapter, I am a lot more sober after partying all night. OMG, MaGoose, again you saved me from typing half of my comments. I love the blanket too, so A, so sweet. I was about to start a “Feed Dana” campaign and then they brought her a Thanksgiving dinner. I also like the nice surprise about T & H getting back together. I am elated to find A slowly waking up. Poor D she really needed to get some rest. I am starting to worry about her again. She could not afford to be sick. I lmao when MaGoose offered Jules. As for you, MT, I am sorry to hear that you are depressed. I am sure MaGoose will not mind letting the D from “Closure” to take care of you for a day or two. Then everyone will be happy. Thank you MT, like MaGoose said, “YOU ROCK.” And please continue to rock in 2008. So keep your chin up and I wish you happiness, good health & prosperity this coming year!

    3. Hey MT, what a way to start the New Year. Your writing continues to blow me away. I loved the part about the blanket, such an Alice thing to do…so cute. You’re teasing us a little with this story though, when I read the first chapter I accepted that there was no hope for Alice and that I had to read the story accepting it was destined to end a certain way…that was before I realised that you were in love with Alice, now slowly each chapter you are feeding us grains of hope and I’m starting to wonder if you have it in you to do anything really bad to your woman!

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