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Let it be – chapter five
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LET IT BE Chapter 5
Bette knew she was in trouble as soon as she woke up – well she didn’t wake up naturally for a start. The first she knew was the duvet was pulled from her body to be replaced by a cold sheet. And if there was one thing that Bette Porter hated more than anything else – it was being cold. She opened her eyes and glared at Tina who was dressed in jeans and an old white shirt.
“What the fuck Tina?” she demanded
“Its laundry day “ Tina replied as she pulled the duvet cover away from the duvet and moved to take the pillow cases from her side of the bed. Bette clung onto her pillow
“Oh no you don’t “Bette said growling “Don’t you dare “
Tina looked at her for a split second and grabbed the pillow and pulled the case away from it before throwing it back at Bette and storming out of the bedroom. Bette grabbed the pillow and threw it at the door before collapsing back onto the mattress as her headache began to throb with force.
“Its going to be a bad day “she muttered before trying to get comfortable again. She grabbed one of Tina’s pillows but she couldn’t fall back to sleep as hard as she tried. In the end she got up and went in the shower.
Tina was sitting at the kitchen table drinking coffee and reading the morning paper when Bette emerged 40 minutes later. Tina glanced up –Bette was dressed for the office. Just the sight of Bette in a smart grey business suit made Tina angry – she could not act as appallingly as she had the night before and just pretend that nothing had happened. But Bette was so fucking arrogant that she thought that she could and everyone would excuse her behaviour because she was the legendary Bette Porter.
Bette sat down at the table with a glass of fruit juice in her hand. She picked a mug from the mug tree behind her. Just as she was turning back Tina reached for the coffee pot and slowly poured the last of the coffee that she had made into her mug. She looked at Bette almost daring her to say one word. Bette recognised the look in Tina’s eyes. There were times when you just didn’t argue with Tina – and this was obviously one of those days. Bette’s head was throbbing – she sipped her fruit juice and considered just how many headache tables she should swallow. She got up and went through to the bathroom – the box was empty – Bette threw it down onto the floor in anger
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I like when Bette opens up and I like seeing Tina comfort her. Good thing that Tim doesn’t seem to be all too upset at Bette. Jenny is gone…yay!
Ally ummmm just WOW, what else can say:)PPS
I agree with everyone else Ally. I think the talk between B&T and the way Tina used to allay Bette’s fears were just brillant. I suppose that awaited weekend with your loved one has inspired you a great deal, cause even though I always love your writing, I really think that you’ve outdone yourself with this chapter. Well done! Now, don’t we all wish that the end of Jennny Schecter had been as simple and quick as boarding a plan to Whogivesafuck… Thanks for a great update!
This made me happy. Glad Bette both shared her fears with Tina..and really apologized to Tim. I hope you give Tim a nice girl in this fic. I actually really liked him on the show. PPS.
Fantastic, Ally. Love how you’ve addressed Bette’s insecurities and allowed her to accept Tina’s help in disarming them. I’ve enjoyed all your chapters this week and hope that you enjoy your weekend!
that was great, i loved them talking and reconnecting, it was so lovely and sweet, thanks Ally you are amazing honey, post soon.All my love.
This was nice…love when Tina takes charge and Bette listens to her
Oh Ally, you wrote the story that is every Tibette lovers dream and every Jenny haters dream too. very very lovely talk between Tina and Bette., Enjoy your time with your sweetie.
Oh my… I so loved Tina right now. She did a great job calming Bette… Grats Ally… ;)
So does that really put it to rest? Or will it hide in the shadows to nag at the most inconvenient times? Seems Tim is at ease, though.
Ally this is the best stuff I have ever read from you. I so love this story it’s gritty and WOW I don’t know it just seems on another plane. You really have stepped up your game her. Good job.
Another great one AllyE. I really do like this story and the good thing is I started it from the beginning. So happy they talked about what happened, Bette was letting it eat her up inside. Tina is a very wise young woman. Have a great weekend with Cheryl. PPS
That was awesome and good to see Bette open up to Tina and now thing are ok, love the B&T’s talk. Tim seem ok now. Please post more, thanks!
Yaaay! You did it again! You really made B&T work on the demons that were threatening their relationship and went through the whole nightmare till they could see the light at the end of the tunnel. Gorgeous chapter! Now, dear friend, enjoy your weekend immensely and misbehave with C. You both absolutely deserve your time together. We won’t bother you at all. You have given us a lot this week and you should be focused now on your other half. Big Hs & Kisses – Lucero & Marsha
Gosh I really like this story with his different loops and marvellous dialogues. Thanks and looking forward for more.
I truly truly love your story. This chapter’s grrreat!!
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You’re writing of Bette’s fears and Tina reassuring her was so right… And I love the Bette/Tim chat. I’ve never liked Jenny either so I’m just glad she’s going away…
yay!!!! god, I really enjoyed this chap my queen! You are just a genius with fan fic. I’m glad B&T finally talked about that night and about B’s fears. Ok, talk to you soon. Take care and have a nice and lovely weekend.
This was a pretty emotional chapter. Hopefully B&T can move on and there will be no drama involving Pistol Pete (lol). Loved the chat between Bette and Tim and LMFAO@Francesca for setting Jenny’s manushit, er, manuscript on fire! XD
WOW what fantastic chapter!! love how tina takes control and helps bette work though her fears!!! even better when bette went and chatted with tim…