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Let it be – chapter one
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“What choice do we have ?” Tina replied
“We find someone else “ Bette replied
“Who ? Someone we don’t know has fucking dead sperm or some dickhead like Jean Paul who talks about the pussy and the penis “
Bette sniggered
“That still amuses you “ Tina accused
“Sorry – it just does “
Bette sniggered again “ Sorry T “
Tina snorted “ I know I had a sense of humour by pass about it last month “
“Perfectly allowed “ Bette replied
“It was funny “
“It was – if you say the word I will tell him we have changed our minds “
Tina squeezed Bette’s hand
“Are you sure you can go ahead with this ?”
“I can if you can “ Bette replied
“I want a baby and I want it with you “
They fell silent until Bette pulled the Saab into the drive of their home.
“Just look at me okay ?”
Tina nodded- she had to put her faith in Bette – when the chips were down she had never betrayed her.
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Bette led Tina and Pete to their room and seeing that her wife was anxious Bette took hold of Tina and began to kiss her. Tina tasted as good as ever – how could she not taste like heaven -there had never been a time when she had not tasted so good. Behind them Pete was removing his boots – and shirt –
Bette was aware of his presence and was trying not to let it jar the mood that was beginning to build between them. It had been a while since they had made love and Bette was beginning to get the familiar stirrings of desire for the blonde.
As Bette was enjoying the feeling of moisture between her legs Pete came up behind Tina and started to kiss her shoulders – Bette focused again on Tina and began to slowly remove her top – she could see that Tina was looking at her and would be guided by her wife through out this encounter.
“Tina – why don’t you make Bette wet ?”
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the only problem i ever had with that scene was the idea that they wanted to have sex with the guy without knowing if he was clean, they were taking a big risk…i hope too this story won’t be about Tina going straight
I know many of us have played that scene out in our heads, thanks for the bravery
I’m lovin this man Bette kissing a guy eww but the fact that she would do this so they can finally have thier family shows how much she loves Tina and would do anything for her. I cannot wait to see where this goes. We all still want to walk with you on the journey to the end of your other stories so please don’t leave us hanging too long my favorite is AYNIL but I don’t care which one I read next as long as it’s soon.
YAY ! Ally, I’m so happy that someone finally took up the challenge of telling this story. I myself wondered a million times what might have happened if that threesome had actually “worked”. In fact, I really liked that scene in the show ( even though it ended up being just an attempted ménage-à -trois ). All right, all right, I’m probably just weird, but as I said, I’m really glad that someone, and especially someone as amazingly talented as you are, has decided to take up this challenge for I think this story has the potential for producing some great drama and being enthralling as “L”. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, Ally !
By the way, ( and sorry if I’m the millionth reader to notice this but ) “The long and winding road”, ” All you need is love”, ” Let it be”… You woouldn’t be a huge fan of The Beatles, Ally, now would you ? LOL !… It’s OK, you know, you can say it, I too am a fan of theirs…
They are so desperate to have a family that they both can’t think it right. If Bette can compromise the donor is not necessarily black or even an artist, why not try sperm bank instead? If the threesome goes all the way through (it seems that way), it will definitely open a big can of worms: Bette’s insecurity whether Tina is still turned on by men; the baby will always remind them “that night”…The worst is the message behind: can infidelity be justified? To me, they broke the vows to each other even it is the consensus between them to have threesome. They might not think in this way now, but it might haunt them someday especially when they facing bumps in their relationship, and we know better that relationship is always ups and downs. I’m also curious if Tina can’t get pregnant this time, will she do it again with Pete? If Pete insists this time only he and Tina, will Bette accept? The question is how far will Bette and Tina go to get pregnant? Ally, I enjoy all your stories, and you deserve all awards that you have won. PPS.
Ally dear… you could plead writer’s block and put your daily shopping lists up here instead – and I would faithfully open each and every one of them in the hope of finding you continue a story… Your writing is kind and fun and full of lovely little details, and I just hope you keep feeding us… ;-) Oh, speaking of feeding… you will continue the chef story, too, won’t you? Please?
You wnt to know what my worst fear sounds like? “Lately I’ve been having all these feelings” please don’t do that just because we feared you light hurt Ella Kennard Porter. Please!
Forgot to mention “congrtumations” and “Fuck, your writing never cease to amaze me”
After a while, and coming back to this scene it always did intrigue me, like I would wonder what if he had stayed and gotten her preggers?, coz I was looking at it and thinking, well obv at the time, the baby resembling both parents were not taken into consideration, and it makes you wonder, had that dude not left, and Marcus had not been used as a donor, the storyline would be totally different. For instance when tina has Angie, and she is with Henry and his family, the child stands out, and instantly they think she is adopted, if it were the other way round, the tables would be turned.
I can’t wait to see where you take this. Please post another soon.
Well, you’ve defiantly got me intrigued. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Can I make a prediction? I think Bette is gonna flip especially if he gives Tina an orgasm. It’ll kill her………….she is already so jealous. That’s what’s in my cookie!!
I love all of your stories ally. But it always irked me in the show that B&T were so stupid they’d risk their health and that of their unborn child (if T did get pregnant from this random male) with something like an STD.
I like this twist going way back to the pilot but have to say- how do they know he doesn’t have any diseases and I can’t imagine Bette not caring about that???
Wow Ally…thank you! I am both honored and incredibly grateful that you feel that way about my writing. Again…WOW!! You have a talent Ally. You have a wonderful ability to capture emotions, and do it while at the same time surrounding those emotions with rich characters and deep, satisfying storylines. You take chances ALL the time with your stories, so don’t think that you play it safe. You, like Janet Marie have the talent to be a queen of drama without being a drama queen…which takes tons of talent. I am very interested in where you will take this story. Writing is a part of you now, like breathing, and eating. I think you know that and are at peace with it, which is why you can continue on the level you do. It is a precious gift Ally…and you take care of it well. Again…thank you.
Ally….this is brilliant as always. I can’t wait for you to continue Mate! HUGS!
Great twist Ally. It will be interesting to see how this all plays out in your storyline. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. You are a brilliant writer.PS
for me its the ick factor. but watta ya gonna do if ya need some sperm, i guess. interesting where you decided to write from. thanks.
Ally when you say you are going to take a risk you jump in head first without even knowing how deep the water is! Of all the fvcked up things that IC did with B&T; I always thought this was the most far fetched thing she brought into the show…not only is this the furthest from anything that the original “alpha” character of Bette Porter would have allowed to happen, it was the first completely unrealistic thing that IC brought into the show…(and she seemed to get more and more unrealistic from this point on.) When I was watching this scene play out on the show, my feeling was that it seemed like some VERY poorly done porn scene. There are just too many other ways to acquire sperm in our world today. And B&T had only just begun to travel those paths. They were nowhere near this point of desperation. Bette would never have wanted this to happen; and if it did, the statement that Bette made in the CAC when trying to convince Tina that she was “OK” with it… “And if we make it together – then it’s enough for me to know that it’s our baby ” …would soon come back to haunt Bette. I doubt that any relationship with one personality type of a super-jealous alpha like Bette Porter would be able to withstand this. It would eat at Bette until there was nothing left of her. If they did go through with it, and Tina did just happen to get pregnant, Bette would never be able to look at the child without the thought of Pete’s dick inside of Tina. That thought, along with all the demons that come along with it, would be on constant rewind in Bette’s head. I am interested in seeing where you are going with this Ally, but if it is to the dark scenario that I have mentioned here, I sadly won’t be going on this “risky” journey with you. I wish you the best of everything with your relationship endeavors and hope you have a wonderful birthday!
By the way…what makes you think that you don’t take risks in your writing? Your stories are always very well balanced, with a little bit of everything in them – including risk. Doesn’t the fact that your readers feared you were going to have something bad happen to baby Ella tell you anything? You have won nine (count ’em) NINE awards which were very much deserved. You have a very large and very loyal fan base that love your writing and worship you for what you do. I love your writing and your stories Ally, and I thank you for sharing them with me.
yuck, I can’t even imagine Bette kissing a man!!!!!! I don’t usually read rehash’s of the actual L Word so this scenario replayed is yuck yuck yuck….never mind!!! as Bette would say.
Holy shit this is interesting!
This is intresting I like the new twist your giving to it. Don’t let us wait to long for the next part! I would like to know what happens next when that pete somthing leaves.
Very interesting….I always wondered what would have happened if that whole scene actually happpened….Although I have been reading fanfic since it’s very beginning, I don’t usually comment, but I just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed all of your stories. You are truly a gifted author and thank you for sharing with us. I know this story will be as great as all of the others. Thanks!!!
Hello allyemmerson , I absolutely love your stories and I cannot wait to see where this one goes but I’ve got this fear that this is going to bring the whole “Henry” syndrome :P back and that Tina might feel fancy towards men again… I’m scared. PPS, Sincerely JC
This was one of my favorite scences in season 1 because of course we all know what happened after he left, but I am very curious to know what will happen when he stays & how it will effect both B&T. You’re great Ally!
Ally, I think your being a little hard on yourself in you AN’s. I’m not an educated critic or anything but I’v read all your stories and they have kept me very intrested, I look forward to seeing another one soon. Md
ooh, interesting start, choosing that jumping off point in S1…
Ah Ally, you naughty wench! This part should be pretty interesting. For the life of me I don’t understand why you, the all-time fanfic award winner should be insecure about her writing. However, I’m all for you jumping into new places-I think we all could stand some of that.
the shit is so gonna hit the fan!!!!
bring it on!
I always wondered why they didn’t just go back to Jean-Paul? At least he was handsome. I’m curious to see how this goes!
Very interesting. And quite brave, considering your Author’s Note. Your want to delve deeper into more complicated matters proves you have the right drive to expand on your talent. I’m liking the beginning, your writing is quite exquisite. Thanks for sharing. AD x
Hey Ally! great start. I was missing the good (bad?) old days on the show and watched the pilot last night. So imagine my delight when I wake to this new story from one of my favorite fanfic authors!! I was wondering where you going with the scene, so I do look forward to the rest. I’m always amazed to see a person that is so talented, show they have insecurities like everyone. It means you are human. You are also very brave, because open yourself up to criticism every time you post. with hundreds of chapters posted, that is some heart you have. congrats on your latest award. pps
Well now. This should be totally interesting. I wonder if Pete’s a straight shooter, so to speak? Hrm. Anyway, I’ll be waiting for the next part. Thanks for the post, ally
I think you know by now, we will read any and everything you write. You’re just that good, girl!!! I like the beginning of this one. I always wondered what would have happened if the guy had not left and they went through with the threesome. PPS
Ally E definately continue this.I am curious as to the conclusion.Ijust hope this doesn’t like someone said bring the Henry stuff into it.
I hope this is a happy story…they get pregnant differently, no miscarriage, and therefore no affiar. And umm, please don’t let this bring up S3’s lame Tina goes straight BS. Interesting though.. and a TiBetter can seemingly trust you with your track record so..
Ok, Ally, we shall fasten our seatbealts. Lead the way to take us on a different trip, to be unravelled by your imagination. We are ready to take off. Lucero & Marsha
Very interesting twist on an iconic L word scene. I guess I am nervous about Tina’s constancy as well. We know that if she does enjoy the sex, Bette will be haunted by the fear that it was the guy that turned her on, rather than Bette. Oh what a tangled web we weave… PS Ally, we all love your stories. I am so enchanted with Ella’ birth etc. Usually fan fic doesn’t take Bette and Tina that far into their relationship, but this has been amazing. You deserve every award you have won. Thanks.
Ally, now don’t go thinking about throwing out the old, comfortable, stuff……like a faded pair of Levis…sometimes they are the best
hi there- interesting story line to pick up. i always found it so hard to believe that the writers on the show took us to this place, especially as one of the biggest sperm banks in the country is in LA. looking forward to your spin on this.