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Let it be – chapter two
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“Do you regret it?”
“I don’t want to repeat it but if it gets what we want – then no “
“Are you okay – did he hurt you?”
“You wouldn’t have let him but no he didn’t “
Bette took hold of Tina’s hand and squeezed it
“If I had thought for a split second that you were distressed I would have stopped it “
“Bette – look at me babe “
Bette looked into the bright hazel eyes of her wife
“It might have been wrong – it might have even been stupid but we did it. I know you well enough to know that however it happened – you are going to punish yourself over the outcome “
“I just looked at him at one point and it dawned on me that we had broken every rule we have lived by for so long “
“No we haven’t – it doesn’t change my feelings for you Bette “
“It’s changed mine “Bette said honestly
The look of horror on Tina’s face startled Bette
“Oh sorry – what I meant that I’m more in love with you – do you believe me?”
“You are amazing Porter “Tina said
“Not as much as you are “
“You put aside how scarily in control you like to be and allowed me to have intercourse with a man because I am ovulating and you know what a child means to me. Last month I came so close to packing it all in – telling you that I wasn’t ready and that I wanted to go back to work. I was angry with you when you made fun of the whole business with Jean Paul – I was mad with you because you wanted Sean and it hadn’t occurred to you that his stuff might be blanks. I thought some terrible things about you Bette – and I know that I have been a moody cow who takes it all out on you and forgets that you have an amazingly high pressure job and your job feeds and houses us. Tonight – yes it was insane but it was an insanity that we both participated in “
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Wow. I really hope this doesn’t drive a wedge between them especially if Tina does become pregnant by him.If it was me I would have made Tina at least shower first.Just Kidding.I have faith in your writing.
OMG!!!! WOW!!!! I just hope Bette does not let it eat her alive and she talks to Tina. Thanks Ally PPS
Yeah, I definitely hope this doesn’t come between them. It would suck if this spurs Bette to infidelity.. or away from Tina in any way. Especially since it was Bette’s idea. Its something they did. Its over. Move on. Hopefully with a kid.
Great story again. You are a born writer! You are very capable of taking the existing details of the lovely series and creating something even more beautiful. Well done and have a nice birthday tomorrow! I send my love.
Great story again. You are a born writer! You are very capable of taking the existing details of the lovely series and creating something even more beautiful. Well done and have a nice birthday tomorrow! I send my love.
Bette’s making me a little nervous with her thoughts. I’m not so sure she’s going to get over this. I hope she does……we’ll see. Love it Ally. PPS!!
Hello Ally, This is an intrguing and interesting play on the events of the pilot. I sense I lot of ‘what-ifs’ in this tale. Good to see that the gals are trying to work through the events of the previous evening. OK, his stench was on Tina but that was only until Bette’s skilled hands and mouth overwhelmed Tina and took her to the gates of heaven. This is the difference between fucking and making love. The former is a purely physical act which releases tension while the latter is the whole deal – toe-curling, lip smashing, puddle making, sheet gripping and Banshee screaming deal. Strange how the tactile reminders fade while the mental one continue to punish us. I do hope that Bette can get past this. It will take time and she needs to share it with Tina. Trust Tina with her innermost fears. No I really can wait until use wonderful words continue this dynamic and different drama. Many thanls fro all that you do. It is so appreciated and respected. Your Loyal Fan.
I’m like Bette. I couldn’t get the image out of my head. I still have shit from years ago that plays now and then on a constant loop in my mind and it’s haunting. And now for something gross. When Bette entered Tina I was thinking, “EWWWWWWWWWWWW SPLOOGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Yes, I’m 27 going on 14. ;)
This is great. Hopefully, Bette won’t let this destroy their relationship and will continue to communicate with Tina what she’s feeling.
I haven’t commented before but this is an amazing story and I just love it.PPSHappy Birthday for tomorrow, my birthday is on the 25 too:)
So key here is the wedge you talked about…if they choose to let it come between them. I’m hoping that this story goes on long enough to see them thru. I’m a bit surprised that Bette didn’t have her and Tina shower before making her mark on Tina again. I would have thought that the aftershave smell etc would have been to strong to overcome…Great chapter Ally!!!
Truly profound writing :] Bravo.
like i used to tell my kids, be careful of what you wish for. but well see what happens. thanks.
I love how you have taken a scene from the show and recreated a new story with it. You are a fabulous writer and I have loved all your stories. I trust you with this one.
This was Bette’s suggestion so if she let’s it cause strife between them she only has herself to blame. They love and would do anything for each other. Granted most couples would never introduce a third party to thier relationship but they both agreed so there should be no harsh feelings towards each other. What’s done is done if they need to they should talk it out and then leave it in the past. PPS
Bette’s fears have only just begun to surface. Hopefully she & T will continue talking about everything, as you wrote them doing so well in this chapter Ally. But…if T is pregnant, will Pete waive his rights to the baby? Tina did lie to him and tell him she was infertile, but in order for Bette to legally become the baby’s other parent, he will have to sign away all of his rights. When the baby is born and looks like Pete will Bette still be able to manage her demons? And B&T may be free from disease, but what about Pete? Did he donate more than what B&T wanted? One of the many things that Tina is going to have to do in the next four to six weeks is get tested – for everything. And she will have to continue being tested on a regular basis for some time thereafter. I think Bette and Tina will be kicking themselves the ass the more they think about this…it may have felt like it in that moment, but given a few days I think they will both begin to understand that their situation wasn’t nearly as desperate as they felt it was at the time. They will soon begin to realize all of the other options they had available to them. But as you said Ally…it’s already done. Now only you can lead us down the path and let us know whether or not they can make it together. Your writing is phenomenal Ally.
This is such an interesting plot. There are so many possibilities with this storyline and so much DRAMA! I am so loving it! Post Soon!
Interesting twist of the plot. Trust is the main key, here. B&T need to lean on each other and talk. Lack of trust always put a lot of pressure on a relationship & it can deteriorate & destroy it. But, we believe that love & trust is the foundation of B&T’s relationship, therefore, they might be able to overcome anything.- Have a happy birthday and keep the wheels of this story turning and unfolding. Big hugs & kisses. Lucero & Marsha
Tina may have gotten fucked by Pete, but Bette surely has fucked herself. Whether or not Tina conceives as a result of this, the plan was truly ill-conceived.
Ally, I’m sure that you will make this all okay, Right?
It’s alot like “Indecent Proposal” the movie, but so much better. Me think Bette is going to have a problem with this one. I know I could not deal with it. Love this story ally, keep the chapters coming.
Bravo Ally! If this is the result of you challenging yourself as a writer then I say you need to challene yourself more often. Great chpaters so far and I can’t wait to read the next one. PPS!
uh yeah, i couldn’t done that unless she had a shower with me of course but the smell and residue of a man still there, ugh, too much!!!!! I never did think that was a good move…& I know for a fact I couldn’t be there…
Wow this is awesome and love it!
I feel thzt by reassuring Bette, you’re reassuring me! That (in the show) is my most favourite scene ever, written by favourite author it’s just perfect. Thanks.
Hi. I love your writing and find this story interesting. But geez – what a monumentally stupid mistake! They have no idea about this guy – his medical, family or social history. He could also be shooting blanks for all they know, and it could all be for nothing.
glad you didn’t give us the blow by blow. I think if I were Bette, I would have taken a shower with Tina first, but thats just me. Nothing is more of a turn off than smelling a man’s scent on a woman….YOUR woman. pps
I love this story. I think that this would have been a better stroyline for the show in S1. It was a little off the wall but really showed how much they wanted to start a family and how sometimes our judgement is clouded in the pursuit of a goal. Of cours the whole thing would have been easier had they just bought sperm from a sprem bank…..but without all of the potential drama! More please!
I enjoy all your stories. I often wondered what would have happened if they went through with the threesome. I always thought Bette would have stopped it. Great story.
This is such an interesting premise for a story. The fact that to begin with Bette willingly gave up the control and now she has to deal with the consequences with noone but herself to blame. I’m very intereste to see where you take this