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Let It Happen – Chapter XVII
Laughing, he was about to kick it again towards Bette, but another tow-headed child, younger than him, a little girl with cute pig tails ran towards him, and attempted to kick it from him. The other kids soon crowded around them, shrieking. A couple of women, presumably the mothers, entered the grove, jogging in, followed by a couple of men, more relaxed, presumably the fathers. They all began to shout rapidly in French, trying to get control of the kids, who were now running around, chasing each other.
Bette and Tina observed the antics of the kids, hands entwined with each other. The impish little boy had picked up the ball, and had turned toward Bette. Bette winked at him, motioning him to kick the ball again toward her. He did, and it careened closer to Tina, who alertly tapped it sideways toward Bette. Bette smiled at her, holding the ball for a second with the elegant edge of her open toe sandal. She turned to the boy, just as a blonde woman, came up next to the boy exclaiming. She turned toward Bette, “Pardon mademoiselle,” she began apologetically. Bette had smoothly kicked the ball softly towards the boy as she spoke.
“Non..non..,” Bette responded, and smiled warmly at the woman. The woman smiled back, and pulled the boy along with her, as they turned to join the rest of their raucous group, as it was exiting the grove. The boy turned to look back at Bette, as he grasped his mother’s hand. Bette blew him an air kiss, and gave him a small wave goodbye.
Tina surveyed the exchange between Bette and the boy. “No one’s spared your charms, huh Bette?,” Tina asked laughing slightly. “That boy probably has a crush on you now.”
Bette smiled back at Tina, “You know I love kids, Tina. I told you that back in LA, when we first met.”
They were tracing the low relief carvings depicting children in the triangular tympani. They were now alone in the grove. It was quiet around them, and the only breaks in the silence came from the classical music piped into the grove, and the chirping of birds.
Tina asked Bette, in a quiet voice, “Bette do you remember the pregnancy tests we bought a few days after the insemination?”
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How excruciating the story is!!!!
“They were relieved to be coming out of their individual circles of hell, finding each other, and like Apollo, they were emerging from the depths of the ocean.” Beautiful…
Passionate about greek mythology myself – well, as a little girl I was so proud to find a story about my own name Ariane ! – I’m more than ever captivated by the sense of magic in your story, through special places, legends (Aristophanes’ famous myth about soulmates), balancing between fires of passion and tragedy of lost paradise, our beloved two suffer a lot but I’m confident that all these tears will be like rain drops mixed with the sun of their shared love : creating a rainbow – until a happy ending…
Still slowly savouring your tale, dear talented author :-)
A.
Hi there! Thanks so very much for your post. Am particularly tickled that you were into the Greek and other cultural references. I hope you continue reading the next chapters and similarly enjoy them. Sorry this reply is so late — I’ve been unplugged for much of the last three weeks or so, hiking in remote places and sailing in the vast Pacific Ocean.
Hope you’ve had a great summer!
S