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Let it Ride- Chapter 16
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Alice was less concerned with the disturbing their neighbors and more concerned that neither Helena nor Dana were in the loft.
Finally, she saw a shadow cover the peephole and she heard Dana’s muffled voice through the door, saying, "Alice? Hold on a second!"
Alice groaned and wailed miserably in response, "I don’t have a second, Dana! And I have to pee."
Alice let out an agonized moan and shifted from one foot to the other as her left arm started to shake from the effort of holding the tray aloft.
Finally, the door swung open and Alice said hurriedly to Dana, "Grab something!"
Dana looked from the wobbling tray to the donuts on the ground and back to the guitar case slipping through Alice’s fingers before she lunged forward and made a grab for the guitar case.
Gratefully, Alice settled another hand beneath the cardboard tray and started hustling Dana inside the loft. "Go, baby!"
Dana picked up the case and bustled inside as a harried Alice brushed past her and darted into the lounge. Abruptly, she halted in the middle of the room and pivoted to face Dana.
A mischievous smile overtook her features and she looked at Dana appreciatively, saying, "Why are you only wearing a towel?"
Dana’s mouth fell open at Alice’s sudden derailment and she said flippantly, "I was hoping to seduce you on the way to the bathroom."
Alice grinned and said smugly, "That’s so cute, Dane. You know, I think this has got to be my second favorite outfit on you. Seriously."
Dana set the guitar case down and moved closer to Alice; grabbing some of the burdens in her arms to deposit onto the coffee table.
She was standing so close to Alice that Dana could feel the musician’s belt buckle outlined against her belly through the fluffy towel.
Lowering her voice, she said curiously, "What’s your favorite outfit of mine?"
Cocking her hips forward; a confident smile attached itself to Alice’s lips as she whispered, "This-" while she unrwapped Dana’s towel slowly.
Towel in hand, she swallowed Dana’s gasp into her kiss, and turned quickly to run towards her bedroom. Cackling gleefully, she called out as she passed Helena’s room, "Don’t come out, Hel! Dana’s in the nude!"
Dana didn’t waste anytime sprinting down the hall after Alice.
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Poor Helena. I hope she finds someone who is a better match for her. Dana is so sweet with wanting to help Helena and making sure Alice’s papers don’t tip over. But, man, she is heading for a rough ride over Parent’s Weekend. “I was hoping to seduce you on the way to the bathroom.” — Hee! And the towel thing at the end was so Danish. As for “6 Days”… Keep in mind that you may have limited yourself to four parts, but, you have unlimited *sub-parts* to work with. ;-D Thanks again for the wonderful stories!
HEY! I’m glad to see you’re posting again. I miss the last post and had to go back to catch up, but now I’m back! Dana’s mother thinks that she found a man that stole her heart? Wow..I don’t think things will be good for Dana at Parents Weekend. I hope that the concert goes great for A-Okays and Helena. I see that you’re bringing Tina more into the story..What’s bothering Helena?? Will she let it out and tell someone?? Of course, I love Alice and Dana together. They are so sweet and cute and especially funny AND sexy…Can’t wait for the next chapter…THANKS!
heeeeeey i missed you and ur fast posts lol love this story always will hope they get it on hahaha u write em so well they just semm so perfect such a sweet story…oh and i sense drama with the fairbanks’s coming into town eee can’t wait love abit of drama :)
lol Alice is so gonna be in trouble for that one! That was good. I can’t wait to read Parents week. That should be interesting hehe. It’s sad that she feels she can’t be out though, hopefully all that’s gonna be okay soon. thanks for updating PPS:D
Hey Frip first so sorry to hear about your breakup but your young and you will find someone else just for you!! Anyway, I loved how you have helena brooding about something other than Bette. And poor Dana her parents coming to meet her new BF and AL,,,lol,,great chapter!!
that was pretty funny. they would be my favorite outfits too. sorry about the breakup. and school sucks. sooo glad i’m done with that. team usa 4-eva.
fripster, so happy to see you posting. Sorry to hear about your breakup. Hope it is for the better. Thanks for sharing the noodles incident. I swear those drinks are equally deadly. Now hopefully, I am a little older and wiser. Must admit that I still enjoy a couple here and there. But nothing like before. Again, I can’t stop laughing. You are just so remarkably good with this story. “soundproofing the walls… the stack of paper… fall off and the subsequent explosion of frustration… to drown herself inside it… swimming pool is on the roof…” & A trying to hold on to her donuts, coffee and guitar case then telling H that D was naked. The fun just doesn’t stop. I can’t wait to read about the Parents’ weekend. This is one night cap that I have treasured. Thanks.
Awwww, so cute. I just love how adorably you write Danish in each other’s company. While they’ve both got their issues, when they’re together none of that seems to matter, and it gives me hope that maybe somewhere out there, something like that really exists. Maybe not, but I kinda like deluding myself about it. Anyway, sorry about the breakup dear…although now I might just have a chance. No? Well, okay, but at least I tried. I’m totally kidding, don’t mind me, I’m rather sleep deprived. As to soccer…sheesh. It was beautiful until that game. I adored watching something so great, but so secret at the same time. Seriously, one of the few sports we do really well in on a worldwide level, and hardly anyone cares??! Ridiculous I say. But yeah, that game depressed me for days. It was like watching a star die. Okay that’s totally melodramatic but it did make me sad, lol. I should really go to sleep before I make any less sense than I am.