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Let it Ride- Chapter 2
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Alice was still asleep, sprawled on her stomach with her face squashed against the mattress. Her pillow was stuck somehow beneath her torso. Her hair was wilder than it had looked the night before and Dana had to laugh.
She reached out her hand to smooth Alice’s hair down and paused suddenly, her hand hovering over Alice’s head.
Snatching her hand back, she tucked it underneath her pillow lest temptation to touch Alice should overwhelm her she and continued to watch Alice, this time more seriously. Strangely, once she’d realized where she was, she hadn’t felt any of the awkwardness or discomfort she would have felt if she’d woken up next to anyone else. Innocent as it was, she would have felt ridiculous with nearly anybody other than Alice. She couldn’t even imagine being in the same situation with Shane, much as she liked her.
Dana honestly couldn’t explain it so she did what all Faribanks did; she ignored it.
Still, she coudln’t explain this desire to be close to Alice and she couldn’t stop her stomach from shifting happily at the feeling of Alice lying just inches away from her. Letting her imagination carry her away, she wondered what it would be like to wake up with Alice regularly and to be allowed to touch her whenever she wanted.
The thoughts caused her such intense happiness that she barely contained a little squeal. It came out sounding like the sound of someone strangling a squirell and Dana saw Alice mumble something unintelligble before burying her face further into the sheets.
There was a soft knock at the door and Dana looked up in surprise. She’d completely forgotten anyone else lived with Alice. Pulling the covers up even though she was wearing clothes, Dana sat up just in time to see Helena poke her head in.
She seemed surprised to see Dana but covered her confusion with a grin as she said simply, "Hello again. Breakfast?"
Dana looked back at the sleeping Alice and then to Helena, saying, "You made breakfast?"
Helena shook her head, and said, "It’s Saturday."
Dana looked back, clearly perplexed.
Helena grinned and elaborated, "We have a standing order to the bakery down the street. Courtesy of Mummy."
Dana nodded in understanding. She was pretty hungry. "Should we wake Alice?"
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This is a great story. Please continue with it. The chemistry between those two is just so natural. I love it. Post soon.
Another chapter so soon?!? Squee!! Loved this line “so she did what all Faribanks did; she ignored it” — that is Dana in a nutshell. Great job incorporating Helena into the story. I love the sweetness between Alice and Dana at this stage. I’m looking forward to you next post!! Oh — and please — let’s keep Dana alive. OK? ;-D
Just found your story and am thrilled – it really great and I love where you are taking it … yeah, more danish, hurray.
Am I glad to read your 2nd chapter within 12 hours? What a wonderful surprise. Indeed another sweet chapter. I can’t wait to see Dana coming out of the closet. Now that you shared with us your writing credential, I am sure the rest of the story will be great. Those two are meant to be together. I am looking forward to your next post. Thank you for writing Danish. There is just not enough around these days. Thank you again.
i loved it please post very soon i was so disappointed when i realised i was at the end and had no more to read, its really great!cant wait for alice and dana to get together!pps!!
great story man loved both your chaps, danish is so cute i love your writing :)
I meant to say story not stories..This is your first. And I love the last word that Alice said. Did you get that from Star Wars? lol Just wondering..
You keep me wanting more and more from your stories. You’re a nautral with this story. The chemistry is so amazing, and the characters are are perfect to the tee. I really glad that you’re writing this story. I love it so far, and I can’t wait to see where Alice and Dana end up. You’re doing a wonderful job. Keep it coming. PPS.