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Let it Ride- Chapter 8b
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The conversation continued in that vein for some time before Dana was surprised to find that Alice had nodded off, her half eaten burger still clutched in her hands.
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Dana woke to find Alice’s bedroom dark and the bed beside her half empty. Squinting in the dimness, Dana slid on a pair of the musician’s sweatpants and walked out into lounge area of the loft.
Helena’s door was shut and Dana could see that no light was on underneath it.
Passing it quietly, Dana could hear the low rumble of the stereo and she could just make out the outline of Alice in one of the chairs.
She was curled uncomfortably into a bizarre half-horizontal position and a notepad lay open and dangling precariously from the side of the chair.
Her guitar was on the stand beside her and Dana smiled at the endearing picture.
Gently taking the pad, she glanced briefly at some of Alice’s frenzied, formless chickenscratch before she closed it and deposited it on the coffee table.
Then she dropped her hand to Alice’s cheek, caressing it softly as she said, "Alice, come on, honey. Let’s get you back to bed."
Alice mumbled something incoherent before trying to roll to a different position. Dana was accustomed to the struggle of waking Alice and knew that short of throwing water in her face, which was Helena’s preferred method, there was only one way to wake Alice from her stuporous sleep.
Helena had once demanded to know the secret when Alice had emerged from her bedroom on time and completely dry. Dana had blushed and told Helena the trick and the taller brunette had said laughingly, "Well, I’ll leave that to you. But I should have guessed."
Now Dana leaned over, her breath warming Alice’s neck as she dropped her lips to it, sucking lightly as her hand sought Alice’s breast beneath her sweatshirt.
Almost immediately, Alice began to stir and Dana quickly pulled back, smirking and saying under her breath, "Horndog."
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Alice woke the next morning feeling particularly jaunty. The early morning sex probably had quite a bit to do with it but Alice also had a simple, bona fide good feeling about the day. Dana was being especially attentive, perhaps due to their impending separation; Operation Hellcat Picasso was about to commence; and she’d had a rousing, raucous round of typically passionate, playful sex with Dana. Did she mention the sex?
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(Love it)3 These 2 are absolutely adorable. I was so happy to see them talking about their issues. Let the game begins, Operation Hellcat Picasso! I hope Alice wouldn’t get a cold and ruined her concert. From now on, A would not be allowed to fall asleep in the living room without a blanket or D by her side. And that is an order (just joking). fripster, btw I will not be able to comment if you post again at 3am EST. I need to get up at 8 tomorrow. So pardon me if I skip one. Until next time, have fun.
You are posting faster than I can comment. I love it!! This chapter really emphasized that no matter how much more “experience” Alice has, they both have very little real relationship experience. Loved the wake-up trick, Operation Hellcat Picasso, etc, etc… You do an amazing job balancing the drama parts with the sweet and funny.
so youre totally spoiling us (me) with such frequent posting…not like im complaining or anything, i absolutely adore this story. but im just hoping that u keep up the way u have been b/c im so addicted.
Hey frip you sure did post super fast,,LOL,,,but I liked that. I am really like this Dana and Al, plus adding Helena in as Als best bud. and now let the fun begin with getting Helena and Bette together….Great chapter frip.
These two women are soooooo adorable!!!! I really wish that Dana was still on the show. Anyways, is Alice getting sick??? Let’s hope not, but then Nurse Dana will be at the rescue. I can’t wait to see what will happen when Alice and Dana try to hook Helena up with Bette. This should be very, very interesting…PPS
You are a Danish writing genius!! I loved the talk they had in the car and how each one is starting to open up about how they are feeling. Alice’s speech was very heartfelt. I loved the wake up trick Dana used on Alice, how funny. I hope Alice doesn’t get too sick with the show coming up and all. Keep up the good work and the quick posts.
Seriously, child. Do you EVER sleep??? I feel like a tard only doing one post every week or two, sheesh. That and the fact that I barely ever manage to leave comments for you tells me that I need to quit working/studying so much and seek out a way to pay bills by fanfic. This chapter was adorable sweet. I love the way you write these two their relationship is so stable and mutually loving despite both of them having uncertainties. And since you don’t like it when I say your story is better than mine, I’ll refrain and leave it with nothing more than “this is freaking awesome.”
awesome. both posts were excellent. i love the super quick posting. i hope i wake up tomorrow to find another. no pressure. they are so cute. and thanks for not completely being scared of my danish stalking. its only a mild case, really, i swear. have a good one.
yay! you posted again! I love the fact that their talking, and of course the hellcat picasso operation sounds great.:)