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Let it Ride, Chapter One
When Shane had finished speaking, Dana caught sight of a tall, exotic beauty walking toward them. Comically, Dana glanced to either side of her quickly and then behind because the girl was striding forward purposefully, and her eyes were locked on Dana’s. Just when Dana was about to leap out of her chair, the girl said brightly, "Shane!"
Dana practically puddled into relief as Shane tossed a one armed hug around the girl. With her arm still around the taller woman’s shoulders, Shane turned to Dana and said, "Dana, this is Bette Porter, another friend of mine. And of Alice’s."
Dana hadn’t missed the way Shane’s eyes had sparkled and the special emphasis she put on the word "friend" when talking about Bette and Alice. Intrigued, but not wanting to be impolite, especially to someone as beautiful as Bette, Dana nervously offered her hand and repeated, "Bette? Like Bette Midler?"
Shane rolled her eyes and grinned as Bette said graciously, "Just like Bette Midler." If Bette found the reference odd, she didn’t say.
Dana bumbled along, "Yeah, my parents love Bette Midler. I can’t really stand her, but I do kinda love to hate her. I mean, her stuff comes on and I just sing along like a zombie. It’s weird."
Shane was laughing outright now and while Bette seemed to want to laugh along with her, she managed to nod as though she completely understood.
Bette said gently, "So, is this your first time to see the A-Okays?"
Dana looked at Shane for confirmation and Shane said, "Alice’s band, Dane."
Nodding, Dana said eagerly, "Yeah! But Shane played some of their stuff for me. I really like most of it."
Dana looked back at Shane to find her openly making eyes at an attractive blonde on the other side of Bette. The issue of sexuality had come up once or twice and Dana had found Shane’s honesty refreshing. She’d longed to say something but felt it was best to hold her own cards close to her chest.
Bette, seeing Shane’s intentions, came around to sit on Dana’s other side to allow the blonde to sit.
Dana grinned at Bette and said conspiratorially, "That was selfless of you. I think she came over here to talk to you."
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(35 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
Welcome Fripster! This is your first? I would have never guessed. I always love reading about the 3 musketeers and especially a happy Danish story. You did well with Dana’s behavior. A famous Pieszecki is definitely a great asset. This is a good start and can’t wait to read more about their college life and adventure. PPS.
Love it! I have the same question… This can’t be your first fic, can it? You write very well. You have also captured each character’s personality while putting them in this different setting. I am a sucker for Danish (especially if Alice is in a band — swoon). PPS!
Well. I have to say you did a great job with the first chapter. It was very detailed, and I like that. So is this your first?? Doesn’t seem like it..But I love the starting chemistry between Dana and Alice–Shane and Alice are funny together. PPS.
Well, fripster, this is quite an interesting setup for Al and Dana. I quite liked it. Post soon!
This is fantastic, a really nice set-up. I like the fact that Alice seems to be a successful musician, touring and all. Very nice, can’t wait to read more of this!
I’m hooked already. I love anything Danish. Keep it up and post soon.