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“What a great day,” Tina remarked as they slipped their shoes off at the front door. “Spring in California is my favourite time of year because everything is still so green, and the air is so much fresher.”
“Especially by the ocean,” Bette agreed. “It was a perfect day. Thanks for sharing it with me.”
She walked into the living room, and sat down on the end of the sofa before patting it to encourage Tina to sit beside her.
“Do you mind if I put some music on?” Tina asked.
“Help yourself.”
Tina placed a disc into the player and then sat down beside Bette.
“Care to fool around a bit?” Bette smiled as she took Tina’s hands in her own.
The sounds of the concerto filled the room.
“I was thinking we could do more than fool around,” Tina replied as they pulled each other closer. Her voice fell to a whisper. “A perfect way to end a perfect day…”
Their lips met, Tina having discovered confidence in something she had no experience with. She let her hands rest on either side of Bette’s face as they kissed. Tina’s hand slid down Bette’s neck to where the top button of her blouse was fastened. She was amazingly adept at undoing the buttons as they continued to explore each other’s lips.
Bette’s hand reached to untuck Tina’s top, while Tina lifted her hands over her head to facilitate its removal.
“I want you to teach me,” Tina leaned in to whisper the words into Bette’s mouth between kisses. “I want you so much…”
“If you want me to stop…” Bette began.
“I won’t want you to stop,” Tina assured her. “I’m going to keep you up all night long.”
Tina stood from the couch, her t-shirt having been flung to the floor. She reached for Bette’s hand, and as she stood, Tina turned to walk towards the bedroom. Once through the doorway, she silently turned to face Bette. She reached with both hands to remove Bette’s blouse from her shoulders. At the same time she felt her bra being undone. They slowly removed each other’s clothing until there was nothing left to remove. Tina placed her fingertips tentatively on Bette’s shoulder before letting gravity help her hand fall such that her fingers grazed Bette’s breast. She knew what it was like to have her breast touched, but she’d never touched another woman intimately and she wanted to remember every moment.
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol