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“I love watching you experience everything for the first time,” Bette managed to say.
“I’m glad I’m experiencing it with you,” Tina replied.
She leaned forward and covered Bette’s breast with her mouth before pulling back and gently grazing her teeth over its surface as she retreated. She finished with a subtle tug on the nipple and then let her tongue circle it before turning her attention to the other side. She moved back to kiss Bette’s mouth, letting her hand trail up her inner thigh. She caressed thoughtfully, all the while enjoying the kisses they shared. She brought her hand up and broke their kiss to examine it, seemingly fascinated by the moisture on her fingertips. She tentatively touched her tongue to the tip of her fingers, but all hesitation soon left her, a wide-eyed Bette speechless at the display.
Tina moved so that she was over Bette – face to face, hovering above her as she spoke.
“Starting right here,” Tina innocently kissed Bette’s lips. “I’m going to work my way down your body with my mouth.”
Tina leaned in to capture Bette in a heated kiss. They moaned quietly into each other as Tina held her body above Bette, only occasionally letting her own breasts fall across her lover’s.
“Could you bend your legs for me?” Tina asked as she paused. She felt Bette comply with the request. After one last kiss on the lips, Tina started moving south. She traced a path with her tongue between Bette’s collarbones before attending to both breasts.
She moved her hand back down between Bette’s legs and caressed her softly, revelling in the sensation of the moist warm skin as it awaited the contact of her mouth.
She kissed lower and lower, to where thighs met. She gently touched with the tip of her tongue and knew immediately both from what she felt and from Bette’s reaction that she was exactly where she needed to be.
Tina couldn’t help but moan into Bette as she felt her reaction. She matched Bette’s earlier movements, aroused at the sound of her ecstasy building. Bette was soon arching off the bed and settled back down to enjoy the attention she was receiving from her new, and it turned out, extremely talented, girlfriend.
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol