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Let’s Take a Walk (final)
Tina’s body shakes with intensity as her orgasm washes over her now sweat streaked body. The moons glow washes them in its light.
“Fuck baby.” Tina utters after a long period of silence. Bette rises from her position and takes a step back to take in the vision of her girlfriend atop the car hood legs spread, chest rising and falling steadily, hair wild with abandon. She is a sight to be held. Tina rises to her elbows.
“Babe what are you doing?” She says with an arched brow.
“Just admiring the view.” Bette says moving closer to the blonde.
“Like what you see?”
“MmmHmmm.” She bends down to gently capture Tina’s lips. “Very much so.”
“Want to go home?” Tina asks between kisses. “I’ll take care of you?” Bette shakes her head no.
“Bette…”
“Tina…”
“Let’s go I want to fuck you in our bed.” Bette stands between Tina’s legs and takes the first button of her vest in hand, she toys with it a moment and unbuttons. She smiles down at Tina who is mesmerized by her actions. She places her fingers on the second button and toys with it.
“Are you sure you can wait that long?” She unbuttons the second button. Her braless chest exposed to the night air. She undoes the third button and slides the vest from her arms. Tina’s mouth goes dry at the vision above her Bette’s exposed caramel skin silk in the moonlight. The blonde sits up and reaches a hand up to make contact. Her hand roams one breast than the other causing Bette to close her eyes and moan.
Bette reaches behind her own head and pulls the pins that are holding her brown locks in place. The hair cascades down her shoulders. Tina watches the sight and can no longer maintain minimal contact she had to have this woman. She stands up abruptly causing Bette to stumble backwards a bit Tina reaches around her waist before she falls.
“I gotcha.” She whispers.
“You always have.” Bette returns. Tina presses her lips against Bette’s placing her hand on the brunette’s neck and pulling her as close as humanly possible. Tina turns their bodies and now Bette is against the hood of the car. She slides her hand between them as they kiss unbuttoning Bette’s slacks tugging them a bit so they slide off of Bette’s body.
“Sit…” Tina whispers as they break their kiss. Bette obliges immediately, her need to feel Tina inside of her was becoming increasingly unbearable. She slides her body up the hood and mimics Tina’s earlier position. Her legs spread achingly wide.
“Like this?” she asks coyly
“Perfect.” Tina stand above her taking in the view. She licks her lips before bending down to taste Bette’s lips. The hunger in their kiss is palpable. As they break she brings her finger to trace Bette’s soft lips, Bette takes this as a cue slipping one of the digits in her mouth sucking gently before adding another. Tina watches mesmerized. After a moment she pulls her fingers away and trails them down the length of Bette’s body, down her neck, between her breasts, down her abdomen, and finally to the hem of Bette’s black lace panties.
“You ready baby?” she smiles seductively. Bette can only nod in anticipation. Tina slips her hand into Bette’s panties she maneuvers a finger on Bette’s clit rubbing it for a few moments before delving into her folds. She bends down to kiss Bette as she enters her in a swift motion.
“Oh fuck.”
Tina watches as Bette’s body writhes at her touch. The moans oozing from Bette’s lips cause Tina’s center to throb.
“That’s it babe.” Her movements increase as Bette’s orgasm comes closer. “Oh fuck…Uhhh.. shi…t. T… Fuckk yees… so …. Mmmm yeeah…. Closee.” She grunts into the night air. Bette can barely catch her breath as her orgasm washes over her. She shakes with pleasure letting out a guttural moan. Tina captures her breast in her mouth toying with the sensitive nubs.
“Oh God Tee.. Jesus.” Bette says breathlessly. “C’mere.” She pulls Tina towards her kissing her gently.
“You ready to go home?” Tina whispers.
“If I can move my legs.” She pulls Tina on top of her “It’s getting cold.” Bette says as she absentmindedly plays with Tina’s hair.
“I can feel.” Tina replies as she plays with Bette’s breasts.
“Let’s go babe. You wore me out.”
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(28 votes, average: 3.68 out of 5)
Well, that was incredible, sexy, erotic, sensual, and any other word that can be used to describe this story. Awesome!
If I did something like that the Police would be there so fast I would still be dizzy. That was hot on the hood,but the hood was hot to start with.
OHHHHHH MY GOD!!!!!
Great short story. Sex on the hood of the car under the moonlight…… what a fantasy. Thanks.
Whew…that was one hell of a walk! LOL! Sex on the hood of a car, huh? Hmmm….I’ll keep replaying that fantasy in my head for a while, Den. You know, you could turn this into a sexy series of NC17 short stories. For example, “Let’s Take A Run” or “Let’s Take A Swim” or my personal favorite, “Let’s Take a Nap.” What do you think? Great post.
Ok … am a little satisfied… hey! What can I say “human beings are never satisfied” :) That was a fantastic short story… so are you going to do a series of Let’s Take..:) Love this. Thank you!
Hate to se this series end. Sexy as hell and just as dangerous; on the hood of the car, out in public, where any old two legged animal could show up. Never! much too dangerous these days. Maybe in the backseat with the doors locked. Preferably at home. lol. Yea, I’m a coward. But this was very hot and sexy. But that’s our girls. Enjoyed it. Do more please. Thanks again for postingl
Hey you! Talking about fantasies huh!? ;) Anyway…I liked it…alot. Now we have a great ending to a great beginning and a great middle! Just great! ;)
Oh! my!!!!!
Mmm hot fantasy!! – Great stuff Den! I’m with the rest of the readers – I’d like to see more short stories! lol xx
Loved the addition page (wink)! Thanks for the TiBette hottness, and I look forward to more posts from you!
Hey Edene, AWESOME!!! WOO HOO!! More NC17’s are in demand now woman! Thanks for a great little story with SO much hotness. ;o) PPS!
your stories are great! keep it up!