Fan Fiction
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Letters.
From one of Cherie’s stupid workers, seems like hundreds more as she reads them through.
Dear Ms.Morales,
We’re sorry that it didn’t work out in your engagement.
xXx Jewelry corp.
From Carmen’s ‘guests’ that Cherie had forced her to invite. There were hundreds more from other companies, whether her own alliances, or the one’s Cherie had created.
Carmen finally got down to her final letter, she read it, she felt the throbbing, resonating in her ears once again. Only this time, it wasn’t from throbbing in her head, it was the fast beating of her heart…
…
Carmen pushes her foot down on the accelerator, the car speeding away to her destination, the letter still imprinted on her mind.
Dear Carm,
I’m sorry for the deception, I’m sorry for the pain…
Hidden in the shadows,
A lonely star.
Carmen got out of her car as soon as she put it on park, her feet quickly running down the Santa Monica pier.
…
Carmen sees the figure staring up into the sky, so lost in thought, she doesn’t realize Carmen’s behind her.
Carmen gently grabs her shoulder, and turns her to face her. Carmen looks into the woman’s eyes, looking for answers, though she knew now, deep in her heart, she knew this was her.
“Is it really you?” Carmen asks, not willing to have her heart betray her again.
“Yes…” She lets out the whisper, though Carmen could hear it clearly.
“How can I know it’s really you?” Carmen asks, not trusting still.
The woman sighs, “My temptress, the answer is simple; you just do.”
Carmen hugs the woman, and whispers in her ear. “I thought you were a bible thumper.”
The woman laughs heartedly, “Why would you possibly think that?”
“You’re visits weren’t the most pleasant I had.”
“Well my shining star,” she says, “How could I watch the love of my life be kissed by that monster, and when you said you loved the monster it made me snap. To know why your heart belonged to someone so cruel, yet it should be mine.”
“It could have been yours…” Carmen says, separating herself from the woman.
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Muahahah, im the first to comment, you know why?? because im awesomee, thats why. =)
I hella liked it! At first, i thought the unknown woman was shane and i was so pissed that she turned out to be an ass… but then, come to find out, it was cherie”fuken”Jaffe! she’s an asswhole. nd den it’s SHARMEN at da end. Hell! I loved this story. i almost didn’t wasn’t going to read it because it said “Sad story” but THANK GOD i did. Sharmen Rocks! oh! and you too! ahahha!
you’re so strange, but i still love ya buddy