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Letting Go – Chapter eight
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Bette leaned down where her lips met Tina’s left ear and whispered “Be careful,”
Tina could now feel the heat rising in her cheeks and it quickly traveled through the rest of her body. She slightly tilted her body to the right and turned her face to the left where her cheeks then met Bette’s lips.
That touch sent a whole new chill down both their spines and down Bette’s legs where Bette now had difficulty standing. Her face and body leaned forward pushing their bodies closer, tighter together. It was no longer just Bette supporting Tina, but they became means of support for one another.
Their eyes were now gazing into one another’s again. The stare became deeper it went from passion to love to lust to desire to want.
‘Oh God, we’re still in class,’ Tina suddenly remembered, and she quickly broke the stare and looked forward at her sketch paper staring at the lines she drew when her hand slid down the paper. Her eyes then followed the line that was drawn when Bette brought their hands back up, and it stopped where their hands were still bound together.
“You, you got charcoal on your sleeves,”
“I do?” With Tina’s hands still wrapped in Bette’s, Bette brought their hands closer to her eyes while her head moved forward and turned slightly to the right to take a look at her sleeve. Bette’s left hand left hand then took hold of her right sleeve for a closer look. Bette now had Tina in a light embrace with her hands wrapped around Tina’s shoulders, and Bette’s lips brushed against the edge of Tina’s.
Tina didn’t mean to, but she couldn’t help it, and she once again, turned her head to the left. Her lips were now one. Though they were touching, both were scared to actually initiate in a kiss.
‘Wow…this is getting good. Good thing the students can’t see over this easel.’
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smile, dont underestimate ur ability to make me enjoy ur story!! ha ha! the whole singing and sketching thing was really simple.. someone would sing and i would let the ‘artist’ in me take over..LOL!! yeah, well, anyway… i dont do that anymore! thanks for the story!
hi smile! Guess what? I’m still lovin’ this story! And guess what else?? I’m now so screwed on the whole time thing! Ugh! I can’t believe I’ve gone and gotten myself hooked on another FF author! I hate me right now! (But I do love this story!)
Moving right along. Great pace. Do you think you could perhaps drop your life and write 10 chapters a day, though? Sorry, can’t stand to be left hanging.
That was great!!!!!!! post now!!!!
i hate myuself too moonshadow. i read so many damn stories i get so confused at who im reading half the time.
smile. your pacing is great. no need to rush. i really like this beginning. eric who? poor tinas got it bad, but who wouldnt with a bette after her. like the other poster said dont sell yourself short. your doing a great job. and could you drop your life and write 10 chappys a day. hehe. that was great. i.love.alice. i need a good al after what chickis doing with hers. thanks and post soon.
Smile, I’m telling you this is jut too nerve racking. I keep leaning in farther to read just waiting, always on the edge and then never quite making it. Love the narrative with Alice, that girl just cracks me up and you write her so well you can almost see and hear her. Love all the shyness and being coy between Bette and Tina. And if you have okay maybe Eric can hang for a little while but only a little.
‘I’m not going to let go of you Tina, I know you’re the one.’
‘Please don’t ever let go, Bette. I might struggle to loosen your grip, but it’s only because I want you to hold on tighter.’
Ok, call me a sucker…but I’m a big azz sap when it comes to romance!
Another exquiste chapter….and thank you Smile for giving it length…..QQg 4wrd 2 the next 1!
AWWW … DAMN BELLS!!! LOL! This is such a sweet story. I am really enjoying it. Keep the chapters coming; and, I’ll keep reading them. I love this story, btw. It’s cute, sweet, refreshing and has a bit of a nostalgic feel to it. Thanks for writing it.
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Just caught up. Love your story. You are killing me though lol.
awww i love it!!!! your amazing!! i feel so happy lol its sooo great ok well your amazing and i love it your so good at this lol ok well ill shut up now cause im rambling lol but its kool ok well yeah ok please post again soon! thanx byeness<3389274892759827
I’ve been a silent reader for a while now. I love this story. It has such an innocent sweetness about it. Thank you for a different outlook. Keep up the good work.
I continue to enjoy your story. The attraction between the two is enchanting… Still loving the perfume connection.
HEY SMILE12345 your story is NOT GOING DOWN HILL I LOVE IT…….When you are ready for NC_17 LOOK OUT EVERYBODY……I understand they can’t sleep together yet, but a girl could wish for it *BLUSHING*I thought you did a fabulous job on this chapter and I hope you keep it GOING PLEASE………post soon.
That was great. Sorry, fell behind a bit there, but I’m back. Loving this. Okay, now, we have to have one of these two be more assertive, since Alice won’t be at lunch with them. I don’t think I could handle them being inches away from kissing, and backing away again. Post again, soon, please.
Loved the art lesson. We should all get ones like that. Nice chapter and I am anxious for the next.
Great story! u can almost feel the passion thru the pages u write! keep going im loving this one
Good chapter. Still love and wait for you story. The moment Bette and Tina touch hands its amazing and sweet. Love what Alice do for Bette and Tina and funny about bracelet. Ok please post soon, thanks!
Hey!! I’m gonna leave a super long comment… haha… here goes…
‘Oh my god, Tina wasn’t lying when she said she didn’t draw. Look at that, it sucks. What the hell is she doing?’
‘Sheesh, do I have to do EVERYTHING myself?’
Hahahahahaha… it still cracks me up after reading it for the erm… 3rd or 4th? Or more Times…??
‘Please don’t ever let go, Bette. I might struggle to loosen your grip, but it’s only because I want you to hold on tighter.’
Oh God…. helppppp!!!!… I can’t breatttthhhhh… This is sooooooooooooo goooooooooooddddd… More than good…
You can certainly do more than anything without me… don’t doubt your writing ability anymore, see… you’ve such a great writing and can come up with such a GREAT STORY!!!
Can I have a friend like the Alice you’re creating? Haha
Oh my, hahaha… looks like we’ll have to wait longer for NC-17 as they haven’t even kissed!! :P
Can I have more… like… right now?!?! :)
Jolin: “Love, love… love…”
Zabo’s version: “Great, great… great…”
Haha :)
oh my. thank God for Alice. otherwise it would take like 50 chapters for them to share their first kiss. ok maybe I am stretching it a bit but it would take a long time. the pace is perfect, and I look forward to your next post.
you’re doing a real nice job with this story but i must say that Im hating that bell right now really hating it lol cant wait to see what happens at lunch… please post soon!
Hey Smile that was so Beautiful Story I Love it I just back to the party LOL! and then I check if you posted yes you did Whoa! Thanks Please post soon.
that was so great! I guess I am a little confused. I thought Tina found the bracelet outside of the library and kept it?
Vi…it was a charm that belongs to a bracelet that Tina found. And Bette was looking for it real hard.
I’m so into this story. It seems so real and I love the fact that Alice is protecting these two. If the students found out, all hell would break lose and B&T could not steal these special moments any longer. I can’t wait for the lunch tomorrow! Kiitos!
When is your next post? Maybe now? You don’t have drop you entire life just the time consuming aspects of your life and just write.
Hey smile, you brought a smile to my face with this update. Soooo sweet. Can´t wait for more to come. Please post soon, I´m sooo hooked
hee hee… can’t wait for your next post… you’ve kept me on the edge of my seat and verbalizing their thoughts is a nice visual aid for articulating the imagery.