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Letting Go – Chapter five
“Yeah, Ms. Porter…the hot art teacher…”
“Sure, that’d be nice.” Tina tried to calm down, but knowing she was going to have lunch with Bette just made her all the more nervous.
“Do you smell that?” Tina couldn’t resist asking.
“Smell what?”
“That…that smell,” Tina didn’t now how to explain it, and she didn’t want to sound crazy, but that was the only way she knew how to explain it.
“The smell of the hallway….or the nasty cafeteria food stank from upstairs?”
“No, it’s…never mind, I guess it’s just…never mind, sorry.”
Luckily, Tina didn’t have to explain anymore, not that she needed to, but she didn’t want to sound crazy and scare off her mentor. They were now right outside of Bette’s classroom when
“Bette, let’s grab lunch now.”
“Alright,” Bette said as she took off her smock and headed towards the door.
Bette spotted Tina shyly standing behind
Just like this, one by one the wall that Bette had worked so hard and long to build began to crumble. It was as if Tina just blew it down just by a single breath of exhalation. When Bette looked into Tina’s eyes, she was instantly in love, but she also knew that Tina was going to be her downfall. There was no way Bette could avoid this and no way for her to get out of this.
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(36 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
whoa! i would’ve run away from this alice!lol! personally, i like the details in the story, especially now since u are introducing the context. love the story.. hope u continue!
Yow, way to get it out there! Good story.
flippen a man i love alice shes grear please post soon thanx BYeness<3389375892375987
GO alice !!!!!!! tellus what you really think!!!!
What a question Alice!! So Tina holds the key-very sweet! I like dialog and details myself :) But you write what makes you happy and comfortable and we will all read every word!!
Really getting into your story please don’t keep us in suspense too long!!!Post soon Thanks
Yikes! WTG Alice! Now there will be a little disappoinment, because Tina will have to let Alice and Bette know that she is dating Eric. But it will just take some time for B&T to find each other. It’s great that they spend so much time together, this way they cannot avoid talking and getting to know each other.
This was a great chapter and it was very easy for me to follow. Thank you. I love the detail in stories, but on the other hand I am very impatient. Therefore, I suggest you write the way you feel. It is your story and I will continue loving it, no matter how you decide to continue. As long as you do continue!!!! Kiitos!
Damn way to go Alice, damn I can’t believe she asking Tina that question, love it. Now let see what’s next, post soon. Thanks!
FABULOUS JOB ON THIS CHAPTER..ONLY ALICE LOVE IT!!!!!!THANKS
The girl of Bettes dream anthe smell that sets Tina on fire, Love you style of wriring, You write the way you feel comafort. Thanks
Did you know smiling is my second favorite thing to do in the world?
Great Job smiles.
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Nervously anticipating the next chapter…..
I forgot to add that I love the vounerability of Bette. This will give good bases for the trust issue between B&T.
you are doing wonderful! Love your Alice and it is just a great story. post soon
Well DAMN Alice, just cut to the chase!… Gotta love Alice. I hope she doesn’t scare the poor girl! great story. pls post soon.
LOL leave it to Alice. Though Sometimes its better to be blunt and simply get it over with. Keep going. Loving the story!! :)
Hey… wow… wooowwww…you’ve made such great changes… this is GREAT!!! You’ve made it soooo much better… seriously… yeah, definitely still finding it interesting… oh, you’re such a tease… wat r u gonna do with those 3? hmm…
Way to go Alice…just poped the question didn´s she. You gotta love Alice for who she is.
Fantastic update smile12345…you made me laugh on a bad day. Way to go girl. I just love your story here because it is so different but excellent. Keep going…looking for more to come. Post soon
Loving the perfume connection… Really enjoying your writing style
WOOHOO! Way to go Alice! Just come right out and ask! LOL! Great chapter! Keep them coming! I can’t wait to see how this unfolds.
Haha, what a way to end a chapter! Please post again soon!
That one way to put Tina in the hot seat. Looking forward to you next post. See if tina gets burnt in that seat of hers.
K
Great chapter. They are so cute, can’t wait for more.
WOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Now this chapter was simply incredible. I am loving it like mad.
Alice – each time she noticed what Tina was going through had me cracking up, but when she just came out and asked “are you gay,” that did it for me; I HIT DA DAMN FLO’!
Smile….keep it up baby; you’re doing marvelous!