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Letting Go – Chapter four
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“Bette, what’s wrong?” asked a sincerely worried Kelly.
Betted sighed, “Nothing…”
As they were sitting down having dinner, a young man in his mid twenties began walking towards them.
“Oh my God, Bette, look!” Kelly quietly shouted unable to hide her excitement.
Just when Bette was about to turn around, Kelly said, “No! Don’t turn around!”
“Then why did you ask me to look?”
“It’s Eric!” Kelly’s voice got even more excited.
“Who’s Eric?” a confused Bette asked.
“He’s the young hot lawyer that works at daddy’s firm….he’s soooooo HOT!”
Eric approached their table when he spotted Kelly and her mysterious dinner date.
During Eric’s last year in law school, he interned for Melvin Porter, one of the most well known and highly respected attorney’s in the Washington Metropolitan area. As an intern, Eric stood out so upon graduation last spring, he was offered a job to stay and work for Melvin’s firm.
“Hi Kelly,” Eric said as he approached Kelly and Bette’s table.
“Hi Eric,” a giddy Kelly replied, “This is my sister, Bette,” Kelly continued as she introduced Bette to Eric. “Bette, this is Eric, he works with daddy at the firm.”
“Hi, nice to meet you Bette, Kelly talks about you all the time,” Eric said as he stuck out his hand to shake Bette’s.
Bette got up from her seat when Kelly introduced them, and took Eric’s hand “I’ve heard plenty about you too. Daddy speaks very highly of you.”
Eric let out a light chuckle, “I sure hope so. I wouldn’t want to disappoint him.”
The conversation was heading no where, and when Eric was about to excuse himself, Kelly jumped out and asked “So…Eric, what are you doing here, besides eating?”
“I’m here for my girlfriend’s birthday,” Eric replied. When he spoke of Tina, his eyes lit up.
“Oh…” Kelly’s reply was full of disappointment. “Where is she?”
“She’s using the restroom. Kelly, Bette, if you two wouldn’t mind, may I get your opinion on something?”
“Sure,” the two happily replied.
Eric took out a thin long jewelry box out of his coat’s inside pocket, and opened the box. “Do you think Tina will like this?”
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Great chapter. Can’t wait for more.
i love this story!!! truly i do !!! ok wait is she falling for tina or eric uh oh !!! lol well i know its tina so o well or it will be evetually at least heh ok thanx post soon please
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STOP BEING SHY, YOU ARE TALENTED IF YOU CAN MAKE MORE THEN ONE CHAPTER ,IT’S TBETTER THEN MY RUN ON SENTENCES…………WONDERFUL JOB GIRL..KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK……
I’m really enjoying your story. Very fluid direction..
I have to admit, I spent much of the morning checking to see if you’d posted anything. Since there wasnt a new chaper here; I dismantled my computer room. After setting everything back up, I come here and BAMMMM….a new chapter!!
Thank you for making me clean up. I am truly loving your story and QQg fwrd to the next chapter.
Good times. Keep going.
Hi *waving back at the comp screen* I haven’t read (yeah right)…will read again from the office and then will comment again :P
Im liking this story………. please post soon (as in tonite lol) i say u mix a little bit of drama with romance whatever you choose to do im sure it will be great!!
Looking good. Love how its romantic and yet mysterious at the same time . Great job, looking forward to the next post.
enjoyed this chapter! u definitely have a thing for writing:)waiting for more!
I’m not sure what keep on trucking means either…but I just said it because I felt like it was appropriate.lol
Great update.
I love it! They are falling in love with each other without even knowing the connection, this is amazing. Thank you for this, and I have added you to my very short list of fave authors LOL
Oh… you even had me hooked… what are you going to do with Eric, Tina and Bette? :P Just do whatever you feel right with your story :) I’ll sincerely support you all the way. No stopping… keep posting!!
Keep writing you have my attention.Post soon!!!
Nice chapter, Smile. You must keep on posting. I don’t think you have to do much more to keep our attention. We’re waiting for the next post.
PS. Drama or Romance. You are the author but I say mix it up. ; )
Excellent…I have been away for a couple of days, and was so pleased to see your next chapter waiting for me….Great update thanks!
The myster of the KeyBette is not into Eric juat the key. Tina will be the key to Bettes heart and soul, Tina needs to get rid of Eric. thanks
Very nice update Smile. I truely love it. Can´t wait for more to come…post soon. We do want our girls talking.
Nice chapter…although I had some problems following it so I had to read it a few times. I guess I just have to get used to your flashback signs…maybe you could write flashback…you know I’m not very smart. LOL! I personally love the sweet and romantic stories the best…but to keep readers really hooked to your story, you could mix little (i.e., small amounts) drama into this. Of course your the master so you do what you want and I will happily continue reading your story….but since you asked, I gave you my opinion. Kiitos!
Damn this is good and can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
oooOOOOoooo, I get it. A different charm, I thought that Bette got it back, then when you said charm, I thought Tina was wearing Bette’s charm around her neck. D’oh! HAha, this story is great, and yes I WILL continue reading! Please post again soon!