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Letting Go – Chapter six
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“Bye Bette, bye Tina, see you later,” and just like that,
‘Whew!‘
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The lounge had been quiet for minutes, and even the final bell hadn’t interrupted their thoughts. Tina sat there thinking while Bette sat there eagerly waiting for Tina to speak, anything would be fine at this point. Bette knew Tina wasn’t going to answer, but she was waiting.
For the first time, Tina felt as if she had to let go of her fears, she wanted to answer truthfully, she wanted to say she was attracted to Bette, and she even wanted to say she was in love with Bette. How could that be, she’s only known her for several hours, and that would be impossible or would it? Bette had become a familiar stranger, and this scared Tina, everything had become so difficult just within a matter of minutes that it only made her hold on to her fears tighter, and it would mean trying to deny her feelings towards Bette.
Finally, Tina spoke, her voice was full of defeat, but it was emotionally empty, because she felt nothing for the next word, the only word that would be said.
Bette knew Tina was ready to speak, and she knew what her answer would be; she knew the next word, the only word that would exit Tina’s mouth.
In unison, when Tina said, “Eric,” Bette’s mind whispered his name, her inner voice too, was full of defeat, but her emotions were complete opposite, because she felt pain with the mention of that name by Tina.
It was time for Bette to change the subject, she knew that Tina felt uncomfortable,
“Just ignore
With Bette starting a new topic of conversation, Tina had to finish her own, she had to clear up her thoughts, she had to come to a conclusion. ‘Well, am I? No, of course I’m not! Bette is just gorgeous, anyone would stare at her. Just look at all the students fawning over her!‘ Tina would only be able to lie to herself for so long, a sight challenged person would’ve been able to see the sparks the two had, and one can’t run from emotions that strong no matter how hard they resist.
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So glad I had a desk in front of me, or I would have bust my nose on the floor. Love that Tina helped with the kiss. YES. Was dreaming it was my knee she had her hand on. A girl can dream can’t she. Thanks
Hey smile I’m still catching up of you’re Story WHOA! I Love it it’s really nice another Wonderful Amazing writer Hey I Love it Please continue post soon.
We ae all straight until were not!!!! left me hanging fell of the chair!!!!! post like now make them longer
Damn It……TEASE……GREAT CHAPTER.WILL THEY EVER TALK ABOUT THE CHARM???…PLEASE POST WHEN YOU CAN…THANKS..
Just got caught up from lastweek. Alice that girl kills me, she reminds me of my best friend, no B.S. just comes flat out with stuff. This is getting so exciting, I was hanging on the edge of my chair which is hard since I’m trying to work. This is going along beautifully, keep it going girl, looking forward to your next update.
OH Smile…how could you just leave us hanging like that. I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for your next chapter….
Oh man, how could you just leave us like this, please post soon, can’t to see the kiss. Post soon, thanks!
Stop having heart attack already… haha… no way to stop me from reading :P
This is great… seriously… I didn’t see any of my stuff in there… you did it yourself!!! Gals, smile did this herself!! Yey!!! Haha… ok, I’m rubbing my hands together now for Chap7 :)) Btw, your chap5 b4 changes were great too, but after the changes it’s… better!!!
and…………..
Twas kind of messed up ending the chapter like this. But regardless it was still good.
My favorite thing starts with a T and ends with a M and rhymes with capitalism. : D
Can you guess?
I think the world would be a better place if more people gave each other hugs. Hugs are magical.
I think that your story is very well written – certainly NOT horrible. Look forward to reading more from you. Don’t be critical of your writing – you do it well.
Darn, how can you leave it at that!?! I noticed myself leaning forward at my chair….I was cheering Tina on! Great chapter! I love this story! Kiitos!
gratefully not alot of chappys to catch up on. really grooving to this story line. i love dialogue and details. dont mind a LITTLE drama. your a good writer and leave me wanting more. thanks.
uh.. thick intensity… go Tina!
Excellent!!!You have me sitting on the edge of my chair. Don’t keep us in suspense too long!!!
Great so far. I need more please. I can’t wait. You left me thinking what will Bette do now.
such a tease. this was a great chapter. I am glad Tina finally took that last step to kiss bette.
I was leaning forward in my chair as well. Go TINA!! Great chapter Smile!
wicked!!!!!!
You shameless tease! Shameless.
flippen yessss !!!! hehe i love this and i was leaning forward im a nerd but hey lol grea tpost !!! please update soon thanx! byenesss<33908231590814590186
Alice is a pain in the butt but we all love her for whom she is. Loving the update so do continue. Now as a writer yourself you can see the differenc between commenting and not. So do comment yourself. Don´t be shy…..we will like what ever you have to say…don´t hold back. Post soon
wow! this was great! u really should stop worrying about ur writing skills!:) thanks for the update!
yummy! now that’s a great set up for their first kiss!
omg! u have to post again please!!
omg! u have to post again please!!
Yeh!! You totally have us all at the edge of our seat…not a good place to leave us by the way…not nice!! This is a great story line and well written, keep going you have us all waiting for more…I’m seeing fanfic award in your future!!! go girl