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Letting Go – Chapter three
Tina had blonde wavy hair falling slightly below her shoulders, and they were brushed back behind her ears which showed her clear face. Her make-up was light, just enough to show that she was older than the students. Tina was wearing a thin, merino wool, baby blue turtleneck that fit her body well, but not too well, she was of course in school. Her pants were a shade of light grey made of lightweight wool, the pants sat slightly below her waist, straight through the hip and thigh. Her heels were a light cognac color. Under the clothes, Bette could tell that Tina was fit and well toned.
‘She must work out,‘ was the next set of thoughts that ran through Bette’s mind as she continued to focus on Tina.
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‘Oh God, more students…‘ was the only thing Tina could think of when she saw about twenty or so more students sitting down in Ms. Porter’s art classroom. Her attention was soon taken elsewhere when she felt an intense and passionate stare, it was at her. In an instant, Tina’s own eyes were no longer focused on the students’, and they traveled to find the person staring at her, that must’ve been Ms. Porter.
‘Wow, she is beautiful. No wonder why she’s called the “hot teacher,” Oh my God, I’m staring…I can’t stop…why is she looking at me like that, does she know I’m staring too…oh my God…‘
Tina’s eyes roamed to Bette’s and she couldn’t stop staring the woman from head to toe. Bette had long curly that also sat slightly below her shoulders. The top half of her hair was tied back, and bottom half hung loosely. She too, like Tina, was about 5’8″, and well toned.
The quick seconds that they stared at one another seemed like an eternity, and
‘Yup, they’re staring at each other,‘ thought
“Okay, Ms. Porter, we’re here.”
For the first time in many years, Bette was speechless, and didn’t know how to respond to a situation. The only words she was able to mutter out of her mouth were “Uh huh…” Bette felt her body temperature increase to an all time high.
As Bette was settling back into reality as well, she still couldn’t help but glance over at Tina adjusting her turtleneck. What Bette saw next caught her attention most of all.
‘That’s…‘
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(39 votes, average: 4.08 out of 5)
“what did she see”? what did she see?
Ms Porter saw her lock on Ms Kennard arm. She has found her key to unlock her heart. That was a wonderful chapter. You writing is not horrible. Just keep on THANKS
Its the charm. Definitly likeing this story. Keep it coming.
THE KEY TO BETTE’S HEART IS WHAT SHE SAW..THIS IS A FUCKING FABULOUS CHAPTER…YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER KEEP IT GOING GIRL…THANKS POST SOON….
omg yay tina has the key!!!!!! i cant wait i love this story already!!!! post soon please
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Excellent. Thank you for sharing this with us. I am really enjoying getting carried away in the story…….
Oh man, this is exciting… :)
This is well done, keep writing. I’m glad you decided to do a story.
very well written! please continue..
This is great and it is the charm. Please post soon
Very charming story…. please continue
why on earth would you think you can’t write . this story is so well written and flows easily . i so look forward to the next chapterS!!!! love this story.
You suck stop writing!
Ha Ha Ha
No please continue, you are doing a great job. Love the way you write!!!
Cannt wait for you next post.
K
Just caught up. Love your story already. Can’t wait to see where you take this.
Dont be so hard on your self – it’s really good and promising. Keep up the good work and post soon please :o))
Good story ideas and you’re moving it right along like clockwork. ‘Glad you got them to meet up PDQ, ’cause I hate a story where they keep missing each other. Good job!
Wonderful start…please keep going!! I would have to adjust my turtleneck too, if Bette Porter was staring at me!!!
…that’s my bracelet!!! I love this story, you’re doing a great job!!!
I’m HOOKED! Great story for a first try. Pleaseeeeeeeee post again soon!
Wow! This story is amazing. You totally have me hooked on it already. I can’t believe this is your first try of fan fiction. It sounds like you’ve been doing this for a while. Please continue, because you already have several fans reading your story. It’s just beautiful. And of course, it helps to write about B&T beginnings, because most of us love them. At least I do! And this sounds so different from the others…..good for you! Kiitos! (that’s thank you in Finnish)
Ok what the hell is she see, ” that’s my bracelet or that’s the ring on her ring finger”. Please post soon, thanks!
KEEP ON TRUCKING!
your writing suck… no.. just kidding. I thought it was a great beginning, lavishing us with all the details, giving it more meat to it. Loved it! So, are you on education program?
Smile12345, I just read your 3 chapters and they are really good. Your story here is so different from many others…..sooooo do keep going. We want more and I guess she saw Bette´s lock??? Post soon
HELLO! You got my attention, now I will follow you from now on, please post again. I love the detail and everything! I love the story period. Be hearing from you soon.
Wait, I thought Tina went back to return the locket? Whatever, as long as Tina has it, Bette, won’t mind. Alice a school teacher, that’s pretty funny. I bet the students have a lot of fun, in her class. You’re doing great, post as many chapters, and as often as you like!
oooOOOOooo! I love this story already! Great writing, it’s the charm! Please post again soon!
K, so this story so does NOT suck, so I hope to see another post from you soon. this is a great start!
wow your first attempt at fanfic….good on you!!! Don’t quit now as we are all caught up in this web you have started….yeh!!! another B/T beginning, different, new and with endless possibilities! go girl go!!!
You have me hooked, don’t stop now post soon!!!