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Lifeline – Chapter 11
“I want to see you!” I demanded.
You removed the mask slowly, your fiery eyes burning with desire. I could feel the flush on my face even as I saw the triumph in yours. I pulled you to me with my eyes and you found my lips, wordlessly, and we exchanged a long and amazingly erotic kiss that stirred me so that I felt even more aroused than before.
Reaching beneath me you loosened the constraints that tied my arms and I freed them, my arms pulling you in to me. When I had you close, I quickly shed your top and bra, then pushed your pants from your hips. I wanted you like I never had before…
So –
That’s most of the dream, baby. What do you think? Kinda out there, I know. But it was hot while I was dreaming it. Really hot. So, what do you say when I get out of here we play intruder and hapless homeowner? You can put your own twist on it, of course! (Silly laughter)
I really want to hear you read, babe, but I think I’ve sort of worn myself out. Will you forgive me if I fall asleep listening to your sweet voice?
Pick a good one for me. I promise I’ll try to move my finger.
Just stay with me, Bette.
I want to be where you are.
I’ll always want to be wherever you are.
Just don’t go and I know I’ll find a way to you.
I feel stronger when you’re near. I feel like I could do it. Maybe not yet, but soon.
Don’t give up on me, okay?
I know you won’t. I’m just scared.
What if I can’t do it?
What if I’m stuck here in this torture where I can hear you but I can’t be with you?
It’s the worst sort of agony to be this close and you not know that I feel you, that I’m with you. It sucks.
It makes me cry. I wonder if tears fall on the outside when I cry? If so, then maybe you’d know, maybe you’d know how I miss you.
If I can’t move my finger, at least maybe I can cry for you, baby, because that’s something I seem to be able to do pretty easily wherever I am. (Gentle laughter)
I love you, Bette.
Wait for me.
TBC
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Soooo sad,but beautiful written.Thank you.
Excellent as always, Nell. Two thumbs up! =) They’re not there yet but at least they’ve both made some progress. Bette teased Tina and laughed again and Tina babbled on and on to amuse herself and is hell-bent on being with Bette again. I’ll be right here waiting for Tina’s awakening. I love this line, Nell. => “I love the small hollow at the base of your throat where I have left a thousand kisses like wishes in a well.” (As an aside, that hollow called the suprasternal notch was mentioned in “The English Patient”.) Anyway, this post cheered me up, Nell. Thanks a bunch! =)
Thanks for another beautiful chapter. I’m so glad Tina is aware of her surroundings. Hopefully when the sedatives get out of her system she’ll wake up…
This an incredible, beautiful story!
Wonderful update. It’s great that Tina is trying so hard to get back to Bette. And her thoughts are helping her out of the subconscious and since the doctor is cutting back on some of the medications, just maybe, she will start to awaken especially if Bette continues to read to her and talk to her. Hopefully she will watch for any signs of wakefulness like Tina moving her finger or big toe as Tina is trying to do. If she is covered Bette won’t see the toe but she can see the finger and, of course, she will see her tears if she cries as Tina is trying to do. Has Alice brought all the things on the list to the hospital yet? The music and other things that Bette wants for her to have in her room should help so much. Alice needs to hurry back with those items. Maybe she will come back in the next chapter. Fantastic chapter. Thanks for posting.
I’ve got to tell you, I am so loving this story. That’s an incredible idea, letting us in on Tina’s subconscious. If only they could communicate that way. Looking forward to your next post with great anticipation!
I really enjoy reading this story. It is one of my favorite Tibette stories! I know we need to be patient because everything will be fine, but reading it makes me wanna cry because it is beautifully written!
Hey, Nell. I just finished rereading this post. Tina’s reflections on love choked me up. Sorry if I sound too sappy but I can’t help it. I feel bad that Tina feels helpless and stuck in oblivion but I’m glad that their lava-hot love and their rich history and colorful memories are keeping her sane and hopeful. They are each other’s lifeline and I look forward to reading how they both inch closer to their reunion. Again, huge thanks for such an engaging and well-written story, Nell. Cheers! =)
Another beautiful chapter. I find myself rereading passages and just adore your writing style.
i’ll tell you, if anyone did that to me, when my hands were free, i would kill them… anyway… love this story… and i also know tina will work her way back to bette.. keep reading bette, tina is listening… pps
Thank you, Nell, for another wonderful chapter. You write so beautifully, taking us with such delicacy through Tina’s thoughts – her fear, her concern for Bette, her jokes and teasing, her love. And always phrases leap out – I agree with mightymouse’s choice, and also when Tina speaks of fighting for her life and says: “Presumably that’s what I’m doing, although it feels a lot more like loitering – or a very dull and solitary vacation on the shores of oblivion.” Have I said how much I’m LOVING your story?!! I want Tina to wake up, but don’t want your story to end, so I’m relying on you to accommodate that for me!
This story needs to bs continued. Soon, please. I can only reread this story incomplete so many times…
This is sad and hope Tina will wake up soon, can’t see them like this. Please post more, thanks!
So well written. SO heartbreaking. Please let her wake up soon. Thank you for this story.
Every day I check to see if there’s a new chapter…I hope you come back with a new chapter. This story is too good…PPS