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    Lifeline – Chapter 12

    Story written on February 12, 2011 by gr8d8.
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    A song prompts a flashback as Bette remembers a fight.

    The delicately muscled lines of the swimmer’s back captivated her as she sat motionless further admiring the gentle inward slope of her lover’s waist and the comely curve of her hips above the waterline.  The blonde leaned forward in a stretch, her hands splayed on the coping so that the shadow that was the crease of her ass peeked above the water teasingly.  Tina’s body was turned ever-so-slightly so that Bette could just discern her beautiful and softly pendulous breasts swaying freely as she bent to relieve the tension in her lower back. 

    Bette felt her breath hitch in her throat and wondered if it had made an audible sound.  Tina straightened ever so slightly then arched her back to stretch without turning around.  Reaching up slowly and still leaning  slightly backward, eyes closed, her lips slightly parted she caressed her right breast, squeezing the nipple between her thumb and forefinger, twisting gently until Bette thought she heard a soft moan and wondered whether it came from her or Tina.  Her heart thumped in her chest as she found herself inclining forward, squinting to make out the details of her   movement.

    “Fuck,” she whispered breathlessly, feeling her own nipples harden at the sight and sound of the beautiful naked woman before her and felt her right hand reach up reflexively to grip her left nipple.  It was painfully hard already.

    Though she couldn’t see the left side of Tina’s body she watched carefully as she dropped her right hand, while her left elbow bent at her waist poking out behind her back.  She must be caressing the other nipple, she mused. 

    Slowly she turned so that she was almost in profile and sidled up to the poolside while Bette watched with anticipation as she seemed to lose a few inches in height.  She had spread her legs, she surmised, her heart racing.  What the fuck was she doing?  Suddenly she bowed away from the side her head thrown back carelessly as she cried out and gripped the decking tightly.  The brunette began to rise up out of her chair with confusion then realized in that split second that the blonde was using the jet below the water to…

    “Oh, Jesus!”  Bette moaned aloud standing up so quickly she almost sent the chair careening over behind her, and with a few long strides she covered the distance between the table and the pool, losing her sandals as she went.

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    3. Mercy sakes!!! that was hot and I know Bette thought so. I knew Tina felt when Bette arrived but I think she also saw her as well. Would love to know what Tina’s thoughts are when Bette mentions this song and argument to her. Getting their thoughts during this time is very interesting but I think I want Tina to wake up more than anything else. Very interesting way to tell the story. Thanks for posting.

    4. Just finish reading chap 12, this is one of the most beautiful written love story of B&T, that I have read in a while. Even if we lost Tina, I don’t think we lose the love of these two amazing women. Thanks for the journey.

    6. Hey, I’m still here, Nell. =) I was just rereading the chapter, savoring the words-the sounds, images and emotions they evoke-and gathering my thoughts. Loved it from start to finish, Nell. Excellently written as always. =) I smiled at the mention of the infamous TK eye roll, which drew a lot of flak from Tina/Laurel detractors back in the day, the cheeky tongue and touching pillow talk and the very nice “green-eyed monster-Tina seeing red” combo. I chuckled at the “door-slamming, window-rattling, foot-stomping and shoe-throwing” part of the lovers’ quarrels and LOL at this: “Of course, forgiving each other was probably half the reason they were so good at fighting. The make-up sex almost always started out tender and tentative and ended up sizzling hot, both of them desperately sorry for their actions and eager to reclaim their love by burning up the sheets for eight straight hours or until one of them lost consciousness. Even that didn’t necessarily stop the proceedings.” Woohoo! Loved this paragraph, Nell! But surely the couple can try a nonviolent yet equally exciting foreplay. Their house must have a good foundation to withstand and absorb such regular eruptions of fury. And their love and commitment to one another must be that deep and strong too to withstand and absorb such intense bouts of rage and insecurity. I loved Bette’s explanation of her song choices that will remind them both of the good, the bad and the ugly of their relationship. Bette’s grounded and brave enough not to gloss over their fights, the hard part of their otherwise lovely marriage. So Bette has an insane jealous streak and Tina’s flirtatious and scary when she’s angry. I don’t think they loved each other less because of the other’s imperfections. I must say I also love the way you picture Bette and Tina as equal partners in almost every measure: beauty, hotness, intelligence and professional success. Thank God Tina’s not a damsel in distress here or a weakling who’s so lucky the Alpha Bette picked her among her throngs of admirers.BR>

    7. To quote the great Sting, this story is a “surprising novelty,” Nell, so please write it as you please. I trust you and I know you have a plan. I know you’re not prolonging the couple’s agony just because you want to or you have no idea where to take this story yet. I’m sure you know what you’re doing and I trust you. Tina is slowly getting better and Bette is learning how to cope and not losing hope. I know you’ll put them out of their misery, in a good way, someday soon. I can’t wait to read Tina’s take on Bette’s tongue teasing talk, her song selection and that fateful fight. Hope she can give Bette a sort of reassurance by twitching her finger, raising her eyebrow or smirking a bit in the next few chapters. I think Bette and their friends will rejoice at any slight movement from Tina. That’s all I’m hoping for. A thousand times thank you, Nell, and Happy V-Day to you too! =)

    8. I love the way you write these characters. They both have fiery hot temperaments but they also both have a fierce loyalty to each other and such deep love and respect for each other. I love reading this story.

    9. So happy to see another chapter of your great story! I just love your Bette and Tina – the truth and complexity of their relationship, the passion and humour, their heartstopping overwhelming love for each other, and not to forget Tina’s expert display of flirting after her swim! – you are a brilliant writer, Nell. Thank you!

    12. This is such a wonderful story and the writing is superb. I love the story please, please don’t leave us hanging much longer. I check everyday for a new chapter.

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