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Like a fairytale, chpt 14
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And looking ito the boyish girls reassuring eyes she found her strenght and voice again
The queen and my mother have known eachother forever… When I was little I thought they were just best friend but when I grew up I found out that my mother is the queens lady’s maid, Or at least thats what she has been untill I left…
The princess… Tina
Bette uttered that name with so much love, even Dana instantly understood, and the lady’s maids daughter felt momentarily overwhelmed with emotions… A sip of water calmed her down enough to continue
Tina was born a few months after me… We have always been unseperatable, my father, who is head of garding at the castle, once called us ‘salt and pepper’ because we were always together and we seemed to be the others other half… Everybody in the castle knew us and people called her Tina just because it fits her better… But I had my own special name for her… T was my best friend in the world and we had a special place in the forest, near a lake… Thats where we talked, T was always better with emotions that I could ever be, she had a way with people… She was the one who said I was her other half, for she found me smart in other department… I always sensed she was my better half… You have never seen a sweeter, kinder or more beautifull girl in the world… The way she always seemed to care for everone and everything made me lo…
Bette hesitated… She had never said the words that were in her heart out loud
You love her
Shane simply stated, as Dana finished that sentence for her, squeezing both Bette’s shoulder and Alices hand…
You love her like I love Alice
Bette gave all girls a faint smile and nodded shyly befor she continued
I think I always knew I loved her… But I always felt this… Border…. I wasn’t supposed to love a girl! Let alone the princess! But as her 9th birthday approached, my feelings grew stronger every day… There would be a party, a ball, and a prince from a nearby country was asked to attend and meet Tina… I was torn by yealousy when she was busy with her guests.. All I could do was sit alone at our special place and think about her… Make her a present I knew wouldn’t even be nearly as beautifull as what the prince would present her with…
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this will be good: The Gang planing! when i imagine i can hear the song of Mission Impossible! LOL! was a good thing that Bette talk a letting go some pain and because i know Alice won’t stop until they have something! i hope you will have a great weekend congrats for your mother and good luck with your internship! take care.
It’s good to see Bette finally open up herself. Here we go… Bette’s going to be a knight of shining armour, and rescue the princess T from the witch Queen. Lol… I really looking forward to see what the gang plans is. Good luck with your internship!
I can´t stop smiling when I thinking of what kind of alice-crazy-plan you are about to creat for us….hm…as usual great post…will be waiting for more…post soon, and have a great weekend… :)
So Bette let out all the love and pain of loving the one and only Tina. I can feel her pain and Tina’s pain also. Tina is so sad and lost. Maybe if she puts up some signs that say, Have you seen my Bette. She was stolen away from me. I need you help in finding my heart and soul. Yeah, I can’t wait to see what this plan is going to involve. Need a quick horse. We just had the Kentucky Derby here in the US. Maybe I can borrow the horse that won so that Bette can get to Tina fast. Yeah, that’s the ticket. Have fun with your mom on Mother’s Day.
awww that was awesome, i can’t wait for them to see each other again, i mean i’m really excited *jumps around*, i love this story how can anyoone resist a fairytale, not to mention a fairytale staring those two beautiful ladies B & T! Cheers *still jumping*
As you wish Shane, we will come up with a plan… Excellent story! More please!
Tina will know Bette a mike away even if she dresses like a boy. Their love is so strong she will know. Let do it to the Queen, only in a fairytale can you be in control at a happy ending. Lord knows we all can uses one. thanks so much. Be nice to your Mothers and have a great time with them. thanks
FIRST! *runs off to read but trips* Ow. brb
i know, i know…take the note from richard, dress bette as a boy and she’ll be at tina’s party :)
Okay I’m back after licking my wounds. lol Suddenly I got this image of a crazy plan to free the princess. Did you ever see “The Princess Bride?” Yeah, that’s what I’m thinking. lol Except with no ghetto wedding with Dick as the groom and a priest who can’t pronounce his r’s to save his life (Mawwiage, anyone?). I can’t get over how cute this is! You have to hurry back, you know. All of us children are bouncing in our beds shouting for more!
I didn’t know what I had been missing!!! wtf?? I started reading your story yesterday and I totally LOVED IT!! You are one fine writer, but you already knew it right? see you!
Keep it coming B+T I just can’t get enough of it… I love it. =)
Simply beautiful. Thanks.
Ok, after chatting to you on social fanfic, curiosity killed the cat, i had to get in the deal…this is wonderful! It’s 6 stars from me- I’m keeping the rest in a safe place for your next installment… :)
hahaha… I’m not a crybaby *now pouting* oh gosh… this is so not me.. LOL. Anyway, yea, totally agree with BetteAndTinaForever, dress Bette up as a boy or Mrs. Doubtfire (is this how it spells) Speaking about Mothers’ day, hope u have fun and treat both ur gals good ;)
If fairytales do come true, then I know Bette will be able to get into the ball and get her womyn!!! They need to think of a plan, like when they went to the tennis club to find out if Lara was gay. That would be cool. I love that my girls have found out they love each other, awwww (love my Danish)…can’t wait for Bette to be able to see Tina all grown up…have fun at your mums…can’t wait for next chap’…cheers mate!!
You know, I’m in awe seing how beautifully you created those wonderful two stories of yours – in appearance so different of each other but in fact celebrating the same poetry of feelings, the same sensitivity, the same obvious devotion for this marvellous, true, sometimes shining and sometimes painful miraculous thing we all have inside of us : our heart… And here, in this particularly touching chapter of your charming tale, I cannot help but relating so much with the moved maid’s daughter. Because secret feelings that cannot be expressed are both a hidden gem and a curse… — Thank you so much for this daily joy of reading ! ^_^
Yesss its time for the plan and come back to save Tina and kick the stupid queen in the ass well if they can, maybe not. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Hey, this one was really and I mean really good. Wel goed dat deze Tina niet kijken naar seizoen 3 van the L Word, anders zou dat lieve snel vergeten zijn, denk je niet.