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Like A Fairytale, chpt 15
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Once upon a time on: Like A Fairytale
The gorgeous brunette, paused, inhaling sharply… It was hard for her to think back of that day she was about to tell the girls about… The day that had changed her life so completely and she relived in her dreams every night
I left her a note on her birthday… I hadn’t had a chance to see her for a couple of days and I ached for her presence… I asked her to meet me at our special place if she could find the time so I could give her my gift… I waited for her there… I don’t know how long I waited but it was instantly forgotten when I saw her face… She had missed me, I could see it in her eyes and somehow she tripped and I caught her… We had always been close… Her head on my lap when we talked near the lake, but this was a different closeness… I can still remeber every move she made and every twinkle in her eyes… I can still see her lips move as she said those 3 little words… She told me she loved me… I had never felt anything so intense before and was too preoccupied with her to notice the people who were watching us…
Tears were pouring over the brunettes cheek as she relived this moment, but she also felt the relieve of sharing her pain…
The queen had found us and a guard dragged me away from her before I could do anything… I can still she her face as I called out to her… I can still hear her cry out my name in pain… I never had a chance to tell her how much I loved her… How much still love her… How much I will always love her…
Hiding her face in her hands the lady’s maids daughter cried all the tears she felt she had left
So how did you end up here?
Alice asked, shyly, happy the brunette was finally opening up…
A light emerged from the forest, revealing a woman who freed me from the guard… She told me I would be among friend and that I was to return before Tina would turn 16… And next time I knew I was at the spot where Shane found me…
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Oh man, that was sad! My heart is broken for Tina and Maxine. It’s good that at least Maxine was there for Tina. Can’t wait see what Bette and the gangs plan are. Thanks for posting.
Damn that was sad. Okay so what’s the plan? Are the girls going to infiltrate the castle, kick ass and take names? Nah that’s a little over the top. How about getting a message to Bette’s mom to take Tina to the lake and meet up with Bette there? Maybe it’s time to get some much-needed sleep. Thirteen-hour days are really ghetto. :( Then when you wake up you can tell us more. =D
Hi! how are you? i hope you can find some time to rest! this chapter is so good and sad i almost cry at the end of the chapter! i hope Maxine will be the connection between Tina and Bette. The important things is the quality isn’t? and this has a lot of quality, thanks for give us a little of your time and post. take care
I’m liking it, it’s sooo sad. Poor Tina, she’s so heartbroken and Bette. I’m glad that Maxine is in the pic. she needs someone close to her and who better than her future mother-in-law…he, heh…Cheers mate!
perfect, i hope maxine will tell her about september and tina will find comfort in it
That was so sad,at least Maxine and Tina now have each other. They both love and miss Bette so much. waiting to see how they get Bette inside the castle. n thanks
Awwww *sob* :( ok.. I’m not a crybaby ;)
wow…i’ve gave u all of my thumb up that i can make. brilliant!! please post soon. Thanks!!
love this… so i hope shane is planning a come back… bette has to get there and soon… please continue
Love it…thank you.
Okay, now that you are studying to become a doctor I have a request. Can you take your new found skill and perform open heart surgery on Tina’s mom? Take out that old whithered heart and replace it with one that is full of love for her own daughter (and bring back Bette). Then next please, please do the same thing to IC so that in season 4 one of the ladies rides in on a flowing chariot and reclaims her lover. I know that is asking a lot but my heart would love it. Great post and I hope that the girls are able to get Bette back to her girl.
Oh man you made me cryyyy on this chapter, damn this is sad and hope Bette will come back soon. What a stupid queen. Anyway post soon please, thanks!
okej…that was sad, but kind of what my mood is…I hurt my knee real bad at work today soo… Thanks for just another great chapter, sad…but suberp as always…
Love this story too! No wait…is this a kissing story? After you get some rest can you come back tomorrow and read it again (post another chapter)? Please please please? Maybe Shane will have a plan by then!
Tina’s mums actions have left alot of people sad including herself. Maxine will be good for Tina and vice versa.
I love when a story can bring a tear to my eye =)I look forward to the next chapter.
LOL yeah, when I read the title I thought “this must be interesting” but since I have a lot of work to do I don’t have much time and it was when you posted chap 13 that I realized that you were the author!! I liked what you said “A true love” *sighs* so when will Bette landed on her horse and rescue Tina? This is so freaking romantic so far!
Ouch! I’m almost crying…please bring the happy times!
“I can still she her face as I called out to her… I can still hear her cry out my name in pain… “Memories are timeless. Precisely the only timeless part of our lives – with true feelings. Happy or painful, melancholic or tender, memories can never really be erased and, yes, years’ run didn’t change anything to such engraved images and emotions. That’s what your very touching and lovely fairytale illustrates so well : Bette and Tina growned far of each other for years now, from childhood to sweet sixteen (well, almost sixteen !), but inwardly time never passed, the essential part of them never changed. Time is powerless facing certain memories and feelings. And because it’s a fairytale, where reality is mixed with fantaisies, your story’s theme also make me think about Peter Ibbetson’s famous theme of hearts and minds’ timeless life, far of the real world, in this special now-man’s-land only lovers can reach. — You’re a precious author here, dear justloveB+T, please never leave us ! ^_^
I’m glad you posted this chapter i had a craving for this story! This was a really beautiful chapter. Damn I dislike that Queen! I’m going to get the tissues now, like the ones with the aloe vera in them coz i like those ones, i need to get rid of these cry baby tears! Cheers
Hey, this was so heartbreaking…again i have a knot in my stomage and tears in my eyes. Sorry voor mijn late comments, maar druk, druk, druk, ik heb direct doorgeklikt naar jouw verhaal, want dat lees ik gewoonlijk eerst. Bedankt voor de emotie.