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    Liquid

    Story written on December 16, 2005 by Madcapper.
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    Scenes 5 & 6 of the episode Liquid. S-5 Bette & Helena get into a fight. S-6 Alice and Dana are having an argument but they do kiss make up. (These scenes use a spoiler or two.)

    Bette:  Tina doesn’t need any favors from you.  [Very angry.]

    Helena: Why don’t you let her speak for herself?  Don’t you want her to be the strong, capable woman she showed herself to be when she was dating me?  Why do you need her to defer to you, this is a dream job for her, I wish you could see that.

    Bette:  My wish is for you to leave my house right now.  

    Bette leans in closer to Helena and Helena pushes her away.  Bette pushes her back, hard and Helena starts falling into the pool.  She grabs Bette and takes her into the pool with her.  Helena and Bette are wrestling in the pool, there’s pushing and pulling, they are fighting rather animalistic way, each woman trying to establish dominance until finally Bette realizes how absurd they are acting and starts laughing.

    Cut to Scene 6

    Scene 6

    Location:  Alice’s Apartment

    Location: Alice’s Apartment.  Alice and Dana are in the living room.  Dana is on the couch and Alice is pacing back and forth in front of “the chart.”

    Dana is wearing workout gear.  Alice is wearing one of her frilly/clingy shirts and jeans.

    Alice:  I don’t see why you have to be so friendly with Lara all the time.

    Dana:    Al, I asked for your permission and you said I didn’t need your permission What has gotten into you?

    Alice:    I think you have some unfinished business with Lara and I don’t like having it thrown in my face every time we go to The Planet.  I mean you flirted with her at Melvin’s memorial service for Pete’s sake.

    Dana:    I did not!  I was just being friendly.

    [Alice gives Dana an “oh really, do you think I was born yesterday look.”]

    Dana:    Al, you can’t continue to interrupt my training or wait for me at The Planet every day.  It’s too much. Even Tonya wasn’t that clingy.  [Dana smiles, trying to make a joke out of it.]

    Alice:  I can’t believe you are comparing me to that Stepford Wife, publicity seeking, social-climbing user.  Are you trying to hurt me?  [Alice has tears in her eyes.]

    Dana:      Alice, I’m not trying to hurt you.  What do I have to do convince you that you’re the one I’m crazy about?  

    Dana walks over to Alice and tries to kiss her, but she moves her head aside.  Dana puts hands on Alice’s face, leans in and kisses her and backs her against the chart.  Dana takes Alice’s arms and holds them above her head against the chart is kissing her neck, face and lips, at first Alice doesn’t kiss back, but eventually she gives in and kisses back with her eyes closed.

    We see the chart and it’s interconnected lines, Alice, Dana, Lara, Gabby, Tonyabut Dana’s activities are inadvertently rubbing Alice’s arms along the chart and some of the names are blocked by Alice.

    Dana continues to kiss down Alice’s neck and chest and then she unzips Alice’s pants.

    Alice:  “oh *****”

    Cut to Alice and Dana on the floor under the chart, several key names are now blurry and have practically been erased including the line between Alice and Dana.

    End Scene.

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    1. WooHoo! Helena and Bette in a pool…wet…and together.. :D Seriously though, I’ve really enjoyed your S3 so far. Excellent flow and dialogue! Please continue with your great writing :) Thanks!

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