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Liquid
Bette: Is anyone hurt?
Kit: No, thank god, we had closed for the night. Lara stayed late to finish taking inventory.
Bette: Then how did the fire start?
Kit: I’m not sure by the time I got here Lara and Dana were being interviewed by a couple of detectives.
Cut to:
Dana & Lara being interviewed separately by the Police.
Detective Ambrose: Tell me again Ms. Perkins if the Planet was closed why were you cooking in the kitchen, how did the fire start?
Lara: Well we were closed for the night, but I was still here doing inventory and my friend Dana came by and she was hungry
Detective Lewis: So Ms. Fairbanks you’re telling me this was an accident.
Dana: Absolutely, it wasn’t Lara’s fault, she was just showing me how to make a cheeseburger and I’m a klutz.
Cut to:
A TV news crew is filming on the scene.
Karen Akers: This is Karen Akers reporting live from West Hollywood where a fire has damaged the popular eatery and performance space The Planet. So far there are no injuries to report but two-suspects are being interviewed by the police, could this be a hate crime? We’ll bring you the latest developments. This is Karen Akers, KCBS Action News.
Come on [to cameramen] let’s see if we can get some new developments, I want to get another update on air. Let’s see if we can interview the owner she looks pretty distraught.
Just then we see a mini cooper drive up to the scene. Alice runs over to the ambulance but nobody is inside. She runs over to where Kit, David and Bette are standing.
Alice: Where’s Dana? Is she all right?
Bette: Alice nobody was injured.
The TV crew hustles over and tries to interview Kit.
K Akers: Ma’am can you tell me what happened here?
Kit: Who the ***** are you?
K Akers: I’m Karen Akers from KCBS Action News. How does it feel to lose your business?
Kit: [Sarcastically] I’ve never felt better in my life. How do you think it feels? I can’t believe they pay you to ask people this *****.
K Akers: Is it true that this is a hate crime?
Kit: Where did you hear that? If you scare away my customers with rumors of hate crimes I will sue your ***** so fast your next job will be in Idaho.
Cut to:
Alice going in search of Dana; Alice sees Dana rummaging in the bag in the back of her Forester she’s pulling out two t-shirts, she hands a Subaru t-shirt to Lara and puts one herself. Lara takes off a soot covered wife beater and puts the clean t-shirt on.
Dana: Don’t worry, I told the police you were teaching me how to cook, it was an accident and that it was my fault. [She wipes some soot off of Lara’s check with her thumb.]
Cut to:
Bette whipping out her phone we hear her telling Tina what happened.
Bette: Tina there was a fire at the Planetno nobody was hurtit looks like it was an accident
Fade Out.
End scene.
End episode.
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(12 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
I really like the way you write, in episode style that is. And I love the twists and turns in it. So basicaly I’m asking you to please continue with your next episode. You’ve got my attention! ;)
the same here. please do continue its different and fresh.
same here!!
I like this. It is a real creative way to explore next season. I can’t wait till Alice finds out why the fire really started…