Fan Fiction
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Live On
DOCTOR WILSON
There has been some complications, but we managed to save the baby.
(pause)
It’s a little girl, and she is very healthy.
Bette smiles. She turns back pale again.
BETTE
What about Tina?
The doctor squeezes Bette’s hand. Bette shivers.
DOCTOR WILSON
We cannot say anything yet.
(beat)
Tina lost a lot of blood.
(pause)
She is in a coma.
Kit rounds her arms on Bette’s, holding her from falling.
BETTE
(weak voice)
Can I see her?
DOCTOR WILSON
She is in the nursery. You can see her, yes.
Bette shakes her head in no.
BETTE
No, I want to see Tina. Where is she?
INT TINA’S ROOM – LATER
Bette enters the room quietly, followed by Kit. A pale Tina is laying pale in the bed. Bette walks up to her. She bends and kisses Tina’s lips very gently. She runs her fingers through her head, weeping softly.
BETTE
Hi baby.
She kneels next to the bed. She lays her head next to Tina’s, as she tenderly caresses her cheeks, her hands, her chin, and her lips. Kit pulls a chair next to the bed for her. She helps Bette up, and makes her sit on it.
KIT
Come on baby, sit here.
She takes Bette’s hand in hers, as she kneels next to her.
KIT (CONT’D)
Look at me.
Bette turns and looks down to Kit.
KIT (CONT’D)
Now, don’t you go imagine bad things, OK?
(pause)
Tina will be fine.
Bette smiles bitterly. Somebody KNOCKS at the door. ALICE shyly lets herself in, followed by
DANA, SHANE, and CARMEN.
Alice hugs Bette.
ALICE
It’s going to be OK baby.
She kisses Tina gently on her forehead. Dana, Shane, and Carmen do the same.
ALICE (CONT’D)
What happened?
Bette shakes her head.
BETTE
(sobbing)
I don’t know. I just don’t know.
Alice rubs her back. A white female NURSE enters the room.
THE NURSE#2
What is that all about? There should not be anybody but family in here.
SHANE
We are her family.
Kit gets up in the nurse’s face.
KIT
(pointing at Tina)
You see that woman over there? This is my baby sister’s wife. And, like it or not, we are her family.
(pause)
Now, you better get your little white ***** out of this room, before I kick it out myself.
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(41 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
I second Spaceu. This is really touching. I had tears standing in my eyes. Please keep them coming.
That was a touching story but why do I get the feeling that something bad is going to happen to Tina. Please post soon.
This is the second time I read it and it still touched my heart… good work and nice emotion there…keep up the good work!!
gosh now that was beautiful and so much better than the episode, awesome!