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Suddenly their moment was broken by the sound of a key being pushed into the lock. Tina’s eyes grew wide and she quickly shoved Bette round the corner behind the bookshelf. They stared at each other with fear in their eyes as the door was pushed open. There was a slight gap between a couple of the books and they peered through it, afraid of what they might see on the other side.
However the last thing that they were expecting to see was Helen and Nikki. The couple stood with their mouths hung open as they watched the scene unfold before them.
"I wanted to say thank you properly for today" Nikki said with a smile.
Helen arched her eyebrow and moved closer to the inmate, resting her hands on her hips "Oh really?"
"Yep" Nikki grinned.
The inmate leant in and placed a lingering kiss on her lovers lips. Maintaining eye contact, she moved her hands to the Scot’s shoulders and slid her jacket to the floor. They moved backwards towards the table and Helen stumbled for a second, her foot catching on the clothing on the floor. She looked down to free her heel and furrowed her brow at the sight of the extra top lying on the floor.
"What the…?"
"What?" Nikki asked.
Helen bent down and picked up the top, and both women looked at it in confusion. It was a moment before Nikki realised that she recognised the item.
It was a moment before Nikki realised that she recognised the item.
She turned round to face the room before calling out "Bette?"
Bette held her breath and closed her eyes, almost in a childlike manner. Silently she prayed for some kind of miraculous intervention in which Helen and Nikki would just disappear from the room. But realistically she knew that in these few moments, everything that she had come to rely on to get her through her time in prison would change for good.
"Bette?" Nikki called again.
Tina looked at her lover, fear plastered across her face.
"I love you" Bette mouthed.
The brunette inmate folded her arms across her chest in an attempt to conceal her bra-clad torso and stepped out from behind the bookshelf. She was met by a questioning stare and an extremely embarassed looking Helen.
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oh yes, u have out done yourself(smile) this was beautifully done..can’t say i didn’t missed the sexual connection but in time guess some other chapter(hint, hint)..but thx for this nice update again..now onto some pleasure hahaha
See, at least Nikki and Bette can talk to each other and so can Helen and Tina. Now, girls you need to be careful. Time for the lovin they all didn’t have time for.
Like how Rina and Helen handled this. At least they can talk to each other. Tina needs to look into an appeal for Bette. Bet Helen is looking into one for Nikki also. You wrote this so beautifully. You could feel the fear,yet the love the ladies has for each other. thanks
you really put some thought into their conversation, nicely done. PPS
Way to be a stand up woman Helen! At least they can all keep seeing each other as long as neither couple sees the other. PWYC
I am just as relieved as the four women. They all have someone to talk to now. Maybe Tina can help clear Bette from her so called crimes.
Yeah, BB! Well done. This story is so interesting to read. As per usual I will look forward to the next post – fully understanding the time constraints that have now entered your life.
this is perfect situation, while both Nikki and Bette are in prison, they at least have someone to talk to…after they are both free, Helen and Tina can quit and all be happy, including us :)
Well… Uhm… I have my ways. Hehe! FF’s are an addiction for me, I think. So I should have my daily dose. And when I see your story, it’s the first one I read. I just love it! PPS.
Glad Tina not in trouble and make a friend with Helen. Ok now let see what they talk to their girlfriends lol. Please post more, thanks!
Brilliantly written BBaby! I’m so glad Helen wasnt a hypocrite!..and liked that Nikki and Bette couldn’t stop laughing at the way they got caught – I could just picture Nicki and Bette smirking in admiration of each other because they both bagged gorgeous girls lol!.The last line?.. Mmm..Does that mean we are going to see a jealous Bette? (I hope so -Jealous Bette is funny!) PPVS x
Hey BabaBeals, You make me smile so much with this fabulous fan fiction. The mix between humor and pathos is wonderful. I just loved how Bette and Nikki managed to make it back to the cell before lfalling about laughing. Your imagery just tickled me. The tension between Helen and Tina was palpable until they broken the ice, admitted the newness of their relationships and the intensity that this brought. Sweet, to have them bonding over this intimate discussion. Now I really can’t wait to find out how Nikki’s appeal goes and what Tina finds out about Bette’s crime. Plently more ahead. Thank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.
Now they all have a friend to talk to. I hope Tina starts digging in to Bette’s case and gets her out of there. pps
Another amazing chapter as ever. I’m enjoying reading this story so much, so thank you for creating it. PPS.