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Lost & Found, Ch 10
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BETTE- “It’s ok…you can go Lia…I’ll be fine. I won’t be much longer anyway, but no point in you guys waiting.”
EVANGELINE- “No, I stay…” (She looks at the rest of them…) “Okay…why you wait…go! We see you…go!” (They all say goodbye and congratulate Bette. With a few minutes, the gallery was almost empty and the two women were just clearing things up a bit. Shannon, the hot number who is a shrewd player and who was at the Planet in Chapter 2 hitting on Tina as soon as she saw her, was talking to an art critic while Bette and Lia carried on.) “Superb job mon ami. I think everything was just great.”
BETTE- “Thank you; that means a lot.” (The two start chatting as they work.)
EVANGELINE- (At some point Lia, while keeping an eye on Shannon, comments to Bette…) “It’s a little late for new visitors…maybe she lost…”
BETTE- “Mmm?”
EVANGELINE- “But looks like our friend shedevil Shannon is pretty fast…”
BETTE- “What do you mean? She’s all over the art critic again?”
EVANGELINE- “No, she made…what you call it? BLine to the new pretty visitor.”
BETTE- “What?” (Bette looks up and towards the entrance…she sees Tina and Shannon intercepting her…) “Tina?” (Lia looks at Bette and the look in her eyes…Bette’s almost frozen. She recalls hearing Alice and Shane speak about this “Tina” and realizes her old friend’s look is not just a casual gaze…she moves into action…Lia heads for the shedevil…)
SHANNON- “Well we meet again…”
TINA- “Oh…hi…I…I’m just looking for someone…”
SHANNON- “Well no worries my dear, I’m here…at your service…”
EVANGELINE- “Shannon! Mon dieu!” (Shannon and Tina look at the unforeseen visitor in some confusion…) “You didn’t finish your so interesting discussion with me…”
SHANNON- “What? I…”
EVANGELINE- “The Monet factor…you must explain this before you go! And hurry up because it’s late and I have plans…”
SHANNON- “Oh but Dr. Bertrandeisen …”
EVANGELINE- “No no no…I insist…after all, you were trying so desperately to get an audience with me this evening to share your ‘thoughts’…I can’t let you go without at least letting you finish the brilliant theories you expounding on earlier…”
SHANNON- “But I…”
EVANGELINE- (She ignores her and addresses Tina…) “Miss…” (She reaches out her hand…)
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see, old women are great and tina just need to wake up and open her eyes and look at bette…and please hook aunt B with someone, she’s cool too
No bette, no. Turn back towards the light! LOL Sometimes our girl can be so blind and stubborn. thanks for updating TM, this really is one of my favorites and I’m always excited to see a new post from you. Keep em coming, this story is really heating up!
Great post T, but Tina needs to relax and let nature take it course. I feel for poor Bette with these new emotions and Tina with her struggling emotions, but I want these two to take even a little step to move forward. Of course, Bette can’t do that if Tina keeps trying to run.
Good chapter and now B&T need to talk!
how excruciating Bette and Tina both are…u betta get some action going on between them because Tina’s gonna run b4 Bette gets a chance, mon ami….pps
OMG that damn doorbell!!!!!! T, you had me so captured, so wanting, so hoping that maybe JUST maybe…and then !!!!DING DONG! GRRRRR. Your descriptive writing is priceless. I so felt I was there, and wanted to reach for Tina as she grabbed the back of her neck to gain some composure. She was so out of her element, and who could blame her right? Porter charm. Thanks for such a lengthy chapter. I’m not sure if the readers understand that the story generally posts at about 3 posted pages for every 10 that are actually written. Awesome effort, and please post when you can….sooner than later would be nice.
Well, well well Merlin another great chapter and i got 7 pages now that’s more like it. Why is tina taking so long to tell bette how she feels, if the feeling is there why can’t she just tell her, love is a great thing and it should be shouted from the tallest building / mountain!!!! You kept me waiting to long for that chapter and hopefully you don’t keep me waiting too long for the next one! Merlin keep waving that magical wand, every single page is pure magic!!!!Your welcome to comment no.2.rau and chicki beat me to it, i would like to be first to comment at one stage – shouldn’t u girls be sleeping
Ohhh, that was just diabolical timing. Just as they were possibly gonna get somewhere, too. Que sera, sera, though. So I’ll wait it out. Lovely update, Merlin. Thanks
Another great update! I hope that there´ll be something to interrupt between B+T soon, and that they won´t be interrupted then. Thanks for the great story!
This was a fantastic update…the writing was superb.
Merde! I hate when my shit gets disturbed. Actually, I think it’s Tina who is disturbed. And I don’t think it’s because of Dr. B. Hey! maybe you should hook up Dr. B with Aunt B.