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Lost & Found, Ch 9
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BETTE- “Too late…I’m lost to thoughts of you already.” (She starts walking towards her car and continues the conversation with herself and the four winds…) “Man I hope you’re straight…a quick though painful end for my heart to bear. If you’re not, my little heart is in for quite a ride…lost and found, Lady Liberty’s blonde. Her ‘beloved’? New York? Odd blonde…very odd and potentially straight blonde. Porter, you need help!”
(Shane knocks on the door. Finally it opens. A strange woman answers it. Shane looks at her, kind of perplexed.)
SHANE- “Hi. I hope I’m not interrupting…I’m looking for Justine.”
EVANGELINE- (She looks at Shane carefully…and then smiles…) “Hallo, I am pleased to meet you Miss…?”
SHANE- “Shane…” (She extends her hand and they shake. Lia continues to gaze at her.) “Can I…may I come in? Is she here?”
EVANGELINE- “Oh yes, yes my dear, come in…come in…” (Shane walks in and soon sees Justine.)
JUSTINE- (All smiles…) “Hey Shane!”
SHANE- “Hey there. I just thought I’d drop by and make sure you’re all ok for tomorrow. Still coming with me?”
JUSTINE- “Of course…” (She realizes there’s been a bit of change in her plans…) “Oh but…well Lia…I mean…Evangenline…Oh…Shane, sorry…uhmm…may I introduce Dr. Evangeline Bertrandeisen.”
SHANE- “Ohhh…hi there…I’m very pleased to meet you…again…” (Shane finds the older woman alluring and charming, but she feels a protective feeling towards Justine and partly just wants to interrogate the feisty little woman from Paris.) “This is a surprise. I didn’t realize you would be visiting.”
JUSTINE- “Yes, I was pretty surprised too…isn’t it wonderful Shane? I had no idea I’d get to see her.”
SHANE- “Yeah, wonderful…so, you just decided to drop in Doctor?”
EVANGELINE- “Yes, my plans permitted a detour so here I am! In the big city!”
SHANE- “You have business in LA or is this trip for pleasure?” (Shane is smiling but Evangeline senses an odd vibe…)
EVANGELINE- “Well, apart from customs and immigration, I usually don’t divulge the nature of my plans to just anyone, but let us say it is a bit of both…”
SHANE- “Oh, I didn’t mean to pry.”
EVANGELINE- “Mmmm. And who are you Ms. Shane? A friend of my Justine?”
SHANE- “Your Justine?” (She smiles uncomfortably…) “Oh…yes…yes…a good friend.”
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Merl this was an awesome update! Something about this line just popped out from the page —- “Bette, when you are engaged in the search of life you can never be lost…you seek and you will find…your heart, your soul, your life. When you’ve stopped looking, when you sit there and move nowhere, when you look around and just let life find you…then, you are lost…” I think if there is one small little “life lesson” if you will, it is just a profound piece right there. Thank you for that lovely shout out. I am very much aware at how meaningful the personal shout outs and opening author’s notes are to the readers. I’ll warn ya though, once you start them, they come to be expected!!!! LOL! Thanks so much for the update Merl, post soon won’t you??? ;-))
Ah crap, I hate when that happens. That “I love you, you like me” thing. But it probably is more rare that the feeling is mutual. It take it that with B & T they will eventually discover the feeling IS mutual.
love the dialog but what “recalcitrant” means? i was too lazy to check my dictionary…and don’t worry, my next chapter is coming and it’s hot and sexy…i think LOL
“Man I hope you’re straight…a quick though painful end for my heart to bear…” – number of times I’ve felt this = countless!thanks for the quick update!
Absolutely love this story. I liked shane being protective of Justine and asserting herself when she corrected the pronunciation of her name, loved it. and, well, your slow dance with B & T is enthralling. you could feel Tina just tripping over every word and Bette having small heart attacks at the thought of what Tina really meant! Please post soon, I’m hooked and I need my fix.
So gooooood to read..>Thank you, very much!
So Bette already knows that feeling of loving someone and they not loving you. So Tina and Bette do share something, the case loving someone who does not love them. I think this time that situation will not be an issue. This story is probably closer to a real life situation than most of the stories. You get the real feeling that they are scared to get to know the other. Tina’s feelings sound so real to me (maybe because I have been there).
THIS IS SO GREAT!
I´m glad Justine has Shane as a friend and that S hopefully looks out for her a bit. I think Tina should go to the gala and maybe B+T will realize that they already found each other, they just don´t know it yet. And don´t worry I will keep on reading, this story is too good to miss.
Merlin if i knew the answer, i would tell you. There’s a reason that your the writer and i’m the reader. Now 4 pages where getting somewhere. That was great as aways. I think tina needs to listen to her gut feeling and not with your head, she knows she likes bette, why not take the chance. Love is a fantastic feeling and let the girls find it the merlin way.Thank you just don’t keep me waiting to long
Hey there, i forgot to mention, i’ll take my hat off to anyone that attempts to write a story and for that i thank you!!!!!!!!! thank you
T, it’s not how many words you use, it how they are conveyed. You my dear do an amazing job and I can’t get enough of this story. Thanks for the update.