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Love and Pride – chapter five
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“It is but I don’t want you to “
Helena looked at her with surprise
“You don’t “
“No “
“Why ? “
“Because I want to get to know you Helena “
“Well I know a great way to get to know a woman “
“I bet you do “
Tina was saved by the Eagles — she leapt up away from the clutches of Helena. Helena smiled — Tina’s resolve was definitely cracking — a few more glasses of wine and she would be in her arms and they would be kissing.
Tina picked a Led Zeppelin LP — it was the most unromantic thing that she could find.
“Oh come on Tina -put Marvin Gaye on “
“I think not “
Helena got up and strolled across to Tina.
“Do I have to make you Tina “
“Please don’t “
Helena rested her hand on Tina’s arm and slowly moved it up to her neck.
“I want you Tina “ she whispered
“Please take your hand off me Helena “
Helena rested her other hand on Tina’s waist.
“And you want me “
Tina’s fear had hit its peak — she had to get out of this house. Helena squeezed Tina’s waist — Tina moved to push her out of the way but Helena blocked her.
In one movement Tina took Helena’s arm and flicked her over so she was sitting on her ass. Helena had no idea how the hell that had happened
“How ? “
“Judo – I have to go “
“But “
“I like you but I’m not ready for it Helena. I’m freaking scared. I’m a virgin — I cannot deal with this .Thank you for the meal “
Tina ran out into the night and started to cry. She had made an idiot of herself. She collapsed on the steps leading down from the front door.
She had made an idiot of herself and of Helena. Helena would never forgive her. She would tell Shane and Alice and she would become a laughing stock.
Every dyke on campus would find out what a child she was. They would laugh at her for not being grown up enough to take a lover to bed.
She got up – she didn’t know where to go but she needed to clear her head and needed to find out what the hell was happening to her. She started crying again – the tears shaking her body.
She was just searching for a tissue when she heard a dark voice
“Are you alright ? “
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tease, tease tease, you are really good at that!!!!!!!!!!but we luv it!!!!!!!
Yeah you’re definitely a tease :o)) For an experienced girl, Helena isn’t very good at reading other females signals. And NO Ally not okay about posting Saturday – post today!!!! (Hansen sitting in a corner and pouting!!!!) LOL. Great post.
Wow, you really get to the emotions
It’s Bette!!!! great chapter. Helena is like a dude in this one.
Please GOD, let it be Bette!!!… Oh, who am I kidding?… Please Ally, let it be Bette!!! Yep, that’s it Ally, that’s where you got me!… On my knees, pleading you, PLEADING YOU, to let it be Bette!!! You’ve got the power, woman! Please use it wisely! Don’t let the dark side get you! ;) Okay, I loooove this story! You want proof? … Well, I actually don’t mind waiting for L Wing a bit more if it means that you keep posting on L&P! Huh! What does that tell you??? … That’s it really. You’ve got the power and I’m just your humble and faithful reader! *bowing* Thanks, Master!… Oups, sorry, “Master” is for Jobadge! Can’t do that to her! How about… Madam president?
We know its Bette. Your such a tease. Now we have to wait for that first look into each others eyes. Love L-Wing, but come on don’t leave us hanging here.
OH wow I see how your setting this up. Nice. Here I thought Helena would be torn I didn’t realize she would be angry at Tina for making a fool of you. Nice turn Ally really nic.
Ah, come on Ally – that was plain teasing! Was hoping you’d post before Grey’s Anatomy comes on – and here you are – thanks for the update.
It’s probably Bette, although Shane has a dark voice too. Helena is such a cow! And I can’t believe I called someone a cow.
Please let it be Bette. They need to meet because both are so new to their feelings and it would be nice if they could learn together. Besides I love Bette and Tina.
Hey girl, you really know how to tease us. Please update again soon! Thank you. :D
I can’t believe you are leaving us here!!!!!! Totally hooked on this story! Thanks Ally!
Nooooooo… don’t you stop there!!! *run away crying*
Oh finally, they meet!!! I hope your mood continues to write THIS story!
Then she looks into the face of the dark voice and she melts into the eyes of the woman of her dreams. Please post soon Love this story really love it
Damn, that Helena’s a smooth operator! Talk about “kiss the girls and make them cry”. She’s a veritable Georgie Porgie. Well, she may have more experience with women than either Bette or Tina, but she still has a lot to learn. Good thing she’s in school. Say, how did you guys get fleece years ahead of us? Maggie Thatcher had a secret deal with the synthetic fibre (I spelled it all funny for you) cartel? Fuck, we needed it here, where snow is a common event north of the Mason-Dixon line! C’mon Ally, we need THE MEETING. Don’t leave us dangling until Saturday.
You give us drama in your other stories and now you tease us. This is not fair Ally not fair at all. As to whether that “dark voice” belongs to Bette or not–well that can go either way with you writing it. I can’t wait for the next chapter—the anticipation is killing me, but I love it.
Back the heck up woman!!! Helena is about as smooth and cunning as a…as a bull…as Marina with Robin…yikes! Sheesh, I thought we were gonna need to call the cops, but Tina knows judo!!! This is good. Please hurry back.
This story is the best. Helena is acting like a buffoon. What happened to her smooth moves? Of course, it has to be like this b/c Bette is also a rookie in this area. They’re just the right speed for each other. I’ll wait for L Wing for more of this story.
at last they meet, thank the goddesses that Hel overplayed her hand or her opportunity, let the virgins fall for each other and soon Ally, PPS and looking forward to your other stories when you can….
Ally it doesn’t matter to me which story you post, all that does matter is that you do. And I thank you for that! I love your writing and your stories and it’s amazing that you have so many going all at the same time! Bette has been imagining breasts huh? That’s too funny, and it’s a real good clue to figure out what your sexual preference is! LOL!! I hope that is Bette coming home to find Tina in need of some holding! Helena was really behaving badly tonight – she’s lucky she didn’t get judo chopped by Tina! You’re great Ally! Thank you! Can’t wait for your next post!
UGH!! Y must you TEASE us like this!!!!Post NOW or tomorrow.PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!
please, let it be bette
oh please let it be Bette…you are such a tease!!!!!!!!
agree with hansen. saturday is not okay…just post soon. anything. anything. i’ll read any of your stories. if i don’t see your next post soon, i’ll need to reach out for my comfort food, ice cream…
Helena is not very smooth with her advances. You are a tease. thanks
TEASE!ALLY
I’m liking your twist on our girls in this story – as usual you are so creative just take the main ingredients Bette and Tina and shake them up then shack them up. Thanks for writing such fun and interesting stories.
I agree with everyone’s comments about Helena. If she knew the finer art of seduction Tine would have been hers but instead she’s “wham, bam, thank you mam”. And now she is about to get insult added to injury.. Great story and I am not even a Tibette fan.
“A dark voice”? That’s it? How can you stop right here? No, please don’t. My dearest Ally, please give us the next chapter soon, please~~
ally, that better be Bette!
tease indeed! but can you be a nice tease and let it be Bette? :D Let’s get the snowball rolling!!!
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr longer
no not really, help me get away from this sexual monster, oh hello i’m tina you are? bette, pleasure to meet you bette……….. and the rest is up to you ally.Thanks
Ahh man you such a tease my friend and please let them meet and hope that is Bette. Please post soon, thanks!
If Helena would have backed off a bit…I could see Tina being receptive. Now I bet when she meets Bette Bette will be smoother…since Helena’s pride was damaged…I think this will come between Bette & Helena’s close relationship. Keep posting….
so right when it starts to get really good you end the chapter. Big tease! So that has got be Bette and when Tina’s eyes meet her i think fireworks will be in play. I can’t wait to see how you develop this story. You’ve written the relationship b/w Bette and Helena so wel that i really don’t want to see anything come b/w them. And i can’t wait for an update on the L Wing this weekend.
here we go!!!
Hey Ally, In is only because your writing is so good that people are demanding more of it. LWing and Long&WindingRoad are both classics. I will wait for them to reappear as this drama is good enough to reread and reread over and over again. You are torturing us all by keeping Bette and Tina apart however I do hope that the dark voice belongs to Bette however knowing your twisted nature it could be Alice or Shane. Bette final realization was perfect even if she is now contemplating all the difficulties rather than focussing on the benefits of finding knowing yourself and what you want. This is a fabulous fan fiction so please continue quickly. Many thanks for this inticing and inventive journey. Your Loyal Fan.
Such a tease…
Mmmm…a dark voice, well it must be Bette. How comes Helena being so nice and friendly towards Bette can be such a jackass with Tina. Well, maybe you don’t like Helena that much ;), probably you have to watch some more of the S3 episodes, she changed a lot you now. But really that’s up to you. Another great chapter and I’m looking forward to the next one. Thanks for sharing.
Oh Ally! You are so bad.. how could u tease us like this ;-) Hope at last the meeting is about to take place… pls post soooon….