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Love and Pride chapter Four
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Helena looked at her watch – Bette’s race began in five minutes. She waited a few more minutes but she looked back and saw Bette stretching her thighs -she needed to have a few final words with her.
“I’ll see you later “ she said looking back at Lara who was looking at the stopwatch in her hand
“Yeah – see you around Helena “
Helena had taken about seven steps away when she heard Lara shout
“Come on Tina — come on “
She spun back – Tina was in a bunch of four other young women – she was not in the lead but was racing hard for second place. She felt her heart leap into her mouth as she willed the blonde on. Tina put on a sprint and comfortably came second. Yes — that had to be an omen. She stepped back further so Tina wouldn’t see her.
“Helena “ Bette called
Helena crossed to Bette who looked terrible
“I wish you wouldn’t do this race “
“I’ll be fine – look – the guy over there in the grey tracksuit “
Helena turned
“That’s Colin “
Helena didn’t think that Bette exactly blushed with girlish glee when she pointed him out. She decided that she needed a small word in his ear – like that she would kill him if he hurt Bette.
“How are you feeling ? “
“Haven’t thrown up in ten minutes “
“Yeah — that’s real progress “
“Wish me luck Helena “
Bette suddenly sounded young and very vulnerable. Helena touched Bette’s face
“I love you sis and I know that you are going to whoop the asses of all these scrawny Brits. They are against a Porter-Peabody — they may as well give up now “
Bette laughed “one of these days I hope I am as arrogant as you”
“You will be — I am, Peggy is and so is Melvin — you are just resisting the inevitable “
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brilliant , as usual!
What fun!
Yeah, I’m with Lament on this one. I think going out with someone you know you don’t really fancy only for the sake of being with someone is understandable but still a wrong choice, and can lead to complicated consequences… If you see what I mean…! Of course I’m biaised, but still. Could B&T meet before their dates puh-leaase??? That would give them both a lot to think about during their evening. I trust you’ll lead things for the best my dearest writer, but I’m getting impatient here, as always when it comes to B&T… But thanks Ally!
haha, let me guess. Bette will meet Tina before she goes out on a date, leaving both unsettled for their night. Bang, Helena won’t have Tina in bed before Saturday.Bette will know her sexuality.
That determined Bette did indeed whoop them all. Good of her not to whoops on them during the race with that stomach bug, that would have been both unseemly and unsporting. Helena’s cooking for Tina? “Bette, would you mind answering the door? I’ve got my hands full.” could be the start of oh, so many things. Including regret for Helena.
This is gonna be a slow one isn’t it. But I so can’t wait until Tina and Bette meet, then all their questions will be answered.
LOL Tina sure is a teenager, she doesn’t really know what she wants and have a change of heart about Helena, because she is lonely. Have we not all been there :o)) I’m really looking forward to see your B&T plan LOL. Post L-wing soon please….
can’t wait for the 2 innocents B & T to meet, I guess they’ll start talking about running and Helena who seems like a very nice step-sister…will she be as nice when the girlz get 2gether or will Bette hold off getting with Tina out of respect for her sister…make someone else come along to attract Helena…PPS
good good Bette is a fighter! i want to know how B&T will meet and i am so sorry for Helena cause if Bette decide that she wants Tina she will have her before Helena!
when is bette and tina going to meet? can’t wait…they’d better meet soon or i will die waiting
“God help anyone who tried to stop Bette Porter getting exactly what she wanted ” Hit the nail on the head there helena! Nice anvil Ally! Running is a great ice-breaker (1st and 2nd place finishers) wonder if its gonna be that competitive push-pull thing or the supportive teammate thing- either could be really interesting – the best relationships combine chemistry and mutual interests- I can’t wait for all the tension at dinner…love this story..please post soon!!
Excellent storytelling. One of the things that you and the other excellent authors on this site is the ability to write different genres of stories. This one has the angst and lightheartedness of college days and first sexual experiences.
Ally, this is just a really fun story so far, but knowing you I am sure we are in for some drama at some point. I just wonder what will happen when Bette and Tina finally meet. Now don’t forget your other two stories. I just can’t believe you have three stories going on at once, but that just shows what a talented writer you are my friend.
I cannot wait for Tina and Bette to meet. I want to see how the sparks fly!!!
ALLY-ALLY-ALLY! this is going to be REALLY ONE, but it will be worth the wait…..tibette forever….
I’m now worried Bette will be throwing up when it comes time for her first time with Tina or who over.I still believe sisterly love will allow Helena to step aside.
I can’t wait till Tina and Bette come fact to face. I wonder if both will feel that connection immediately and will those fire works be seen by others, namely Helena?
Good chapter and please let B&T meet!!!!!!
I can’t wait for the moment that Bette and Tina meet each other. It must be sparkling :)
Tina WTF. This is why no one could pay me to go back and relive my younger years because I remember wanting to go out with someone just for the sake of going out. Sex wasn’t factored in at all though. So yeah I had some dumb notions about relationships and all that and if I had to do that all over again I’d probably poke my eye out. Helena better not hurt Tina or Bette will kick Helena’s ass.
can’t wait to see how t&b meet. oh and can you please post the next chapter lwing soon? i so miss the story
I can’t wait for the date. Sparks are sure to fly :).
Great chapter again, thanks.
Well well. This is getting quite interesting. Can’t wait for B & T to meet.