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Love and Pride chapter three
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The only thing that softened moving from the apartment she had shared with her father was that Peggy’s place had a huge pool.
For six months I had been like living in Dante’s version of hell. Helena never spoke to Melvin which was okay because he never spoke to her. The thawing of two separate families into one had come from Peggy and Bette.
One night Peggy — after too many rum punches had told Bette how much she loved Melvin and how life with Bette’s mother had been almost impossible for him.
Peggy had spoken of Melvin in terms that only Bette knew — that he had a dry sense of humour, that he loved basketball and there did not exist a bowl of chilli he would not eat.
So Peggy and Bette had made friends. Helena had started the friendship between the two step-sisters — she had asked to go running with Bette.
The run ended when Helena twisted her ankle but the two had sat in a park in Boston and became friends. From that day they had become close – there was never a question that they would not go to University together. The fact that they were going together was the reason Peggy and Melvin had agreed to them going to England.
Helena toyed with her salad
“There is something special about Tina “
“How so ? “
“She is just so gentle. She isn’t loud or brash or arrogant – she is special — and her eyes — God Bette she has these hazel eyes “
“Good eh ? “
“Good isn’t a strong enough word — her eyes are just haunting “
“So this isn’t one of your notches on the bed post jobs ? “
“No way. If she agrees to go out with me I will treat her very well Bette. “
“So Amy was a consolation prize ? “
“Amy was a mistake — I am sorry for what she said to you “
“Don’t worry Hel — we don’t look like sisters “
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I do like your story and look forward to the conflict ahead. I do think the sisterhood will survive the conflict. One thing can be said about the Tibetters, you all are very one dimensional. Call any two characters, no matter how different they are from the original, Bette and Tina and you are sold. Why not have Bette explore her sexuality. This character is so asexual. She’s in college and doesn’t know if she likes boys or girls? What happened to her teenage raging hormones? Why is she so supressed? Please don’t take me wrong. I really like this story and look forward to the next post.
awesome
So when do Bette and Tina run into each other? Helena will not be too happy if those two hook up. Who am I kidding when those two hook up.
B&H sisters, huh? Interesting and believable. There is definitely no Belena/Helebette here.
oh no, not a Colin with Bette!!! hurry up and post I want to see what happens next…
Good chapter and I agree with pattifloatn and let see what’s next, thanks!
Bette’s got herself a date…..YES!
so bette thinks she’s bi in this story huh? well, I can’t wait to see how far things go with Colin. Bette and a guy, hmmm I think it might be a fan fic first. can’t wait to see what tricks you have up your sleeve ally.
that was suppose to be Tina….Tian was a character in another story I was thinking about…lol
Helena said nothing will come between them…I beg to differ because when Tian and Bette see one another…LET THE GAMES BEGIN! We’ll see how strong that bond is.
I’ve never seen that movie…might have to catch that.
” Breakfast Club just out on video… ” (1985?) Woo, Tina, and sisters Helena & Bette back in the oldendays – nice twists, Ally!
OOOOOOOOOOOO CONTINUE SOON……IM WAITIN PATIENTLY………WITH NO PATIENCE……LMAO……..I LOVE ALLLL OF YOUR FICS…..HOW YOU KEEP EM ALL GOIN, I’LL NEVER KNOW……BUT SOMEHOW YOU DO…….AND SHEESSHHH, I AM SOOOO GLAD……..POST SOON……..
I can’t wait for Bette and Tina to meet. Then the fireworks should begin ! Bette’s so damn loyal, she will probably back off so Helena can move in…but we all know in the end, B & T will reign !! LOL! PPS. I’m loving this story.
Thanks for the great story. I’m anticipating the meeting between Bette and Tina. Looking forward to the next post.
OMFG, say it isn’t so. Ally, please don’t have Bette get with Colin cause that would be so wrong. I can see them as friends but please nothing else. You know you are so cunning that maybe that is what you want us to think you are going to do. Hell the way your mind works anything is possible. So I will just say that I trust you with our TiBette hearts and have faith in you that you will not betray them. You are one fantastic and brilliant author my dear friend and you will always have my support.
I am so loving this story! I love relationship between Bette and Helena!
All that chilli? It must be love! Probably doesn’t hurt that Peggy & Melvin have a mansion and Bette & Helena have an entire house. Ay caramba! Sometimes a little space and a lot of fresh air can benefit a relationship. I like Frankie, I hope she soon learns that winning the kind of games she played last night often leads to losing. Lost several colleagues jsut that way at dear old Ohio U., a party school of note on this side of the Atlantic. However, our beers were cold and consistantly lagers. Had to move to NY to learn what a pilsner was. Why do I suspect that Anthony Michael Hall was never seriously in the running? Time has helped him some, but at that stage he was a small fry that begged for being thrown back. I don’t wish Colin ill, but when are you going to introduce Bette to Tina?
well, i know it’s B&T story but knowing you and the way you can really twist things…bad that friendship between helena and bette will be ruined because of tina but i hope helena will get over it…when is bette gonna meet tina? can’t wait
lol@funnyone. I wouldn’t kiss any of the people in that movie. Ally Sheedy would get a kiss if she wasn’t so nasty in the movie.
The bond between Bette and Helena is really great and sweet – I hope it can survive Tina Kennard!!!! I’m sure you’ll keep us waiting for the first B&T meeting, you’re such a tease LOL. Great post and great story.
It’s starting….and it’s going to get nasty, or it could get that way..2 sisters fighter over another girl…another great story and chapter…we are hooked on you for life Ally…thanks!
Great chapter Ally! So when is Bette going to meet Tina. Can’t wait … :-)
OH BOY!!!!! This story is going to be a fun read. When Bette see Tina it will be love at frist sight. But I think she will stay away because af Helena. Thank you ALLY
Gteat chapter. Tina is going to be running At the race with her being sporty, and they lock eyes across the finishing line, Ohhhh well one can dream. Just hope that Helena is not too upset when Bette & Tina get together. Look forward to the L WING
Well, just finished reading all three chapters of you new story and placed my comments on all of them. Girl, this rocks, I’m already addicted to it, that’s nothing new to me, because I’m addicted to all your stories. Sure hope Bette realises that she’s not bi before she meets Tina, don’t like her foolin’ around with that guy. Helena really is having the hots for Tina, hope that this will be no problem when Bette & Tina meet. I’m now anxiously awaiting your posts for three stories.
Ally, I’m pouting right now… Please don’t have Tina be a source of conflict between Bette and Helena, that would put a huge shadow on B&T relasionship. You kinda hinted that and I’m scared now… And please have Bette realise she’s not into guys really soon, that thought kinda freaks me out! For some reason, it’s okay with me for Tina to have a past with men, but it’s just NOT right for Bette… Does that make sense? I trust you my dear fantastic writer :P but please post soon and reassure me… *pleading eyes*
wow ally! another great addiction to add to your stories…. i cant wait for another chapter… i bet tina can changed bette mind about being bi! see ya on tuesday dear,and thank you!